
Immediately After the Immortal Emperor Returned, He Was Discovered by the Whole World
刚仙帝归来就被全世界发现
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- Urban
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- Urban Life
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- 4y ago
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The combat power is so poorly written. I saw chapter 333. It seems that he has not explained the difference between the extraordinary level and the immortal level before. Then I always thought that the extraordinary level S was around the level of Nascent Soul. But when I saw the protagonist comparing the extraordinary level with the immortal level, I discovered it. Level S is already an immortal. When the extraordinary level is first awakened, it is D level. From lowest to highest are DCBAS. If you compare it, just awakening is probably about the golden elixir of cultivating immortals. There are no fighting moves here. It only took more than a year from awakening to level A. Calculating this way, it only takes two years at most to become an immortal. Moreover, the aura of this world comes from other worlds, the kind that has just recovered. The quality is not high yet, the spiritual energy has been revived for a year or two, the tribulations are as numerous as dogs, and immortals are everywhere. As for the protagonist, it took him 30,000 years to become the Immortal Emperor after traveling to the world of immortality. There is also a system inside. The protagonist is so awesome that he can't even detect it. And I was isolated by that system. It's a waste of dozens of dollars. If the author had clearly stated the level before, I would never read it. And the combat power inside was too overwhelming. A person who had almost completed the tribulation, struck with almost all his strength and left a 1 kilometer mark on the ground. The saplings that had been planted for a year trembled with the Immortal Emperor's blow, and flying dust billowed ten meters away. Finally, I want to tell the author to refund my money.
To be honest, the rest of the book is okay, but sometimes the author forces the writing of plots that make people feel uncomfortable, such as the horse protecting the village and the fighting spirit turning into a horse, which are scattered and too deliberate. It makes people want to abandon the book sometimes. I hope the author will stop writing such deliberate jokes in the future. . . If possible, it is recommended to change the previous memes. If it weren't for these deliberately entertaining details, this book's score would have risen even more.
The writing ability is too poor. According to A level, it means cultivating immortals and overcoming tribulations. Did those people on Blue Star go through the tribulation so quickly in just one or two years? It takes two or three years to go from ordinary person to immortal level. The protagonist has been cultivating directly in the world of immortality for 30,000 years before becoming the Immortal Emperor. In this world where spiritual energy has just been revived, he survived the catastrophe and became an immortal in three years? ? When I looked at it earlier, I always thought that the S-class could only be Nascent Soul or Fusion at best. It's so frustrating that I don't want to read it after almost 400 chapters.
When the situation was desperate, the man played the suona. Unexpectedly, 800,000 secret guards came overnight, causing a sensation in the whole of Great Xia. He died seven years ago. When the situation was desperate, the daughter played the suona left by her father and the whole East China Sea exploded The 100-billion-dollar female CEO was declared dead after resuscitation failed. The beautiful woman was saved by a poor boy several times, but the CEO would not marry her unless she was him The wife threw away the trash bag that her idiot husband was using while he was sleeping. Unexpectedly, a mysterious ID fell out of the trash bag. She was shocked on the spot.
When the Immortal Emperor was angry, dust flew up in a radius of ten meters. It was really terrifying The Immortal Emperor struck with all his strength and knocked down the fallen leaves from a three-year-old tree. He was really a hero in the world.
Introduction
Immortal Emperor Xiaofa returned from another world and found his wife and children living in a doghouse. He immediately became so angry that he summoned one hundred thousand heavenly soldiers, built one hundred thousand doghouses, and lived in the doghouse with his wife and children! (It is recommended that the author be canonized as "His Royal Highness the Dog King" to lead all mankind out of the earth)
You are already an Immortal Emperor, what kind of heroine do you need? You have been cheating for tens of thousands of years, do you still need to be forced? It hasn't been broken yet. What kind of fairy has never seen a pure body? How can she still look up to a mortal woman?
I personally think that the author can write urban novels. Emmmm, I feel that this genre is not suitable for you. I still recommend reading more fairy tales or fantasy novels, because as far as the position of the Immortal Emperor is concerned, the mentality is very different from what you described. I remember that there was a book about the Immortal Emperor or something who had returned from cultivation. The author of that book defined the protagonist as those who follow me and prosper and those who go against me die. Of course, I don't ask you to write according to this definition. Urban writing like the return of repair is difficult to control. Just like some authors wrote that after the return of the immortal emperor, he seems to have been given a halo of wisdom, and he has become like a fool who can't walk when he sees a girl. Although it is the feeling of turning into a mortal, I always feel that defining the immortal emperor in this way is not as good as a young man who came down from the mountain to study under the master in the old forest of the mountains. For the above personal opinions, everyone is welcome to give advice, and I refuse to criticize (I wrote this paragraph very seriously)
Alas, do you think I have been spoiled now? When I read books about immortal emperors, divine kings, ancient martial arts, and special forces, I feel dizzy, panicked, and short of breath.
There is a problem. If you encounter a humanoid creature in outer space, you should normally try to communicate first unless the other person actively attacks. What's more, the other person will communicate first using the language of the earth. Astronauts should have this quality.
Has the author seen Shading the Sky and Perfect World? Isn't it trivial to scan the entire universe with divine thoughts? Still need to ask someone?
Listen to me, don't look, I'll persuade you to quit at the beginning
It's really poisonous. There are so many poisonous points in the opening chapter. When the protagonist returned, he said he wanted to hide himself at the beginning, but he was still discovered. How could the majestic Immortal Emperor be discovered by a civilization whose highest weapon is only nuclear bombs? I believe in high civilization, but how can you discover an Immortal Emperor in such a low-level civilization? Later, you said you wanted to take your parents back to the world of immortality, but you didn't leave. Aren't you talking like farts? Don't know how to explain it to your parents? You are already an Immortal Emperor, and you still don't know how to explain it? Isn't it okay to directly show your strength and have a showdown with your parents? I understand everything. The author knows how to disgust readers. I can't stand it anymore. I originally wanted to leave without saying anything, but the author disgusted me.
The author's writing was good at the beginning, but the characterization got worse towards the end, especially the protagonist. Now it doesn't feel like an immortal emperor at all to the readers, and the protagonist's IQ has been lowered. I hope the author can pay more attention to it. The subject matter is quite good, and he can think about the characterization and storyline.
Isn't it easy for the Immortal Emperor to prevent the resurgence of spiritual energy? It's so simple to directly collect all the spiritual energy in the world into your own hands.
The Immortal Emperor from another world returned and found his daughter living in a doghouse. He was so angry that he summoned a hundred thousand heavenly soldiers and generals.
Even though he is an Immortal Emperor, he has not surpassed Daluo Jinxian yet? The earth and so on will be destroyed with just one thought.
Can this be ranked second in the urban category on the new book list? ?
The author's introduction alone is very problematic. Will an Immortal Emperor be discovered? Is this an imperial army spanning the multiverse? Or is this Immortal Emperor the kind of strong man who can move ten meters in one step? The character is not reflected at all. Could it be that the protagonist wants to be discovered? He doesn't understand and has no desire to read. Can the author change the introduction?
I thought it was an era of technological explosion and that the Immortal Emperor could be discovered. It turns out that it has only been three years, and someone is still writing this routine?
The Immortal Emperor returned and found his wife and children living in a doghouse, so he issued an order to summon one hundred thousand heavenly soldiers and heavenly soldiers to build a doghouse for every person on earth and let everyone live in the doghouse together (it is recommended that the author be canonized as "His Royal Highness the Dog King" to lead all mankind out of the earth)
I don't know why when I see the word Immortal Emperor, I think of the Immortal Emperor in the perfect world. The gap between the two is simply impossible to measure. There is too much difference. The Perfect Immortal Emperor can make this kind of Immortal Emperor die countless times with just one thought.
The Immortal Emperor returned to the earth forcefully, because the quantity and quality of the earth's spiritual energy was too low and died suddenly like a battleship that exhausted its resources in the endless deep space. Complete book
The level of this book is not like it was written in 2020 or closer to 2021, but more like it was written in 2014.
How should I put it? The combat power is really too low. The peak of the Immortal King corresponds to the intermediate supreme god, and the intermediate peak of the Immortal Emperor only corresponds to the intermediate peak of the supreme god. Isn't this a bit flexible? Moreover, the description of Gaitian at the beginning only said that they were the supreme gods, but later they became the supreme gods of the extreme realm.
Can the universe where the earth is located be able to bear the Immortal Emperor's way? Not to mention a demon-free world like the Earth, even those with weaker fantasy, high martial arts, and Immortal Emperors are afraid that wherever they go, the universe will turn into chaos, the avenues will be wiped out, and the laws will collapse. The Immortal Emperor is taboo.
The introduction is okay, but I just want to ask, can this Immortal Emperor pretend to be sexy? Is there no poison in x?
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Hurry up, hurry up, two chapters a day is not enough, why don't you break out? Lots of rewards
Author gkd ah, I lost my enthusiasm while reading 😡😡😡
Come on, author, your writing is great! Don't rush into the street 🙂