A National Role Model

Ah, what a magical author, he writes well! ! ! I haven't encountered a novel with this theme for a long time. It starts with Metamorphosis and slowly unfolds the story surrounding Yan Xu's growth as a young boy. I like the characters written by the author, they are vivid! Interesting! No greasy feeling! There is no big protagonist halo! The young man relied on his own mind and past life experiences to improve his family's predicament step by step. It was so exciting and inspiring to watch. Ahem, I spent three days fishing and two days posting nets, but I no longer have the perseverance. I admire Yan Xu more and more, and the children who are changing themselves also place their hopes on the young man. I want to change for the better. Come on! Me vs me. I also want to be bright and lively! Thank you for your work, love it!

I read twenty chapters of this novel and gave up. To be precise, I wanted to give up after reading Chapter 19! I really can't bear the thought of a malnourished eight-year-old second-grade primary school student defeating five gangsters with his bare hands. Even Ip Man didn't dare to write that! You must know that boys generally develop later, usually starting to develop rapidly at the age of eleven or twelve. This is why it is often seen that many girls in the first grade of junior high school are taller than boys! You let a underdeveloped child defeat five underdeveloped teenagers with his bare hands. Are you writing a fairy tale? In the first eighteen chapters, I thought I found a book of fairy herbs, but in chapter nineteen, a bottle of poison came, and it was the most poisonous Hedinghong! I consider myself to be pretty good at resisting poison, so I usually just ignore forced conflicts, but this bottle of Crane Crown Red caused me to die from the poison! Forgive me for writing so many words, but a good fairy grass suddenly turned into poison, and I came here to complain. I hope the author can pay attention to such issues and not be deviated from reality! It's a long way to go, see you later

I personally think Wang Lei's death was a failure. Please allow me to speak slowly. First of all, I really like this kind of little pretentious article that is refreshing and has a bit of positive energy in daily life. Second, the author's writing style is very good. It won't be too exaggerated, it's reasonable and orderly, and the causes and consequences are well arranged. He will not waste pen and ink on unnecessary things, nor will he ignore some small details that can tug at the heartstrings. The friendship of several children on a tricycle. The gift of rice balls. The strength and unity of people in the face of difficulties. The dilemmas written by the author here are not only the difficulties faced by human beings in social life, but also people's powerlessness in the face of natural disasters and their determination to unite and face difficulties. Third, it can be seen that the author is deliberately promoting positive energy. The protagonist of school bullying comes forward. During the earthquake, a friend in need is a friend indeed, and the kindness of the rich kids. Good things come to you in the Tang and Yuan lines. Grandpa Wang, the scavenger who has a correct outlook on life, Wang Lei, who lives a better and better life as long as he has the right attitude and never gives up, and so on. Then the poisonous point came. Flash flood pet savior, girl died. Lin's grandson is crooked and needs to be straightened, but there is no follow-up. Dad Wang stood up bravely, and Dad Wang died. Wang Lei changed his ways and made progress day by day. Wang Lei died. Wang Ma is a mistress and breaks up other people's families. It doesn't matter. Grandma Wang is also seriously ill. I just want to ask if the person surnamed Wang is the best author of the film, and everyone in the family will end well. Even if you don't follow up, when the protagonist becomes famous one day in the future and returns to his hometown, he will see a familiar ordinary man dotingly holding an ordinary child with a cat-like face eating ice cream. There is also an ordinary woman beside him with a happy smile and handed over a tissue, followed by a pair of ordinary old people. Sighing, that bad boy now has an ordinary but happy family! Just ask the author if he can't write like this! Isn't it the highlight? ! I don't know if there are any poisonous spots in the back. When I saw where Wang Lei died, I wasn't in the mood to watch. After looking at the catalog, the rest is just the protagonist pretending to move towards the Sunshine Avenue. Emotions have no future except for the protagonist, a poor kid. When the protagonist used Wang Lei's example to give a speech, I thought Wang Lei was a highlight. In the end, Zhou Yuelin reformed, but Wang Lei reformed and died. Although I know the author didn't mean that, the idea is that children from rich families are different from children from poor families. I hadn't noticed it at first, but after Wang Lei died, I thought about it and found that none of the people around the protagonist seemed to have children from poor families. I know the author wants to express that as long as you are good enough and work hard, everyone can fit into that circle. But I don't know whether the author wants to promote positive energy or spread negative energy. Because except for the protagonist, no child from a poor family seems to have succeeded. Even the kid surnamed Liu who was originally the protagonist's roommate didn't seem to have a simple life experience. The same goes for the protagonist's father, who could just throw away a million dollars. Me? ? ? . Once again, I stopped watching it after Wang Lei died. It was too poisonous. After looking at the table of contents at the back, I saw that apart from setting up a martyr foundation (which is also played by wealthy people), the rest is all about the protagonist showing off. So if the author later writes some other poor kid character who becomes famous, I don't know about it. That's it, goodbye.

Is this positive energy or negative energy? Rich children get better and better after reforming, while poor children die immediately after reforming. The rapist's father had to be whitewashed because he was good-looking At first I thought it was a fairy tale, but now when I look back and realize what the protagonist did, is it the official opening of "The Metamorphosis"? Everything is for the rich

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Test the poison. Let me tell you after reading dozens of chapters. 1. The main line is unclear. You should just go about your daily routine and become popular in variety shows, and then follow the main line and become a national role model. As a result, I went astray as I wrote. Inexplicable disasters and inexplicable times of school bullying. 2. The protagonist's life experience. Does the author know why there are so many Qidian orphanages? Because it's difficult to write about one's life experience, or I can't write well and just skip it. I have to write about what's special about my life experience, and it's written in such an incorrect way. However, there are still people in the comment section who have correct views and are convinced. The protagonist's mother was raped and then married the protagonist's father without calling the police because she was handsome. If you kill your parents to the point where you can't stand it, it will be so bloody. But the author insists on clearing his name. He is a scumbag who is a rapist, then ignores his family, lets his son starve to death, and allows the protagonist's soul to travel through. How else does he need to clear his name? He also spends a lot of time describing the appearance of the protagonist's father. Really top level understanding.

To be honest, the author is just an ordinary person. Reading some comments really affects the mood of coding. Sometimes you comment before you finish reading. Maybe you feel happy at the time, but the author really makes you doubt your life after reading it. The characters will always make sense when written, but just because the plot hasn't gotten there yet, it doesn't mean that the author is giving you a low word count. The author is really just an ordinary person who has to go bald every day just to code words and think about plots! ! It's impossible to take care of every aspect of every place, so the author accepts and corrects some small bugs, but you can't say that a certain plot is nt, right? ? ? As for the three views of thinking, individuals are different, so the author will not comment. Therefore, the author sometimes does not express opinions just because he does not want to spoil the story... He does not want to spoil the story! Alas, I have been holding it back for so long, so this is the end of the explanation. You won't bother to read any more. The author will not post a post to explain it to you later. After all, the author is afraid of spoilers if he says too much... I just ask you to be merciful, okay? ? ? ? Ps: In terms of updates, it will be released on the 1st, and it should be updated twice a day by then. The conditions for additional updates will also be announced at that time🐙

Chapter 189, Nobel Prize in Mathematics, I am embarrassed to see whether it can be changed. There is no Nobel Prize in mathematics.

He expressed that he does not accept the whitewashing of the protagonist's father. The more whitewashing he gets, the more disgusting he becomes. It's better to let him die early and be reincarnated. I support him very much.

The writing is good and the concept is good. There are just a lot of problems with the writing. The basic skills were not done well. For example, when I wrote that when the protagonist transferred to the Department of Mathematics, he actually wanted to win the Nobel Prize, it was an instant drama. There is no Nobel Prize in mathematics. The highest achievement is the Fitz Medal. The author saw it. Just go back and change it. To avoid being scolded, in the chapter three years later