The Eternal Saint King of the Ancient World

If you write it like this, the protagonist must be able to protect himself before Hongjun joins the road.

From my personal point of view, Da Luo Jinxian raised his mark in the long river of time to the surface of the long river of time. He has no lifespan limit and has reached the conditions of immortality. However, the quasi-sage can destroy the mark of Da Luo Jinxian, which directly leads to the death of Da Luo Jinxian.

The Quasi-Sage, also known as the Hunyuan Golden Immortal, is countless times more powerful than the Daluo Golden Immortal. It is easy to kill the Daluo Golden Immortal.

No sense of immersion at all! ! ! I feel like the progress is so fast. I started with a great witch, and within a few chapters I became an ancestral witch 😰😰😰😰

Good feeling is okay, but too little

It's okay. The layout is very grand. I hope the author can write a different prehistoric era and a different Wu clan.

On the surface, the author is writing about the Witch Clan, but the author is definitely a high-end black man of the Wu Clan The author, according to the way you wrote the previous dozens of chapters, you are so desperate to improve the wisdom and strength of the Witch Clan, and you don't need Hongjun to trick the Monster Clan. If your Witch Clan can do it better than the other Monster Clan, you will be damned. What kind of grudge does the Wu Clan have against you? How can you blame them so much? In the original book, the Witch Tribe was offended by all other races except the Witch Tribe and was able to overpower the Monster Tribe in the first Lich War. However, in your case, the protagonist opened so many traps for the Witch Tribe. As a result, the Monster Tribe's Daluo casually killed the Witch Tribe's Daluo, and he was able to escape unscathed from the pursuit of the Wu Tribe's ancestral witches who suppressed their strength. According to the way you write it, if the protagonist hadn't cheated, would your witch clan have been wiped out by the demon clan before the first lich war? Poor Hongjun, it was clearly the author who was behind the evil plot against the Wu clan, but he was forced to blame them.

8 Recommendation votes, don't you want to add more?

With Ren Zuwu's so-called encouragement, the protagonist actually came up with the idea of ​​being a cannon fodder and would be happy to do so. Whose three views is wrong? Protagonist or author? ? Confused

If a great witch didn't cheat, how could he be able to jump up and down? His life would be nothing more than cannon fodder!

The name Wang Quan is like a joke when put together with the Twelve Ancestral Witches

This book of Ancient Times should be regarded as a mid-range match, and this Daluo Jinxian is quite good.

Seeing that the jade dish was about to be created, Hongjun actually did it himself. I think the author's understanding of prehistoric novels is still insufficient. The prehistoric world is a world that pays attention to cause and effect, and is suppressed by the great road. Hongjun's move is a provocation. Not to mention he is just a saint, even if he seizes the way of heaven, he is seeking death. Pangu's descendants came to him to ask for Pangu's things. This was a great cause and effect. He can only resolve the cause and effect. Unless Hongjun is much stronger than Pangu and an ant is different from an elephant, don't think that once the way of heaven comes out, the great way will not matter. The prehistoric world is a world of cause and effect, and magic can appear just by counting. His essence is still the rule of the great road. Heavenly management. A world that values ​​cause and effect. The reason why the saint plotted against the witch clan was because the witch clan had the great cause and effect of Pangu. No one wants to have karma with Pangu. This is the biggest reason for the Wu clan's misfortune.

The writing is very good, especially the aspect of the Wu Clan cultivating the prehistoric spiritual energy instead of the turbid qi. It makes me happy. What bullshit? Who stipulates that the witch clan must practice turbid qi? They are transformed by Pangu's essence and blood. Just because they were contaminated with a little turbid qi of heaven and earth when they were born, they have been practicing turbid qi from now on. Without the soul, they cannot absorb the spiritual qi. In fact, there are thousands of ancient novels. After reading so many of them, I still can't figure out what turbid air is. Didn't it mean that it turned into the earth after the creation of the world? Some people actually say that the witch clan absorbs turbid energy to practice. Is it possible that all four trillion witch clans are eating dirt? Can eating earth every day make you stronger? This cultivation method is also quite powerful!

The writing is a bit messy and the splicing is forced, and the whole thing is not smooth.

The author forcibly spliced ​​fantasy things into the ancient world, but it was inferior. When something like a god, king or god appears in a fairy novel, it feels very embarrassing. Since the setting of the ancient novel cannot be broken, then we should strive for excellence in the plot. If the magic weapon is mastered, then we should work hard on the magical power.

Douluo and Prehistoric felt very unharmonious. The godhead and the divine elephant's prison-suppressing power were obtained in Prehistoric. It was not just two things, but a collision of the settings of several books. How was the godhead in the world of Panlong created? What conditions are needed to produce a godhead in the world of Panlong? Does the world of Panlong have the Godhead of Destiny and Destruction? Does Panlong have the primordial god? Why does the ancestral witch have no primordial spirit? Can Golden Finger change this? The power of divine elephants to suppress prisons. There are no divine statues in the ancient world. How do you visualize them? Can you visualize others? The protagonist is too jumpy. Strength is the most important thing in ancient times. It is better to focus on improving strength than to do so many chores. The setting of the witch clan is a bit awkward in terms of the power structure and the name. The description and conjecture about Hongjun and Luohu are also very boring. The writing is a bit complicated, messy and not delicate. The advantages and disadvantages of the ancestral witches' cultivation. Can Golden Finger correct this shortcoming? I feel like the protagonist is busying around. Ten more great witches in the Wu clan are not as good as one ancestral witch, and ten more ancestral witches are not as good as one saint

Damn it, there is another hawker selling dog meat in sheep's clothing. You have written a fantasy version of a classical fairy tale worldview. In the past, I read apocalyptic city novels and apocalyptic fantasy novels. It's obviously about urban writing, but it turns out it's all about cultivating immortality. As for the godhead, it is beyond the scope of the standard. It is not in the extended system of Eastern mythology. It's enough to have a list of gods, what else is there to have a godhead?

According to the author's writing, all the prehistoric bosses are of the same mind and believe whatever others say. No matter how powerful you are, you will die if you want to, and you will be speechless.

It looks really embarrassing. You were still working on the system in the prehistoric times. Do you really think Pangu is dead? 😓

Why are readers so angry? If the author is not good at writing, just point it out, or don't read it. New authors need our care.

The Eternal Saint King? It made me think it was a divine machine.

Is there any reward from the author for extra updates? It's totally not enough.

Many people say that this book is a complete mess. The saint steps ten meters with one step, and the great Luo Jinxian picks up a stone and hums. Why haven't I seen such a description at all?

A great witch signs an equal contract with food. How do you want me to watch this?

The first chapter is full of poisonous points. How about going to the secret realm of the heavens in front of the ancestral witch? And what is this secret realm? Something shiny? Is your Daluo Jinxian strength just for show? I can't sense it, and what the hell is a Warcraft? Is it too bad to go to the East China Sea to catch a dragon? Is it too bad to catch a phoenix in Nanming Volcano? Is it too bad to catch a unicorn? It means it's not as good as the small world's Warcraft, right? 😰

I have always wondered why Pangu Kaitian slaughtered three thousand Chaos Demon Gods. Are all Chaos Demon Gods bad? Why do you feel that Pangu is the worst?

Martial arts version of the prehistoric era 😅

After reading everyone's comments, I feel like I can give it up. This is definitely a very low-key prehistoric novel. If the author doesn't have a particularly broad mind, he wouldn't be suitable for writing fantasy. Traditional martial arts is actually quite good.

I think it's okay. Let me talk about my personal views. One: It constantly weakens the protagonist's power and weakens everything the protagonist has gained. Two: It's the author who, in many places, constantly denies the settings of novels written by others. Can you please note that you can just write your own, and you don't have to deny the results written by others at every turn? It seems as if everything others wrote is wrong.