Konoha's Golden Daddy

Well written 😄The vote has been cast and I hope it will be updated more frequently

When the author writes a book, you have to check the details and timeline. In just a few chapters, the timeline here is so wrong that it makes people explode. The ages of Nezuki and Minato are both wrong. Is Minato 16 years old before World War II starts? ? ? It seems that he was only in his early 20s before his death, and his character and character style were also wrongly written. Orochimaru was shaken after the death of Nezuki, and he only began to study immortality during the third war. Before that, he was the inheritance of the will of fire, and the Uchiha station was in the central street before, and it was moved after the Nine-Tails Rebellion. The Ichiraku Noodle House was opened during the Dragon Vein mission, and that was all during the third war.

Moreover, these equipments are actually living in the ninja world, and have been obtained by Orochimaru and other outsiders. This is too poisonous. Even fools know that there is a problem. Just wait to be sliced ​​up. Why not set up a system mall and obtain gold coins by completing tasks and exchanging valuable things, silver or killing people in the ninja world to buy equipment and strengthen yourself. Not to mention skills, it is not very rigorous. Can you identify the enemy by throwing medicine with one skill? You might as well change it to two moves. How can you copy all the skills in the game 😂😂. Now you have only written a few chapters. Why don't you change the settings and read the data to be more rigorous before posting? The writing style should not be so frivolous. It is really uncomfortable to watch. Good subject matter will be wasted. Of course, if the author is purely making fun of himself, just pretend I didn't say anything.