I Can See All BOSS Drops

I'll reward you with 100 points just for making fun of you! ! It's a good game, what kind of reality is it doing? If I didn't write those things, this book could definitely be on the top of the game list (serialized, not counting the previous ones). Adding in those inexplicable heavy poisonous things in reality, it completely lowers the grade from the top of the pyramid to even lower at the bottom! How many people have been persuaded to quit by this step? Oh, author, if you come back and delete those things and write the game properly, you can still restore your popularity. If you don't change it, just keep writing it like this. I admire you for being able to finish the game!

It's still possible to write a game alone without the emotional lines and messy plots. The emotional scenes and the storyline are too awkward. It was okay 10 years ago, but now it's really downgraded.

I even wonder if the author thought of this subject after seeing the legendary advertisement and seeing the see-through ring 😅😅😅

Good guy, I watched a little bit of the old poison of online games and cities from ten years ago.

By the way, when did domestic security get so bad? . Can you still kill people casually, or with a gun?

It's been a long time since I've read an online game. I felt good after reading the title. I ordered a few chapters just for this chapter, but I died of poison before I read it 1/5 of the way.

After reading Chapter 40, my dear, isn't this a routine from online games written ten years ago? If you write a pornographic article like Mars Gravity, some people will probably read it. If you are impotent, haha~~

It would be nice if there was no real-life plot. The protagonist not only hurts people at will, but also injures the loyal security guard. He also doesn't consider the person he likes. He wears sunglasses to hide his identity. He doesn't consider at all how the family behind the heroine will make things difficult for the people he hurts. It seems stupid and bad.

Why do you need to add a city when writing a game? Why don't you write a good book about the city? I really can't stand the plot of finding my ex after being reborn.

Good guy, is there another renaissance?

It feels like there is nothing new at all. This routine is already up to you. It can be shortened to, rebirth-cheating-finding the previous wife-selling equipment-acquiring the younger brother-slapping in the face and pretending to be cool-first in the copy-achieving the guild-game dominance. The book is finished

While driving on the road, I heard 13 and 14 which made me vomit. I rewarded you with a hundred just for talking. What the hell, can you honestly write about the bad things in the game?

I specially rewarded it to complain about it. After seeing the content of the online game at the beginning, I felt that I could continue to read it. Until I saw the real-life content in Chapter 12, I felt that I couldn't stand it. The following content was almost guessed. Can't online game novels write games well now? There are so many things about reality.

I left. It was a good time to watch, and I was having fun, but then a woman came out out of nowhere, and I was instantly disgusted.

Just write about games, don't bring reality into it, and make people think it's fake. If you write about self-promotion, just write about self-promotion and come out halfway. Bring reality into the pretentiousness, and you have to introduce routines and family members.

To be honest, I didn't vote for you because of your good writing. It doesn't matter if you have the same routine. It's your fault that your writing is poor. Sometimes it seems inexplicably embarrassing, just like the appearance of your girlfriend and the 50 million,

It poisoned people right from the start. Taking a gun to a student dormitory to kill people, this is China. You thought it was the United States?

Don't write emotional dramas. There is a 100% chance that a girlfriend will recognize her ex-boyfriend at a glance. If she stands in front of him and talks to someone she doesn't recognize, then he is just a passerby. Although the reality is more nonsense, it really isn't that bloody. And the author's experience is too little. In real society, paid murders do exist, but they are all achieved through accidents and direct shooting. I'm afraid you have never seen the power of the system. Do you know why game novels have been in decline, and only a few are popular? It is important to find the right positioning. Games are an entertainment industry, but they will never reach the level described in street novels, and their impact will not be much higher. There are indeed people who spend millions and tens of millions playing games, but there are no wealthy second-generation people who spend tens of millions like thousands of dollars in the game. Come on, the thugs in the game (a union), the entire group's salary is 100,000 a month, which is too much. I experienced it personally when I was hired by Amway. 100% simulation is not attractive, especially 100% of the five senses. If you don't believe it, do a public opinion survey. So write more about entertainment and less about reality and its impact on reality. It's okay to blow things up in the game. In reality, you should abide by the law or don't write about it.

I'm speechless when I see virtual games always mentioning game operations and micro-controls.

There are three chapters in the beginning, each chapter is poisonous, each chapter becomes more and more...😒

The content of the game is well written, but the realistic emotional plot persuades me to quit.

I rewarded 100 points and wanted to make some suggestions. In fact, there are fewer and fewer people writing online games nowadays. This book is pretty good, but there are still some points that make me feel uncomfortable. I hope the author can improve it as appropriate 1. There are too many descriptions of supporting characters. I mainly read the novel for the protagonist. In fact, the reality can be better written, but the reality in this book is relatively routine. There is nothing new. I can probably guess it from the beginning to the end. I hope it can be different 3. About the game world. This game world is quite huge. I can see that the author has quite some ideas. But it is a bit confusing when writing. I hope to sort it out The above is my personal opinion. I hope the author can see the information.

Not many days later, I read the latest chapter of the book I just discovered, and I posted a comment It's been a long time since I've written an online game article with so many words. The word count is updated very regularly. It seems that the author's outline is pretty good. The poisonous point of the comments. . Just like that, where is this? Jpg To be honest, the lyrics are almost meaningless. I am not talking about haircuts, but some plots that can achieve empathy feel that they are not written well enough. I don't comment much on the realistic part. I feel that the proportion is small enough. It is okay, except that it is very unreasonable to take a gun in China (but I haven't watched the city for many years. I haven't seen it in a long time. "Ancient martial arts", I didn't expect to see it once in an online game. I have all the ancient martial arts. Whether you can hold a gun or not, just leave it like that. Just treat him as a parallel world and it's not too poisonous.) Adhering to the usual attitude of reading whatever the author writes and just deleting the book if it doesn't suit my taste, I think the latest chapter is quite good. I've been reading the book for how many years, right?

The plot concept is quite interesting, please support Similar to the previous book friends' feelings, although describing the supporting characters' emotional descriptions in detail can help improve the character creation, to be honest, it takes up too much drama, and content that has little to do with the plot can be brushed off. Rather than paying attention to the small emotions in the hearts of the minor characters, readers want to watch the plot of the protagonist running together Looking forward to the follow-up development

It's okay, I think it looks good

Finished spreading flowers, hope the next one will be better

Why don't you continue writing? It's very beautiful.

In the latest chapter, I was immediately confused. The protagonist's IQ is really not high... Everyone knows that the deputy city lord of Xuanwu City is a zombie demon and he also issued a hidden mission Is there something wrong with your brain when you went to fight the Endless Tower for me? If we really want to write about such a reborn person without any brains, then anyone can be reborn, right? Can the protagonist be more brainy?

I came here to check out the comment section when I saw 50 Million. Is there anyone who can give me a fair review? What's the writing like behind it?

There was no update for one day, which shocked me (