Words About the Great Qin's Snare

Abuse, this novel perfectly demonstrates the word abuse. I have a golden finger but I can't use it. My mother was slept with for seven years, and she did nothing and then had her muscles crippled. . . . . . That's it. Who of you are awesome? Just watch it for yourself. I'll watch Douyin to relax my mood. Don't those long legs smell good? (I persisted for 11 chapters)

Author! I'm really speechless at the way you wrote it. First of all, you introduce that the protagonist mother and daughter have been on the run for 6 years and found a farmhouse for shelter. Then after the protagonist knows the situation, he still waits for what happened to happen again? What's the point? And the one who was forced to join the snare. . . . Can't you write that the main character got caught up in the trap for some reason? Controlled the snare? You have traded so many things, don't you? Why are you dragging it? If Qin Shihuang knew about it, wouldn't he reuse you? Do you have to hide it? There are too many poisonous points. . . It's still acceptable to be a woman who traveled through time. The mother's family can also accept it. The mother was deposed. . . Fuck! Forced to join the snare. . . . I. . . . . . ! Now that we know the plot and set it up, nothing has changed at all! This is too poisonous! Can't you write that after the protagonist travels through time, he develops through the system and secretly controls the farmhouse? Received the favor of the First Emperor? What is the use of your system? Oh my God! I guess you haven't published or revised this book. I hope you will make great progress as the author of your next book.

Will the author keep writing? If I knew this book, I would read it

The protagonist's current cultivation level can be said to be above the first level of Tianzi, but compared with the real master of decision-making, it is still lacking. Now if the protagonist is alone, he can withdraw from the trap, but with the factors of the farmer, mother, and her brother, the protagonist still cannot There is a way to protect everyone, so if you want to be on an equal footing with the snare and protect your own people, the protagonist needs to be close to the center of power in Da Qin. If you are from a peasant family, you can do your old job, grain, water conservancy, etc., Which is the symbol represented by Liutang

Let me make it clear that I usually don't delete posts that I normally make. After all, everyone has their own preferences. But I won't show mercy to those who are ignorant.

First of all, thank you all for your company. Every comment you make is the motivation for me to move forward. Someone commented: My book is actually not much different from the original work. The protagonist is the same as if he is not here. I feel like the protagonist is stupid and has a lot of cards in his hand, but he is constantly being abused. As far as it goes, your assessment is very pertinent and so right. (ಡωಡ)Hiahiahia In a dark era like the end of the Warring States Period, especially in a cruel world like "Qin Shi Mingyue", what really determines whether you can leave your name in history is not how many golden fingers or trump cards you have, but your strength. The strong show off their magical powers, and the weak are reduced to pawns. Being able to decide and change everything from the very beginning makes me an invincible writer... I still can't fool my "relatives" into thinking they are Japanese like Gazi did. (ಡωಡ)Hiahiahia I won't spoil the future plot, but I will try my best to give you the best story I can. Again, there is a long way to go, and I have only written more than forty chapters, so don't rush to draw conclusions about me. Thank you everyone (*°∀°)=3 muaヽ(*´з｀*)ﾉI love you all(ɔˆ ³(ˆ⌣ˆc) Thank you all for your company for the last time. Only when you read my book can I have meaning as an author. ————Zeng Xumi Mountain Hidden

Poisonous Point 1: Didn't change Jingni's ending Poisonous Point 2: Make a good system Poisonous Point 3: Knowing that Tian Meng wanted to harm Jingni, he didn't take her away from the farmhouse, but instead went out on his own

After watching it for so long, I didn't know what you were going to do. Now that the protagonist has traveled through time and has a golden finger, Tian Yan still doesn't follow the plot, so what's the use of you? The fanfic is not cheating all the way, it is also very abused, what is it written about, as the protagonist can't do anything, bows his head and kneels to everyone he sees, and many people say this is reality, if you are weak, you have to bow your head, you have already written a fanfic, is it still realistic?

Detoxification is not a fun article, and I was always frustrated in the early stages. Knowing the plot, she kept saying she would protect her mother, but in the end, she even forgot that her mother was born prematurely. I was very depressed for a long time in the early stage, so don't watch this if you are addicted to it.

It should have been cut a long time ago. A time traveler still has a system and can't change her mother's ending. Then you still write a hammer and read the fandom just for fun.

To be honest, there is no difference between having and not having this system. If you don't want to write a cool article, then you don't have to write about this system. There are ways to make the protagonist stronger than the previous one, and then endure the humiliation and play more brilliantly. But the first impression that the system came out to everyone is that the plot was already messed up at the beginning. For example, the puppet talisman was traded to make Tian Meng a living puppet. Waiting for many purposes is to overhaul the plot. This can be said to be everyone's first reaction. Because the system is originally an odd number, the protagonist is also an odd number. One plus one does not equal two, so it is really depressing. In the early stage, the protagonist has received the ceremony to be stronger than the predecessor, and there is no change at all. I admit that it will definitely be reversed later. The author plays a game of suppressing first and then promoting, but this trading system is very cheating. Why do you say this? What if you meet a powerful person from the prehistoric world or traveling through time and space? Does it mean seeking the skin of a tiger? It should be noted that your luck is high and your opponent's luck is absolutely impossible to be low. You can say that you will never write about this pitfall, but this cheat is really not good. I feel that even if the system is lost, the protagonist will still do well. Even without the system, the protagonist may do better because there is no way out and he will move forward. When a sword is unsheathed, it will see blood. It is in line with the theme.

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In terms of strength, he is stronger than Tian Meng; in terms of prestige, he is as high as Tian Meng. If Tian Meng dies, he can successfully inherit the position of hall leader (written in the book); in terms of having generals under his command, Dianqing and Mei Sanniang; in terms of secret hands. Genetic medicines include high-end weapons and firearms; there are 7 years from 6 to 13 years old. In the past seven years, forget it if you can't fight head-on. If you can't poison him, then forget it. Then will you trade with those high-tech people and kill him with one shot? Author, you gave the protagonist everything, and then the plot remained unchanged. Having everything, then watching everything happen stupidly, then swallowing everything in pain, and then the mentality changes. Nothing has changed in all of this. Since there has been no change, why give the protagonist a golden finger? The original plot is not like this anyway. Whenever the protagonist is about to be fucked, it would be great if Tian Meng is killed by a sneak attack, right?

Writing fan fiction is essentially copying the background and story, and what readers expect is just to let out the breath that they have been holding back from reading the original work. Even if the author wants to write something realistic, does he have a serious plan for the future if he knows the plot? Is the protagonist's inner wish for the future a safe life for her mother, or is it enough to survive? If she had some pursuit and knew how to care for her mother, what would she have done in the past few years? People who take exams want to study more as the exams get closer, and writers who write code work harder to catch up on their manuscripts as they get closer. If your mother is going to be crippled, will it be painful to wait until the deadline comes? What changes have been made in the past? It is quite enjoyable to live a leisurely life.

What exactly is the protagonist going to do? He is independent of himself and detached from everything else; he wants the king to gain hegemony and dominate the world; he forgets his eternal life and plays chess in the spring and autumn; he cares about the country and the people, and all the people in the world;

Your mother is still crippled, your younger brother is still mentally retarded, and when things happen, you don't use any of your subordinates, you don't take precautions, and you don't change anything. Then why should I read your book? If your golden finger is of no use, just stop writing it. Why don't you write about the exercises that you picked up? What kind of trading system do you want?

How can I put it? It feels a bit weird when I first read it. I feel that the snare itself did not have such a big advantage before the reunification. I feel that it is the level of the three major families that can take advantage of the general trend. Even the configuration of the snare at the beginning of the plot is 6 sword slaves + covering the sun + Jingli (mainly depends on the judgment of the supervisor of the six sword slaves) Jing salamander may be a leader-level goalkeeper. Hidden Sun is slightly stronger. The strength of Six Swords is unknown. Farmers configure Six Elders + Six Hall Masters + Tian Guang + Dianqing. Tian Guang Dianqing is definitely an advantage over Hidden Sun Jing Salamander. Six Sword Slaves are also difficult to advantage over Six Elders. I feel that the strong point is that it can take advantage of the general trend (official) + has the initiative

Lily, no, I can do Xiaomeng 😏, but there is still not enough water. Let me teach you, describe more scenery, write about the clothes and appearance of the characters. At the moment, I feel like reading a manual, and the segmentation is quite awkward 😒

The handling of my mother is so disappointing, ugh😔

Well written! Come on! I'll subscribe automatically.

Well written, I give you all the recommendation votes

The soul is back, the soul is back, the soul is back, the soul is back, the soul is back, the soul is back

Isn't it about reopening? Is this book still being written?

Suddenly I thought of this book. I promised to re-open it.

I was in a hurry and didn't watch the event carefully. Hey, I'm so sad.

Waiting, hoping to see other pigeons 😭

I hope to see the author's continuation 😳

A man was reborn as Tian Yan (female body), watching his own mother (Jing Salamander) and Tian Meng having sex every night (a completely different NTR) and watching Tian Meng cripple his own mother. I can't stand it anymore after seeing this.

Let's start again... Finish the book seriously first before we talk about it.

Not done yet? It's almost the New Year.