The Fourth Natural Disaster in the Late Ming Dynasty

I found that the plot descriptions in some chapters are too complicated. These plots can obviously be mentioned in one sentence, or a better way can be used to show the sensory experience that the author wants to bring us. To put it simply, it is too watery. For example, the duel between Xiong and Ye was so detailed that it made people irritated. I like the author's delicate writing style very much, because it looks very real. In this age of impatient Internet writing, it is refreshing to see such writing. It feels like eating spicy hot pot, which is very spicy, and then taking a sip of Coke with 2 to 3 degrees Celsius. It makes people feel very comfortable and even better. But if it's too delicate, it's like drinking too much iced Coke, feeling too gassy in the stomach, and then burping, and the spicy taste in the stomach rushes back, which is disgusting.

There are a lot of trolls in the comment area who say that to be honest, I haven't read this book. I just read the introduction and wanted to ask the author if he has found a job? I personally was persuaded to read this book after reading the introduction. In one sentence: "He~tui"

The author of the novel is very knowledgeable It is full of useful information and you can learn a lot The plot is cruel and vicious, and you can't distinguish the priorities The narration is short and long It is a very good literary work, but it cannot be regarded as an online novel at all.

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I gritted my teeth and listened to Chapter 48, but I couldn't listen anymore. It was agreed to expel the Tartars, but it ended up looking like this. In fact, there are many places that are unnecessary to write, and they stray from the topic. The theme should be the fourth natural disaster, killing people indiscriminately, fighting overseas, and then using modern knowledge to develop industry to fight their way out of the earth. So what did you write? . .

Crazy brain, the last few chapters have been a little off. Please keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to your explosion. Come on come on.

Has the author ever thought about filling in the Tsushima Strait? And it is very 'possible', 'possible' and 'possible' for players to form alliances (expel that and restore that) by doing this, so the Qing army is in urgent need of strengthening. 'Possibility': Chinese word [Definition] The various trends contained in things that indicate the development of things are potential and unrealized. Reality refers to all things that actually exist. Possibility is often included in the development process of things. Under certain conditions, only one possibility will turn into reality. After this possibility becomes reality, within a certain period of time, it will be difficult for all other possibilities to become reality.

This alternating way of writing at the beginning is really rare. It makes an old bookworm like me shine. The writing style is good and the writing is vivid. It's like a fairy! It's a pity that the more I read, the more awkward it becomes. The realistic writing style and the forced intelligence plot create a strong sense of tearing. And in this sense of tearing, the author also wants readers to feel their nostalgia for early online games, so people cannot read it into the article. Then the main plot is unclear. Are they preparing to make money or fight against the Qing Dynasty? The author said in other answers that the setting cannot be falsely advertised, but have you never eaten pork and never seen a pig run away? What does it have to do with the fact that the mall can only sell ingots and my NPC selling skins🐶? What is the relationship between the currency Yuanbao used by players and the background silver used by indigenous people🐶? ... The final right of interpretation rests with the protagonist. Doesn't it have to be the protagonist's final say on how to interpret it? Why do you want to make money by selling food and be sanctioned by players? TM is all an excuse. You directly set it to buy something in the mall to restore satiety. Eating indigenous food will cause you to lose blood. The scientific explanation is that players are all special humans composed of right-handed genes. If you eat food made of left-handed genes, you will lose blood. Poisoned to death... There are too many ways to solve it, but the protagonist is forced by the author to suppress his IQ and use lame techniques to act like a clown🤡. He just walks with the stupidest steps. Just like this, he still wants to make readers laugh. I can't laugh, tears are rolling in my eyes🐶... To give a few examples, the protagonist made a tool man with immortal style to deliver a message to Shi Kefa, but was stopped by the city gate (the corruption of Dameng is also described here). Logically speaking, even if he is not given a lesson, he should just break in! If it gets a little too big, someone will definitely take care of it. They will decorate it, fly directly, and add some special effects such as lotuses growing step by step. Will Shi Kefa dare to come out? But what does the protagonist do? I'm asking for a dream. I'm not asking for a normal request. I'm going to give you a dream of Cthulhu. Is it really fun to forcefully add something that has nothing to do with the plot? Then there are the street signs. Not to mention the metal and wood being stolen, why don't you get a stone one instead of a mud one? Or even be more direct and make something that only players can see? Earlier in the plot, the protagonist knew how to make a high-density material that looked like a wooden fence, but why did he forget about it later on? To sum up, the author either has no writing skills or can't write, or he is addicted to self-pleasure and wants readers to miss ancient games with him. However, the background and purpose of the choice create a sense of tearing, which leads to the early dismissal of Xiaobai (multiple twists and realistic techniques that make Xiaobai have no sense of substitution), and the later dismissal of old bookworms (forcibly demoralizing, addicted to self-entertainment, and the plot is blunt). Finally, I hope the author can restrain himself a little. It was supposed to be a small but beautiful work, but now it is becoming more and more useless!

After reading Chapter 38, Fairy Bear can't get out of my mind~ It was a clumsy work, and Bo Jun smiled (=^▽^=) Hahaha, I finally drew it hahaha~~~

20201206 I finished reading it in the middle of the night and voted for recommendation. Let me share my thoughts The author's writing is average and there are no logical flaws. In the PS section, it can be seen that the author has checked the information. There are no big mistakes and the book is written seriously. These are all pleasing points This book is creatively excellent. History + player flow. At the beginning, I have read another book with the same theme that has been eunuch for seven months. This writing has great potential The following is my personal opinion The author thinks your writing is very attractive. Although there are problems that other readers have said before, the plot part is sometimes too little and the explanation part is too much. This consumes the reader's patience, but the overall situation is still good enough to cover up the flaws What is the main highlight? It is the creativity of the theme and the interestingness of the content it extends. Personally, I think the player's behavior is quite satisfactory, but what attracts attention is the slutty operation. For example, stand-alone players like to go to NPCs' homes to collect supplies, various stuck bugs, guess the plot, and find hidden objects; online game players have achievement challenges such as group books, world's first kills, golden groups, hairy equipment, etc.; In addition, stand-alone online games do not distinguish between love and hate; for example, when it comes to names, "Mom said if the name is too long, people will find it if you hide it behind a tree" and other funny names. The collision of the absurd and disorderly behaviors of players I think this is what attracts me the most. Here is a book recommended by the author. The portrayal of players in Sister's (Creating the Game World) is very spiritual. Of course, the fireproof girl prprpr Finally, this is just the words of my family. You take the essence and discard the dross. I wish this book will get better and better. I wish the author's writing skills will become better and better like a distant pupil. This book will be a god.

Brain madness in ideal Brain madness in reality

The author is really a genius. This gamer alien type can also write about the feeling of frustration. . . . . . It feels like the protagonist's IQ is really low. . . . . Slipping away

The author should also know the truth of the three golden chapters. I resisted reading the fourth chapter, and then nothing happened. I don't even know who the protagonist is, what you are writing about, what you want to express, and I don't think your writing seems very personal. The author, you will know by looking at the comment area. No matter how good your subsequent content is, few people will be able to continue reading it.

It seemed interesting at first, but after thinking about it, I suddenly felt that it was quite nonsense. The author's so-called story world is completely nonsense. For example, since the protagonist is the only god in the universe at the singularity, let alone whether there are other advanced civilizations or alien high-tech in a super galaxy, it is just that in In the time and space of the late Ming Dynasty on earth, as long as the protagonist accelerates the time flow of the earth and improves the historical process, then the so-called getting rich in real time and space is simply too simple. Even according to the alien civilizations in the parallel time and space universe, it is estimated that the protagonist can become a super leader in real society.

The first photo is of Tongguan City looking north and south. The valley in the middle is the forbidden ditch. Three hundred years ago, twelve connected cities were built along this passage. Ma Shiyao also went around behind the Qing army from here. The second photo is an old photo of Tongguan before it was demolished.

I hope I can write two chapters of Enemy of the People when I have nothing to do.

I just collected this introduction. What is the biggest feature of the Fourth Natural Disaster? It is not upgrades and learning abilities, nor is it advanced ideas and whimsical ideas. It is infinite immortality. This is the reason why it can be compared with mechanical legions, undead natural disasters, abyss demons, insect swarms, biohazards, etc. As long as there are rewards and the health bar is bright.

I've read Chapter 51. It was interesting the first time I read it, but the more I read it, the more poisonous it became. The pig's feet are set up to make money, but the whole book is not designed to make money. It's only one million for a city lord. Are you trying to persuade me to quit? Do I scare people away first and then wait for the author to forcefully write back? The setting conflicts with the plot development. Moreover, the more and more witticisms he writes appear to be more and more clumsy. Isn't the ready-made first-charge monthly card good for making money? How much is 30 per person when the AI ​​comes out? Poison!

The various settings are indeed quite complicated. I just skip it. The player's perspective is an immersive game, the indigenous perspective is the real world, and many heroes suddenly come. The two misaligned perspectives produce interesting stories. For example, thousands of fine war horses are considered a huge wealth by the natives, but they are a burden to the heroes. Historical time travel has been written so far that readers are familiar with various routines. This game plus history combo is worth exploring.

What the hell is written here? Because when you click on this name, you raise your hands to read it.

Apart from the setting of the historical game, it's hard to describe the rest! The way the players control the characters is too poor, the game system settings are too bad, there is no central main line, and there is a lack of sense of substitution!

Writing a supporting role for more than 10 chapters almost makes people think that Han Jian is the protagonist Readers have to wait for 16 chapters before the protagonist begins to appear, but once he appears, you will feel that the protagonist is very frustrated, and some plots may make you think that the protagonist is a fool. If you think it is a fun historical book, you can put down your expectations. Don't be misled by the previous paragraph about Taoist priests and cavalry jumping from the city wall. This book is not actually fun.

Taking chapter 16 as the beginning, it is no problem to double the score tenfold or fivefold. The biggest problem at the beginning is that the text is not on point. I believe that many readers were deceived by the title of the book and read the introduction. It is not bad. But... I patiently read a few pictures of the good guys all in the group portrait description. The players only spoke in fragments, without the main context and perspective. This result is not unexpected. It's a pity for this novel, it's a masterpiece worth tens of thousands of orders.

Now it seems that the main mission has appeared, and the future plot development can be seen a little bit. However, I personally feel that it is best to keep this kind of ridiculous battle plot. The Emperor of the Mountain Valley next door has the same feeling in the opening paragraphs, but unfortunately it is still unconventional in the end. After all, in non-game-themed historical novels, no matter how they are written in the early stage, the plot trend in the later stage will still be the same plot. After becoming a prince, they will attack everywhere. It is the turn of the foreign barbarians to unify the country (some barbarians are already finished in the domestic plot). At most, they will unify the world. I have never seen colonization of alien planets... Technology Tree Not to mention, in summary, it can be summed up as flintlock miniguns, steelmaking, tap water, glass cement, sugar and salt, steam engines, ironclads, and industrialization of ironclads... So it feels like it is just like what was said in the comment area. The subject matter of historical novels has indeed reached a bottleneck. In the traditional sense of time travel, even if you have a system, no one has the ability to make all your subordinates not eat, drink, or fear death... After all, this is considered fantasy. So I think the most valuable thing about game-themed historical novels is the unbridled imagination, and this happens to be one of the greatest advantages of Bai's works. The meticulous details and psychological descriptions are very helpful in shaping the characters. A considerable number of historical novels will only describe the enemy as being extremely contemptuous and dismissive of the protagonist before the war. After being killed and defeated, he fled in panic. After being caught, he knelt down to beg for mercy but begged for his life... A typical tool man who could not be more typical. But in fact, even if the above plots are written, they are good, but the most depressing point is that many novels lack details. A villain can only say a few words from the beginning to the end, and from a descriptive level, it is too passive. In fact, describing it from an indigenous perspective does not end in just two or three chapters, which is indeed innovative. (Although many novels also describe this kind of plot, most of them just let them exclaim a few words to show the protagonist's awesomeness. In the end, it is not much different from the audience's exclamation when competing in a fantasy novel. . ) The interesting thing about gamers is that they don't need supplies and morale in the conventional sense. As long as there is a mission, they are truly brave and fearless. But if it is written like this, it seems a bit brainless. It cannot be said that the army of players is pushing the world all the way. That would be unconventional. So what I am looking forward to more is to see more wonderful and funny performances of these heroes - in the extremely dark background of the late Ming Dynasty, such a group of funny heroes appeared - this kind of absurd and funny story, which seems to be reckless and ignorant, but also has the meaning of salvation, actually reveals a kind of cute feeling. (I hope I can write more funny war scenes in the future) Of course, I am not saying that I firmly deny that kind of cheating plot, but the foreshadowing should be as good as possible, and it is best to make this cheating full of laughter (for example, a god descends from the sky and rushes into the enemy army, but ends up running out of energy in the middle of the battle [fn =58]) The reactions of the indigenous people should also be written as well as possible, because when facing different tasks and different players, the situations they encounter and the response plans they need to make are also different. This also provides a lot of interesting points to watch, without writing a survival routine to the end. And if this aspect is well written, it will feel like human wisdom versus cheating players, because the players are definitely in their own system at present, so they will inevitably be attacked by the indigenous people. In this process, there may even be troops and weapons specially cultivated for cheating players. In this regard, It also attaches great importance to imagination (it is even possible that some players will serve the indigenous people later in the game due to tasks or voluntary wishes, which is equivalent to adding a cheat to the villain, which will make the plot more interesting) In short, I hope the author can keep this kind of happy and cute plot 😁

By the way, Lao Xiong and Zhang Xiaofan, the pair of CPs, are the protagonists. Those two dog planners don't even have a sense of existence.

Are there any similar books for historical players that you would recommend?

I didn't even understand what the author was writing, it was nonsense.

It's really very average, not a bit refreshing, it feels like I'm just keeping a running account

Where is the crazy guy making a fortune now😄