Dao Lin Devours the Starry Sky

Damn, I only found out after reading the comments that you changed Luo Feng's gender. Can you write it out from the beginning? I've been looking for the main character for a long time but can't find it. What kind of stuff are you doing?

As someone who has read the original work Swallowing the Stars, I can only say that I was very uncomfortable with this book. The protagonist of Devouring Starry Sky is a good character in his own right, and it is an unpleasant behavior to randomly transform the original protagonist into a girl. The settings were changed randomly, and the changes were not done well. You said that some settings in the original work are not good and confusing, and changing them would be more conducive to the development of the plot. This is okay. After all, the original work itself is not perfect. However, the purpose of changing the settings by fans is to facilitate the development of the plot, or to save some regrets that are difficult to reconcile. I don't see any need to change the setting of this book. Change Luo Feng to Ji Xuan? Change Babata to Barbara? What's the point? In the original work, Luo Feng repaired the spaceship and was able to travel back and forth between the Earth and the Horned Dragon within a month. In your case, Ji Xuan went away for five years and didn't come back? It's just about writing a heroine. What's the use of writing a heroine who just leaves and doesn't say a word for five years? The ability of the golden-horned giant beast to breed clones is copied except for a slight difference. As a result, the protagonist's genes were used to breed a female clone? Does this make sense? One more so-called "harem"? Can we just ignore the earthlings killed by the golden-horned giant beast? In the original work, the earth is Hu Yanbo's territory. Hu Yanbo was seriously injured and waited for death after the earth arranged everything. He did not die directly. As a result, it was directly changed to Earth, not Huyanbo's territory? So what is he doing on earth? The original work conceals the coordinates of the Earth's dark universe well. Here, Hu Yanbo's methods were used out of thin air, and Ji Xuan, who was transformed into a mother by Luo Feng, was taken out of the earth. Is it best just to turn the earth into the territory of the so-called "Golden Crow Tower"? The Earth Lord becomes a so-called Mayan Realm Lord? Originally, it was an unpleasant thing for people to occupy the earth's oceans in the original book. Not to mention the occupation here, it got worse and even the land was gone. The so-called Mayan Realm Lord also accepts the protagonist and Hong Lei Shen as his disciples? Maybe the protagonist will have to thank him later? Also in the original work, those who crossed the bottom line were directly executed when the Virtual Universe Company found out. Where did the Mayan Realm Lord come from with such a big face? He was compensated with 1 Hunyuan unit. As for issues like Kaio Fist, I have nothing to say. The author should really write a book of his own instead of writing a fanfic about Devouring the Stars. This means both those who have read the original work and those who have not.

Does this book turn Luo Feng into the heroine Ji Xuan, and then the protagonist of this book replaces Luo Feng and follows his path? Is this a fan? Isn't this just changing the name of the protagonist of Swallowing Starry Sky?

It's boring. In fact, you can either openly admit that you have transformed Luo Feng into a girl so that everyone can have an idea, or you can write Luo Feng as a background board as long as there is not much intersection. Now it seems weird to me. You might say it is original, but the routines and backgrounds are the same as Swallowing the Starry Sky. I'd say they're the same person, but they're neither fish nor fowl. You are a typical person who does not please both sides 😅

The feminization scares me. I've given up.

The key is how did the Golden Horn avoid the soul detection of the Chaos City Lord? Can a foreigner enter the original universe? Funny?

After thinking about it, I decided to post a post! If you have any comments, you can leave them here. It doesn't matter if you complain. I can handle it. Writing for fun. This above. Post a picture by the way.

I don't understand why you are so obsessed with the gender of the original character? Next door, Ye Hei, a fan of Zhetian, turned into a girl. The protagonist of this book is not Luo Feng, not to mention the names of the characters are different, they just grew up in the same environment. The author probably wants to have a female protagonist. If the male protagonist is too strong and reaches the top step by step, the ordinary female protagonist will definitely not be able to keep up with the pace of the male protagonist. Therefore, Luo Feng becomes a woman and works hand in hand with the male protagonist to pursue the peak. But after being female, she is no longer Luo Feng. Now, in this world, she is a woman. If it remains the same, the Devouring fanfics will be written badly. I think it is quite refreshing for the author to write this way. If you are still confused about whether there is Luo Feng or not, whether he is a boy or a girl, just read the original work. Why read the fanfics?

Looking at the title of the book, I thought that the author wanted to write about "Tao", martial arts, swordsmanship, Dao, etc., Which is also interesting. As a result, a Kaio Fist appeared in the second chapter! ? Do you have to be energetic to practice this thing? I read a book review by a well-intentioned person and found out that Luo Feng has turned into a mother. How can a Lord Hunyuan like me just disappear? The heroine or the golden horn? The golden-horned beast seems to be gender-neutral, with no male or female gender. It lays eggs directly like Piccolo.

Author, you want Golden Horn to go to Chaos City? I'm afraid I won't be slapped to death by the Lord of Chaos City.

It has been changed beyond recognition, similar to a backdoor listing! I think most people come here to devour their fellow fans, so what's the point of being specious?

The original hostess transformed into a girl. . . . Emmm Xiuer

I felt something was wrong when I saw Barbara😂😂😂

Awesome, Luo Feng has changed his gender, I'll take my leave.

Suddenly, I realized that the female version of Luo Feng was really not used to it. He didn't even explain the origin of the Pig's Knuckle Kaio Fist.

How can you play with a male protagonist who writes such rubbish?

Abandoned, abandoned, disgusting

Some books will disappear if you keep them 🙂

The writing is very good, and the content is completely new within the framework of Swallowing the Starry Sky.

Look at this

This is the first book that I was dissuaded from reading by the name of the main character in the introduction without reading the content~ I always think of Chen Daoming~ and then the picture is so beautiful that I don't want to read it~

No wonder I didn't get good grades in the book. . . Too many pig's feet. . It feels a bit messy. . . There is no such book friend there are so many pig feet

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