A National Role Model

Wow, what an amazing author! The writing is so good!!! It's been a long time since I've encountered a novel of this genre, starting with a reality show and gradually unfolding the story of young Yan Xu's growth. I love the characters the author created—they're vivid, interesting, and not at all cheesy or overly overpowering!

I read twenty chapters of this novel and then gave up. To be precise, I wanted to give up after finishing the nineteenth chapter! I simply couldn't bear the thought of a malnourished eight-year-old second-grade student defeating five thugs with his bare hands. Even Ip Man wouldn't dare write something like that!

In my opinion, Wang Lei's death was a mistake. Please allow me to explain. First, I really like this kind of lighthearted, positive, and slightly pretentious writing. Secondly, the author's writing style is quite good. It's not exaggerated, but logical and well-organized, with a clear arrangement of cause and effect, beginnings and endings.

Is this positive or negative energy? Rich kids become better after reforming, while poor kids die immediately after reforming. Even a rapist father is being whitewashed because he's good-looking. At first, I thought it was a fantastic book, but now that I think about it, is the protagonist's behavior just like the opening scene of "Metamorphosis"? Everything is geared towards the rich.

Keep it up! Here's a small token of my support!

Testing the waters. I've read dozens of chapters, so let me share my thoughts. 1. The main storyline is unclear. If you were to follow a slice-of-life approach, the variety show would become a hit, and the character would eventually become a national role model. Instead, the story veers off course. There are inexplicable disasters and inexplicable incidents involving school bullying.

To be honest, the author is just an ordinary person. Some comments really affect the author's mood while writing. Sometimes you comment before you've finished reading, and you might feel good at the time, but the author will really question life after reading them.

Chapter 189, "Nobel Prize in Mathematics," could you please revise it? I find it embarrassing to read. There is no Nobel Prize in Mathematics.

I don't accept the whitewashing of the protagonist's father. The more he's whitewashed, the more disgusting it becomes. I'd rather he die and be reincarnated sooner. Upvote if you agree.

The writing style and concept are good. However, there are many problems. The basics aren't solid. For example, when the protagonist transfers to the mathematics department, he says he wants to win a Nobel Prize, which is jarring. There's no Nobel Prize in mathematics. The highest achievement is the FitzGerald. The author should see this and go back to revise it to avoid being criticized, especially in the chapter three years later.