Red Alert Makes Me Rise to the End

I have read Chapter 48 so far and found that there are many problems, unreasonable, self-contradictory, incoherent and so on. For example, take Huang Lan's camp. When the protagonist's soldiers were mobilized for a period of time, the soldiers mentioned vegetables. Then the captain of the guard told him that only the leader of their base was eligible to eat vegetables, and the others had no share at all. Then he said that the second floor below the base was occupied by people with status, and the third floor was occupied by leaders and some big shots. After the female leader finally appeared, a series of descriptions showed that the leader was essentially a vase. The female leader is the name given to the captains of the four guard teams, who are all uncles and elder brothers. These guard captains and the following guard members are all former members of the female leader's father. The female leader's ability to become the leader depends entirely on the support of the four of them. And the female leader doesn't have much skill at all. If this is the case, then the power of these four guard captains should not be afraid of the leader at all. Judging from the names and behavior of the female leader, they are also relatively close to each other. Even if the vegetables in the camp are scarce, the leader cannot enjoy them all by himself, and the four guard captains are not even qualified to taste them. This is an unreasonable place. The guard captain who guarded the gate before said that the big shots living below, in fact, except for the leader and the four guard captains, Huang Lan base did not see any other high-level or powerful people at all. Even the base was almost taken over by a fox hunting group, and no so-called big shot showed up. This is a mismatched place. There is also the previous discussion about the female leader by the protagonist, and the analysis shows that the female leader is a strong and capable person. As a result, the last description of the powerful and powerful female leader completely contradicts the previous description. She is a vase who knows nothing, has a low IQ, and is also a nymphomaniac. When the Fox Hunting Group and Huang Lan Camp were facing each other, Huang Lan Camp was at a disadvantage. This was an obvious fact. Then, in order to help relieve the siege, the protagonist's mobilization army attacked the Huanglan base, destroyed the guards who rebelled and took refuge in the Fox Hunting Group, and then began to support the female leader and the others. As a result, the leader of the mobilization troops sent by the protagonist to Huang Lan's camp told the female leader that their reinforcements were coming. Just let the female leader feel free to fight with the fox hunting group. As a result, the female leader really believed in his evil deeds and didn't use any brain at all. After the Red Police Army arrived, she surrounded them from inside and outside and easily annihilated the fox hunting group, but directly ordered the fight to begin. As a result, he was beaten directly by the fox hunting group and almost wiped out. The female leader almost died on the spot, but the leader of the mobilization soldiers who was sent to Huang Lan's camp to do business by the protagonist jumped on the female leader in desperation and saved her life. Then you started to become a nymphomaniac and fell in love with the leader of the conscripts. Don't you remember that the leader of the conscripts encouraged you to start a fight and almost wiped out the group? Are you falling in love with him? That's it? That's it? What about the leader? In the end, the Red Police Army arrived belatedly and easily defeated the fox hunting group. So why are your guards at Huang Lan camp fighting with the hunting group? Is it okay to continue to stand in a stalemate and wait for support? This camp of brains should have been extinct long ago if they had to sacrifice their lives. Then there is another description of the battle that is particularly vague and foggy. Before the Red Police Army set off, the mobilization battalion commander gave a lecture and asked the mobilization soldiers if they were afraid. He also said that he was afraid too, but he must resolutely carry out the commander's orders. This description portrays the conscripts as a group of new recruits who have just been trained and have not been on the battlefield yet. What's the result? Ten mobilization soldiers directly destroyed the 300 rebel Huang Lan camp guards without any injuries. Are there more than two hundred mobilization soldiers left to cheer for you? These are more than 200 Bingwang Danzi (Fu forehead) And this description is very vague and foggy. The leader of the Fox Hunting Group sent the rebel guards to deal with the Red Police Army. He did not say how many people came. When the ten mobilization soldiers fought with the rebel guards, there was no description of the number, so it was unclear. It was not clear how many people the ten conscripts were fighting. It wasn't until the end that it was said how many people had been killed and how many people had been captured, a relatively vague number of people was known. The description of the battle is also relatively rough and vague. Looking at these contents, I can't picture the battle scene in my mind at all. There is no sense of immersion, let alone a sense of immersion. I don't understand what their battle is like at all. I feel that only the picture in the author's mind is clearer, and other readers are very blurry. 🤔🤔🤔

It was okay at first, but it became more and more vicious later on. This and that were red alerts. It was clearly just a base system with all-round development!

There are many contradictions in the real book, and it's very pig-footed. Is he a modern otaku, or is he a modern civilized, law-abiding and honest citizen? Are you writing a shit about the apocalypse? Explosive troops, conquest, killing, expansion, the end of slavery, have you written it as a refreshing novel? Goodbye, ideological discord.

The protagonist is so rubbish, is Red Alert so rubbish? I can't even beat a small camp!

😒 How many chapters have it been, and Red Alert can't make artillery?

Read dozens of chapters! Not even the most basic pistol! Doing factory business there all day long! Do renovations! Is this a red alert? Is this a construction team?

Red Alert has almost no equipment, and the second and third generations have none at all. Except for the base vehicle, it has almost nothing to do with Red Alert.

Why do cloned people have memories in their genes?

Haven't started reading yet. I hope the pig trotters will be killed more decisively.

The very weak Red Alert Base is just like an RV with artificial intelligence, and its technological content is not very good. It would probably be better if it had a Chrono mining vehicle. After all, it is much faster than manpower to collect resources. You have not developed it in the past few years. It is estimated that the protagonist will die of old age after it develops.

Red alert equals doom, equals wasteland

I like this theme, please give it a try, author

Highly developed civilizations can't solve the mere virus joke, right?

Isn't it enough to clone just one gene? Wouldn't it be enough to just hammer the appearance? Why is it so complicated?