
I Returned as an Immortal Emperor, Only to Be Discovered by the Whole World
刚仙帝归来就被全世界发现
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.8M Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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When the Immortal Emperor was angry, dust flew up in a radius of ten meters. It was really terrifying The Immortal Emperor struck with all his strength and knocked down the fallen leaves from a three-year-old tree. He was really a hero in the world.
Introduction
Immortal Emperor Xiaofa returned from another world and found his wife and children living in a doghouse. He immediately became so angry that he summoned one hundred thousand heavenly soldiers, built one hundred thousand doghouses, and lived in the doghouse with his wife and children! (It is recommended that the author be canonized as "His Royal Highness the Dog King" to lead all mankind out of the earth)
You are already an Immortal Emperor, what kind of heroine do you need? You have been cheating for tens of thousands of years, do you still need to be forced? It hasn't been broken yet. What kind of fairy has never seen a pure body? How can she still look up to a mortal woman?
I personally think that the author can write urban novels. Emmmm, I feel that this genre is not suitable for you. I still recommend reading more fairy tales or fantasy novels, because as far as the position of the Immortal Emperor is concerned, the mentality is very different from what you described. I remember that there was a book about the Immortal Emperor or something who had returned from cultivation. The author of that book defined the protagonist as those who follow me and prosper and those who go against me die. Of course, I don't ask you to write according to this definition. Urban writing like the return of repair is difficult to control. Just like some authors wrote that after the return of the immortal emperor, he seems to have been given a halo of wisdom, and he has become like a fool who can't walk when he sees a girl. Although it is the feeling of turning into a mortal, I always feel that defining the immortal emperor in this way is not as good as a young man who came down from the mountain to study under the master in the old forest of the mountains. For the above personal opinions, everyone is welcome to give advice, and I refuse to criticize (I wrote this paragraph very seriously)
Alas, do you think I have been spoiled now? When I read books about immortal emperors, divine kings, ancient martial arts, and special forces, I feel dizzy, panicked, and short of breath.
There is a problem. If you encounter a humanoid creature in outer space, you should normally try to communicate first unless the other person actively attacks. What's more, the other person will communicate first using the language of the earth. Astronauts should have this quality.
Has the author seen Shading the Sky and Perfect World? Isn't it trivial to scan the entire universe with divine thoughts? Still need to ask someone?
Listen to me, don't look, I'll persuade you to quit at the beginning
It's really poisonous. There are so many poisonous points in the opening chapter. When the protagonist returned, he said he wanted to hide himself at the beginning, but he was still discovered. How could the majestic Immortal Emperor be discovered by a civilization whose highest weapon is only nuclear bombs? I believe in high civilization, but how can you discover an Immortal Emperor in such a low-level civilization? Later, you said you wanted to take your parents back to the world of immortality, but you didn't leave. Aren't you talking like farts? Don't know how to explain it to your parents? You are already an Immortal Emperor, and you still don't know how to explain it? Isn't it okay to directly show your strength and have a showdown with your parents? I understand everything. The author knows how to disgust readers. I can't stand it anymore. I originally wanted to leave without saying anything, but the author disgusted me.
The author's writing was good at the beginning, but the characterization got worse towards the end, especially the protagonist. Now it doesn't feel like an immortal emperor at all to the readers, and the protagonist's IQ has been lowered. I hope the author can pay more attention to it. The subject matter is quite good, and he can think about the characterization and storyline.
Isn't it easy for the Immortal Emperor to prevent the resurgence of spiritual energy? It's so simple to directly collect all the spiritual energy in the world into your own hands.