Fu Yanhan

I read Pei's notes carefully again, only to find that Lu Xun, who should have been called Lu Yi before 224 AD, had been reading this biography and ignored the others.

Personally speaking, the overall idea of ​​this novel is okay, the historical research is also qualified, and it can be considered reasonable and well-founded But I feel that there are two shortcomings; 1. The protagonist is too clever to show off. I think sometimes everyone is a sensible person, and if you insist on playing this scheming, no one will be wrong. Although the protagonist is only a teenager, it gives people the illusion. But after all, the opponents are Cao Cao and Sun Quan, the dominant figures, and they have their own way of doing things. For example, in order to get Xu Shu, Cao Cao would kidnap Xu Shu's mother. There are some talents that he cannot get and will not let others get. They have their own wisdom and pride, and the civil and military personnel under their command are not ordinary people. So showing off your cleverness in front of Cao Sun doesn't make much sense. Refer to Yang Xiu's fate 2. Use death to drive a wedge between Lu Xun and Sun Quan, let alone how to hide Liu Bei. If Sun Quan directly destroys the Lu family (I think it is very likely), or settles the accounts after the fall (can the Lu family without Lu Xun survive the unfriendly Sun family), will the surviving Lu Xun still be the same Lu Xun? Can it really be kept hidden forever? This is a bit like Song Jiang making money from Qin Ming.

Why does it feel like the protagonist has been seeking death? If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have died long ago.

I feel like writing Lu Xun to death so quickly was a point of dissuasion. . .

It's better to work alone than to work for others. What's more, it's a Three Kingdoms novel. It's better to build your own empire.

From "Collection of Ancient Chinese Atlases"

Lu Xun directly persuaded Lu Xun to quit. You wrote such a plan before to recruit Lu Xun, and Lu Xun was already joining. When I read it, I thought that Lu Xun would perform well in the future. I felt a sense of pleasure in collecting generals. Then I saw the protagonist and shot Lu Xun directly. I was split on the spot. What did you say you did before? This turning point is so blunt that I am speechless.

The author is a great talent in this world. I thought no one knew ancient Chinese history better than me, but it turns out this author knows it better than me. He is truly a man given by heaven🤭

I thought this book had a good start, but it turned out that the protagonist used Wu Yong's tricks to kill Lu Xun, went out without sex, and seduced a married woman. I felt it was too frivolous, so let's wait and see.

The plot behind this is inexplicable. Let's wait and see.

Lu Xun died like this. Author, you are really a talent...

Uncle, let me go first Will the heroine of this book be Guan Yinping?

This book is really cheating, it has something to it

This novel is so good that I seriously suspect that the author is the reincarnation of Robben.

There are currently two problems with this book. I hope the author will pay attention to it First, the protagonist is too arrogant, which may not be liked by many readers Second, there is too much nonsense about the background that has nothing to do with the plot. Who is reading novels and only focuses on the background?

I can't stand what the male protagonist did to Lu Xun. It's too despicable, just as despicable as Wu Yong

It feels very consistent.

The author should change the subject. I can't stand it anymore after reading more than 30 chapters.

Five hundred collected, one step closer to the high platform

When I read Chapter 10, I really couldn't stand it. It's all based on the history of later generations. You said that the real number of Cao Cao's people is only 250,000, but it's outrageous to be able to deduce even iron ropes and ships.

Why do so few people write about people's livelihood, governance, and dealing with aristocratic families when writing about the Three Kingdoms? Without these, how can we strive for world hegemony? The people are not in good condition, the food and grass are not prepared, the soldiers are unstable, and the soldiers have no fighting spirit. Take the lead and fight for hegemony.

Who participated in the Battle of Chibi? Who came back in the Battle of Yiling? Who led the Northern Expedition? Who was the first to help the Han Dynasty?

Chibi Sun and Liu allied forces, and the general direction of Cao's military line

{"NickName":"The Fierce Big Dog","UserId":154607993} I am too lazy to copy this thing. Not only does it take time, but it also loses the word count, just take a look

I feel like I saw a buddy who asked you whether there are bullets in your gun!

I read Chapter 12 and felt embarrassed 😅😅😅

A new Ming Dynasty, a new beginning, shamelessly asking for collections, recommendations, comments, investment, and further reading...

I read the public chapters for a while before, then put them in my collection to let them languish, and then suddenly rediscovered them recently. After thinking about why I didn't want to continue reading, I summarized three points: 1. Why must I take great risks to attract Lu Xun, and why do I have to kill Lu Xun later? The battle of Lu Xun Yiling was very powerful, but you are still worried about this even though you are here. Fans of Zhuge Liang should at least be upright. These methods are really in the same tone as Water Margin and are not in line with the image of the Three Kingdoms. 2. It is understandable to go to get the edict, but the relationship with Zhen Ji, ntr Cao Pi and various tricks are not understandable. From the look of it, it seems that he is not the protagonist of destiny, and he died the next day. . 3. One thing is stretched too far, and there are too many irrelevant and worthless things mixed in, which leads to the main line being delayed for too long.

The writing is good but there are problems. Why go to Shu? The land of Shu is good but the land of Shu is a natural prison. It is easy to enter Shu but difficult to get out. If you want to join Liu Bei, then write new ideas. Don't follow Zhuge Liang's old path. Why not go through the past?

Seeing that Lu Xun was killed and decisively persuaded to quit, since you can only kill him, what is the purpose of all the foreshadowing? Is it funny? Also, although you are trying to praise the protagonist's intelligence, you portray the other characters as too stupid, especially Sun Quan. .