The Doctor Who Walked Out of the Elf Shop

I can't stand it anymore, I really can't stand it anymore. The elf does this and that behind the protagonist's back. It's always a misunderstanding. It would be okay if it were less, but it keeps happening like this and keeps misunderstanding. It makes me feel bad.

After reading about 30 chapters, I would like to share my personal views on this book. 1. As the author himself mentioned later, there are some references to other novels of the same kind in the book. It may be okay to read this kind of novel for the first time, but it will still have some influence after reading it. As for me personally, when I read Teacher Lu's book for the first time, I felt that it can be like this in the early stage. It feels interesting and fresh, but as time goes by, is the protagonist really blind? Or is it just false concern for your own elf? Never knew that your own elf was training you? It feels like the logic doesn't make sense. 2. As many people have also mentioned, the protagonist has taken the initiative to send good elves out many times. Personally, I think that the setting of this type of novel itself is a cool novel. If you sent it in the first place, I can understand that the author wants to express that this is reality, and cultivating elves is not child's play, but it is enough if this happens once. If I try it again, at least I feel that the protagonist lacks courage and has no flavor of the protagonist of a cool novel at all. 3. The first game of the Mafina Cup protagonist was too bad... Even if this is the real world, you can't rely entirely on your own imagination. There are official game materials, anime, and comics. And let's not talk about whether the skills can be learned. The stupid fish takes off by relying on a water flow ring? ! ! Then what is the racial value of Benbenyu? What were the author's set qualifications at that time? ! After only raising it for a few months, he was able to reverse his attributes and defeat the Yu Sanjia after evolving once? ! I almost... Putting aside everything else, don't let yourself be fooled by the author's own qualification setting. You can't explain it by saying this is the real world. This is a novel you wrote. Do you really think this is reality? 4. Personally, I think the character portrayal is a bit taken for granted. Whether it is the official contract or the repeated unreliability of the subsequent alliance, I feel that the official political collective is too simple. If you are interested, the author can read the Pokémon comics. The settings in the comics are relatively realistic. On the contrary, the behaviors of the good and evil factions in it are also more realistic. How can a larger organization not have any charter for its actions? Since Daigo is already a former champion, at least this alliance is more mature, right? I also know that the author is a newbie, and I am not writing this simply to give pointers. I am just writing this because I think I have some common interests with the author, and then I saw it and wanted to talk about it. But to be honest, at least the author did what I wanted to do but never did (referring to writing Pokémon articles), and dared to publish it. For this, I absolutely support and absolutely admire it (so I just ordered it for the first time)! I hope that the Pokémon world will always exist, and I hope that the Pokémon world can really exist. 🙂

The sauce suddenly bubbled up, and it came with chicken ham sausage, spicy cabbage instant noodles, French bread and Wangzi milk. People gathered around to read the great book and give the author a big CALL, ^_^

The price of various props in this novel is skyrocketing. Purple quality quasi-gods only cost over two million. An ordinary quality evolution stone costs hundreds of thousands. A high-quality evolution stone costs millions. Various elf props are a lot more expensive. At the same time, elf eggs are extremely cheap. Are elf balls more expensive than elf eggs? The average quality of elf eggs is only 600-800. This is the cheapest price I have seen in more than ten years. Elf eggs are not as expensive as elf food. This is really ridiculous.

Meinas

The powerful treasures and Pokémon are all sold, so the protagonist is of no use at all!

I have been reading this book for a while. At first, it was because of the shortage of books, but I was attracted as I read it. I can see that the author is a novice, and the writing style is a bit immature, and there are some shortcomings. However, the author wrote about the feeling of Pokémon in my heart, which is like a family. The trainer and Pokémon are warm, harmonious, caring for each other, and taking care of each other. This is why I like Pokémon. I feel that this is also the emotion that Pokémon expresses to us. I believe there are, many people are like me. They simply like Pokémon, and then they fall into the trap, and then they like it more and more. This novel made me feel the same emotions. Of course, the author must work hard to improve his writing skills.

There are so many poisonous points in this book. The turning point at the beginning is like Mr. Lu's kind of helping people with moves. The world setting is also unclear. It is said that the elves appear and the result is a big realization. It is said that the world is merging. Are there any other original characters appearing? After reading Chapter 57, I really can't stand it anymore. In two months, the young tooth dragon was raised from an egg to a two-axe fighting dragon? ? ? Did you give the young tooth dragon steroids? None of the Yusan family are so fast!

It's gone, a protagonist can't afford to raise a well-qualified dog? It doesn't mean that you only look at qualifications. Don't you want to be accurate and insist on raising a white aptitude? Wouldn't it cost more to raise those with white qualifications? Disgusting reader?

The arcade shark died from poison in the chapter when it was sold, the Pokémon egg price system has been collapsing, and most of the stories are written to show how powerful the protagonist is, and many of the characterizations end right at the beginning. ~There are poisonous spots everywhere. It can only be said that there are good places, but there are also many bad places.

When will Qidian launch a blacklisting system? At least the blacklisted novels will no longer appear in the daily guide. It's really annoying.

The most poisonous thing about this book is that he almost gave away the mythical beast. Although he finally released the mythical beast and sold many good elves in the past, he kept the one with the worst qualifications for himself. Can anyone tell me that this is not a poisonous point.

1. A young man who opened a small shop explained the origin of mythical beasts, but the official didn't even investigate. Where did you learn this? 2. The world background is not done well, from the beginning of Devon Company to the appearance of Daigo! You say that the world is an elven desert, but you forcefully add anime characters. Then when you first search for famous doctors like Dr. Oak, they don't exist! It is not clear whether it is parallel time and space or fused time and space!

Now I know why this book didn't become a hit! The character setting of the protagonist is not on point at all! A bit pretentious!

Ibrahimovic

I read the whole book once, and I don't know why I couldn't stand it. The second time I read it, the protagonist wandered around without strength, and it didn't increase his combat power. And the author, didn't you notice? You think the elf world is too beautiful, you are naive, and you tell others all your secrets. Another cultivator novel is better than yours. At least he has enough strength to protect his own rights. The protagonist is a king-level trainer.

After reading a few chapters, I felt a little bit poisonous. Are all people in this world zz? The battle that has been developed for more than 80 years is not as good as the protagonist's understanding? I was immediately confused. Let's not talk about how much more complicated the real version is than the game. The world's Pokémon circle is probably larger than the Pokémon battle circle in real life. The top group doesn't even know how much beyond the protagonist's understanding of the game, and compared to the protagonist, everyone else is like aboriginals. 😅

This book is generally written, and I have no desire to read it. In fact, many things can be learned from the book I am a Breeder in the Elf World. Cultivation of elf eggs in a breeding house requires space. The output of this thing is destined to be low, so consider the space, labor, and logistics. A large breeding center can only hold tens of thousands of elves of different types, and elves are not ruthless egg-laying machines. They can't lay a few eggs for you every day. They have to be calculated based on cycles. I don't know how long the egg-laying cycle of elves is, but if they can hold them to death, they can only lay five or six hundred eggs a month, right? Therefore, the price of the author's elf eggs is too low. It is not an exaggeration to say that eggs with better qualifications are sold more expensive. Like the price set by the author, a quasi-god egg with low qualifications is estimated to be only one or two million. There are so many rich people. If the price is set like this, wouldn't everyone basically have one or even a few quasi-god eggs? Are you kidding me about the quasi-god rarity?

It always feels like you are selling dog meat with a sheep's head. You said opening an elf shop, but it feels like it is just a setting, occasionally used to push the plot. The management is solved by the system and group chat. You talk about doing research, but I haven't seen anyone who talks about research in detail. They just start by saying what they want to study, but there is no explanation. Not to mention that most of the research projects are based on the knowledge that time travelers have advantages. The research on the characteristics of the fighting spirit that I am interested in is not written carefully, except for the beginning and the end, which are just a few strokes. Now I see everyone saying that the protagonist is weak, so here is the whole road to becoming stronger. . . It feels like the author hasn't finalized his work yet. So far, I think the better part is the daily life between the protagonist and Pokémon, which is sweet and comfortable to watch. Of course, writing a book is not about printing money, and it cannot be liked by everyone. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

I took a look at the comment section and admired the guy who died of poison after seeing the Round Land Shark. I couldn't hold on after reading Chapter 27. Let me briefly mention a few poisonous points 1. The price system has collapsed. A pet can be hundreds of cheap or tens or millions of expensive, and then you can cultivate props that can easily cost hundreds of thousands or millions. Many fan novels have this problem, and this one is the most outrageous 2. There are too many witty points. A female character spends tens of thousands to buy an Eevee and then asks the protagonist if she wants a supplier. Her relative is a big cultivator. It's like your relative runs a computer factory, but you go to the computer city to buy computers and let others cheat you? 3. The world view is confusing. While saying that the world is underdeveloped and that many people don't know a lot of knowledge, a character is introduced to lead a super iron tyrannosaurus... Either don't arrange the time by generation, or strictly abide by it 4. A female water-type trainer at the level of a king ran to a corner of the Sanwu store and bought a grass-type elf egg in one go, bidding twenty times as much as the Devon Mall was next to it. It's like a female star who needs to control her diet goes to a street corner fried skewers stand to buy a grilled sausage that looks good at twenty times the price...

I don't recommend reading this book. This book will gradually give you a very uncomfortable feeling. It's just selling the good eggs. It doesn't matter if you want to raise white Eevee, but you can't just rely on good-looking elves to support the scene. Just sell them directly like Garlic Bastard and Earth Dragon. It's illogical.

Problems with this book 1. The research part is not rigorous 2. The supporting characters are mostly fools 3. Pointless and uncomfortable plots appear repeatedly 4. The elves are too anthropomorphic (I know some people really like this)

Although most of the Pokémon books are bad, and I can't pick out one good one out of ten, this one is considered below average. Based on the overall evaluation, if the newcomer still wants to write a long novel, he will commit suicide. The first is positioning. Do you want to be a trainer, an elf breeder, or a researcher? Now that I'm reading Chapter 60, I can't tell what the author wants to express at all. I basically just write whatever comes to mind. A Ugly Fish evolves and Menas evolves into forty or fifty chapters. Okay, you said you wrote it carefully. Does it make sense to write about being discriminated against? Readers are not supporting characters in it, so they don't have that shocking feeling. They all know that it can evolve into Menas. It is meaningless to emphasize over and over again that it will become the most beautiful in the future. Ibrahimovic with a blank slate talent does not have any bonus. Even if he raises it by himself, he can learn a bunch of skills. Not to mention the prices, they have basically collapsed into shit. I wanted to write a Dihua novel, but I couldn't write it well. The intelligence level of the supporting characters is really worrying. I can see the author's thinking, but the author's writing skills are really average. Finally, the existence of the system is too transparent. With the system, any other person with normal intelligence would have made a fortune long ago even if they could only see the qualifications of the egg without any other functions. Do you know the gambling stone eye in urban literature? The second thing is to give away good things when you get them, even quasi-gods give them away, and use lack of money as an excuse. It's really ridiculous. Wearing all kinds of awesome vests, you are a grandma, an official researcher, and you own an elf breeding shop. You use lack of money as an excuse. Moreover, resources are not paid in one lump sum. Is the protagonist getting poorer and poorer?

What is this article about? There are so many flaws that I don't even know where to start. Sell the good ones and keep a few crooked melons and cracked dates for yourself? Are you sick?

How do I say that my pet is somehow very strong anyway? Qualifications and skill pools are all in vain. Pets train independently. The protagonist does not understand the skills of his own pet. The pet is disobedient in battle. It is a thunder and lightning. In the beginning of the price system, although the price of eggs is not high, it can be self-consistent. However, the prices of subsequent props are very outrageous compared to training pets. Highly qualified eggs are a drop in the bucket, but Pokémon players all know that Hatching eggs is the biggest difficulty in pet training. It can be said that it is counter-intuitive and makes the sense of substitution very poor. The last part is the core cool point about the doctor, which highlights a lack of data There is no controlled experiment. All the information about mythical beasts is collected online. I can only be a master of folk guessing. I'm afraid I won't be able to become a doctor.

Elvish script without levels is animal script.

Writing Pokémon novels actually sells good quality but poor quality, and then forcefully sells it there

There are a lot of poisonous points. I skipped many parts to read it. I subscribed to the main text for a few chapters and died from the poison. Prices are a bit low but okay. The prices look very low, but it would be nice if they were all low. A rich man would have to bargain for hundreds of thousands. In the old days when a lollipop cost a dime, it would still be acceptable. Then the plot is too scattered and there is no main line. I write here and there and there are many places where I can't figure out what I want to write. The qualifications are also poisonous. You can see it without hatching. It is really poisonous. Anyway, a lot of free chapters will expose all the flaws. If you read the free chapters and think you can accept it, then read on!

It doesn't look good. The more I look at it, the more I feel uncomfortable.

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