The Evolution Master of the Strange World

To be honest, the plot felt like a cliche when I first read it, but the writing was pretty good. After a while, I continued to subscribe, and then it started to feel weird. The repetitive word count was really disgusting. The author should know why there is such a big difference in the subscription fees. After dozens of paid chapters, the word count started to be set. Some chapters repeated the evolution of a certain martial arts and copied and pasted a bunch of data. Isn't it awkward to call some of the clever and cunning names in it? Later in the conversation, the term "ripening theory" comes up. It comes from the supporting character talking to the protagonist. It feels like the supporting character is the time traveler. The author doesn't need the basic logic in writing a book, right? Also, I'm curious, does the author not review the article himself?

You can read it in Shuhuang, but the twists in the plot are disappointing. I suggest you read it without thinking, it's quite relaxing. Not enough pen power

In a world where you are playing tricks, just kill monsters. It would be nice to upgrade and gain more fun by defeating monsters all the way. The interspersed conspiracies and tricks are a failure, and the setting of this trick is simply ridiculous. Analyzing it from an objective perspective, the world view cannot be established at all.

You and Hengtai, who is copying whom? The writing speed is the same

After 15 years of reading experience, this book made me vomit! ! ! ! {"TopicId":"726756322925871104","TopicName":"My 20 Years with Qidian"}

Man . Cx, . B, . Z

😱😱 If you guys have any suggestions, please leave a message here, but remember to vote for updates or something. There are fewer and fewer posts. Am I having a hemorrhage?

If the world is dark, as a modern diaosi with golden fingers, what you should do is to bring a ray of light to the dark world through your words and deeds, instead of being assimilated by the darkness and becoming a part of the darkness, because in this way the meaning of crossing is lost.

It was the first time I saw the protagonist take the initiative to tell others that he was not the original owner but had taken his body away.

I'm really annoyed by the kind of people in the city who are just pretending to be dead. Come out to pretend to be a hero and savior at this time? The hero will stand up immediately, and the savior will lead everyone to victory. I know some people will say that this is Dark Wind and not a savior story. I just want to ask why you traveled to a world near the end of the world if you are not the savior? Eating and waiting to die? The most annoying thing is to be stubborn. The protagonist of this book is also a bit conceited. What bothers him the most is that I am steady and so-and-so, I want to hide such-and-such, I am cautious and so-and-so, and I am not so-and-so. Who sees this kind of garbage? I feel like throwing up when I see the name.

I haven't read the latest chapter yet, but I have a comment. The author spends too much time on various exercises, improvement, dealing with people, and then pretends to slap him in the face. To be honest, most readers who like to watch the weird world genre want to see weird things with various novel settings. Fighting with weird things, fighting with the harsh world, and fighting with all kinds of weird and weird things is the highlight. But now it seems that the monster is just the source of the protagonist's absorption of Goldfinger's energy. There is no sense of urgency or novelty at all, and the more you watch it, the more boring it becomes. There is a long chapter of refining alchemy, taking medicine, improving and defeating hostile humans, and then looping, absorbing the energy of strange things, and then improving again. If there is no change, this book will be scrapped. It's time for the author to wake up.

How can I put it this way? I am a novice at writing. The plot is too obvious and routine, more like an assembly line than an assembly line. The plot advancement is all the same old tricks. For example, there is a drug boy who wants to steal the protagonist at first, and the protagonist is killed. Then his brother comes and kills his brother. Then his brother's boss comes and kills his brother's boss again. How can this kind of plot be good to watch? What happened in the end was because a little drug boy wanted to steal the protagonist, and then the wireless matryoshka directly confronted other people's forces. It was boring and not good-looking...

Oh my gosh, the author of the rewarded book "Wuwu Jianghu" above is really an ex. A big boss rewarded him and then deleted other people's posts. And I used to see him pretending to be pitiful under every book that was rewarded. It's been almost a year. I didn't expect that the big boss rewarded him, but he deleted people's posts like this. Sorry, I really got ex. Oh my god, I have never seen such an ex author (I'm sorry, I'm sorry to bother you, but I'm a first-time author)

It's a cool novel, but it suppresses the protagonist at every turn. If Golden Finger doesn't improve his strength, he always focuses on other aspects, and he still likes to be stubborn. What are you doing if your strength can be ignored? Just keep waiting for others to knock on your door and then act like a repeater. Also, there are so many female characters written, but she wants to be a eunuch. Why did she write it? I want to please the non-heroine party but I also want to lick the harem party.

Well written and enjoyable to read. The eleven recommendation votes from now on will be reserved for you, so please give them a try!

For this book, I even went to the starting point to read the original version. Great support for the author, no more eunuchs.

Recommend four pictures a day (๑❛ᴗ❛๑) and add some highlights

The rest of the plot is completely incomprehensible. There is obviously no hatred, but there is no end to the death for no reason, and many supporting characters suddenly appear. The plot is incoherent, I'm too stiff, I feel like I'm just writing nonsense

I was puzzled. I saw a few pictures, why is it so baffling? All are enemies. How much this protagonist is hated.

So many people are talking about the issue of realm, but the author just doesn't care. The combat power is soaring, the realm remains unchanged, one-star realm kills six-star monsters, the better it is to kill monsters in several big realms, the more you look at it, the more boring it becomes.

I came here to see Weirdness. Where is Weirdness after Jingzhou? For more than 100 consecutive chapters, he directly turned into a martial arts?

It has become like a novel. The protagonist seems to be very poisonous. There are villains everywhere in the corridor who are targeting him, and then he will counterattack. Can you not be so poisonous? Do you think you are an NPC and can automatically attract monsters? As a protagonist and a time traveler, you should take the initiative to seize resources and create opportunities for yourself to kill people. Do you have to wait for others to provoke you before you fight back? Brother System, this protagonist is a waste, you'd better run away. If everyone were like you, would there still be wars around the world? It's becoming more and more like the Virgin Bitch route.

Author, I would like to give you some advice. I have been working in the starting point for more than ten years and have read thousands of novels. The two books you wrote are all about the protagonist. The last one was also about how the human race was bullied and even made slaves. The atmosphere of the book was described as dark and in urgent need of a light, but the author chose to let the protagonist The upgrade is so slow and you are constantly suppressed. All the readers have left before you reach the boss. Look, you have written more than one million, and only four people have added it to your book list. You are overconfident and do not understand the preferences of readers, especially those who have paid money to read. Most of them are unwilling to read such a depressing protagonist.

Why does the breath technique require the assistance of others to practice it? So how did the first person practice breath skills?

I didn't see him evolving into a god, but becoming a grandson is real.

Isn't the author writing a new book? It feels pretty good to still have something to say

The character design is unclear. Can the weak trade with the strong on an equal footing? Can the weak dare to call the strong a Taoist friend? There is no golden finger feeling. If you want to write a climax, it will become dull before it gets up. It is inexplicable to write a supporting role. If you want to write a prominent supporting role, you will lower the character of the protagonist and sacrifice the good. You can relax in the book shortage, but there is no need to subscribe.

It's a pity that I don't have money, so I can only subscribe to support it.

The plot is messy, just follow your imagination. It's embarrassing to forcefully create a conflict.

It's so cool, and it's still grinding through chapter 50, and it's endless.