Wei State Mountains and Rivers

I am the author, and this is my first novel. I don't know how to tell you about this book. After I wrote it myself, when I read it as a reader, I found many problems. First of all, my way of writing gave people the impression that the dialogue in the text was not very coherent. But in the third chapter, the feeling was much better. In fact, to be honest, the first two chapters were just for the appearance and connection of the protagonist. Making a reasonable transition is not an important part of the book. To put it bluntly, it is just water for the sake of water, but the third chapter is the beginning of all the stories in this book, so it will obviously become interesting. It is my first time to write a novel, and I have a serious lack of experience. Everyone has their shortcomings, but I promise you that I will not pay attention to every detail and writing style in the future, so I will give you a good book.