Global Gaowu Guardian System

It was written too hastily, and it felt like I was describing one incident after another, and the pace was too fast. I suggest you learn more about how to write water characters and write the story more fully.

? ? ? Is the author telling us the story of the protagonist or something? It feels like a friend and I are telling the life of another friend.

Gao Wu fan, come on unconditionally It's fun to do well. Go down to the cave to grab resources and escape to fight. Personally, I think it's super cool. For details, you can refer to a book about Brother Feng Qing The unhappy part is that the hanging is too small and there is no storage space in the cave. It's difficult to harvest resources. For details, please refer to a book about Brother Feng Qing I hope the author will work hard.

Come on, it's not easy to write Gao Wu fanfiction. There are only a few good ones. I hope I can continue writing.

Not a bad start! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

Come on, write. My ticket is waiting.

I have something to do at home, please take two hours off. I've seen everyone's comments and there should be an update on Friday evening.

Can you tell me if you can break down the psychological activities into sections, otherwise it feels a bit like an assembly line?

I can't read it at all. There are so many typos. Many of the sentences used to make up the number of words are all wrong. In order to write a few more words, there are repeated descriptions that appear to be verbose and all are wrong. In addition, the segmentation problem is also huge. It is basically a monologue without communication.

The writing is okay, lighthearted and humorous, suitable for relaxing and reading

By the way, please vote.ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~

How to make salted fish in Gaowu? Basically they all died in the end, okay? Why don't you wait hard for Fang Ping to win and clone one to come out and put it in the underworld?

Hopefully I'll see your votes when I come back next week.

All typos have been checked. I will pay attentionto in the future, sorry everyone.