I Really Have No Talent

There are too many words to make it difficult to read, please describe it in more detail

I'm invincible, hehe, but I'm afraid of those scum, so I can't be exposed. You didn't expect it. Oh, I worry about the country and the people, but I can't be exposed. Hehe, this book only has one word, awesome.

Some clouds and mountains are shrouded in mist, and the order is not very clear.

Don't do it. I'm really embarrassed to watch it. It's too much. Brother, can you write it in another way? Look at me when you say this. Now that I see this sentence, I don't want to stop reading. It's so embarrassing. Do you know that I really can't stand it anymore. You must be punished even though I'm far away. I've already played it to death for you.

This protagonist 🐶 is too much. He is invincible and does nothing. He can hide it and not expose it. What is the use of being invincible? If it doesn't work, just change to a vest. Is this the loneliness of being invincible?

I don't know what story the author wants to tell and what the main plot is. If the writing is not good, it will probably collapse. When I saw the release stage, I couldn't stand it anymore. It really didn't feel good...

Is the protagonist not going to appear? Or does this book have no protagonist at all? You have used dozens of recent photos to explain other background stories. The protagonist has no sense of existence at all, even if there is no description in the article. How can people understand what you are going to write? Are you making up your mind? 🤔🤔🤔

Except for the first few chapters, the pig's feet are missing later on. There is no future for you to write like this. Doesn't the author himself read it?

It has been said that killing a great master in the divine realm is as scary as an ant! Forced wisdom!

It was snowing and the fighting was so fierce. The fighting three barbarians still had the morale to fight. It would be better if they didn't all freeze to death. Most of the soldiers fighting are ordinary warriors, not innate. They should all wear armor, cloth armor and other protective equipment, which will not be very full and warm.

The writing is too sparse. It would be better if the plot were more compact. The protagonist is always in trouble, and the emotional line is extremely embarrassing😓. Come on←_←

Invincibility is meaningless if it is not used to show off.

The protagonist's presence is so low, I thought the protagonist was Emperor Xia

It doesn't take the life and death of ordinary people seriously at all, and the enemy is still fighting among themselves. Although it is very realistic and cruel, this kind of writing is destined to not be popular. After all, most people read novels just to pass the time, not to be abused.

I can only copy poems, but the places used are not right💩💩💩

I often can't find pig's feet for several chapters.

Not to mention what he wrote, he sacrificed millions of people to fulfill his ambitions, haha

Not bad. It's a good book once it's written.

Regarding this book, it is my first time to write it, so I don't know what to write about it, but I will try my best to write it. If there is anything inappropriate, please comment and leave a message.

Let me go away and write, killing my sister proves it

There are some flaws, but they need to be self-examined and corrected later. Persistence is the most important thing.