Douluo's Empty Stick

Please comment, I hope the author can improve it as much as possible Advantage 1: The protagonist follows his own path, which is fresh and does not follow Shrek and the Hall of Spirits. The setting is good and the plot is well arranged. Advantage 2: This book is not a mindless self-interested white text. Disadvantage 1: It may be a debut novel. The article reads like a running account, and some parts of the first and last sentences are not detailed enough. Disadvantage 2: There are a lot of typos.

Let the heroine do a little dance, combining the soul skill "Pole Dance"

I feel that when writing about Tang San, I can give Tang San a good test. After all, in Douluo II, doesn't he like to test others the most? Then let him enjoy it himself.

Shouldn't the hollow be called a tube? What's the stick called?

Metal attribute + thunder attribute + barrel = electromagnetic gun

The protagonist has no bright spots. I haven't seen the protagonist's outstanding personal abilities so far. He is not as good as the supporting character Wang Le. The four-skill physical clone can also detonate. It would be even better if it can assist in training. Wouldn't it be good to give this skill to the protagonist? If you don't give the protagonist a level five innate soul power, and if you don't give him some background plug-ins, he will be titled Douluo, and even the Soul Saint won't be able to reach it.

Hollow stick? ? ? Eco-friendly straws? ?

I'm looking for Douluo fans like this book. I can't stand Invincible anymore.

Are there any reasonable Douluo fans? Asking for introduction

If Tang San doesn't like it, just cut off his hope of becoming a god. As long as he takes away the Poseidon's Heart and kills the King of Slaughter, Tang San won't be able to become the God King.

This fanfic is the best one, there is no other slapping Long Aotian in the face, the story line is very good, you are not a waste or a genius at the beginning, just plain and simple.

I feel that the biggest problem with this book is that the pig's feet are not prominent, lack of excitement, and are too bland. Training the next generation by having to form seven people is simply rigid and cliche, with nothing new.

This book is quite well written, I think! It's a pity that it's not that exciting, it's too bland.

To be honest, this book is very good among Douluo fans yysy The staggered timeline is innovative More new characters, at least they are flesh and blood, and some stories are not like other novels that force NPCs It is good that the protagonist does not cheat. The main reason is that the author can hold it back The articles are all driven by plots and are not too simple. How can the protagonist compete with the enemy if he does not create a force? In the world of Douluo, there are not many lone rangers who die. It's just that the skills are too single. (I use the protagonist's weapon as a rifle or sniper rifle with various enchanted bullets)

I want to write a Douluo fanfic. The protagonist is a disciple of Shaolin Temple who went crazy while practicing martial arts and traveled to Douluo Yi to become the grandson of the master of the hidden sect Noumenon Sect. The protagonist's awakened martial soul is a mutated body similar to Luffy's rubber fruit, which has extremely strong toughness. Because the protagonist practices the martial arts of the Shaolin Temple, the martial soul is completely integrated with himself, and his body is greatly strengthened. The disadvantage is that he cannot obtain active soul skills and can only passively increase his body. The first soul ring: 900-year-old rubber tree. Soul Skill: Greatly increases the body's toughness, immune to physical attacks below the Soul Master level, developed by Luffy in second gear Second Soul Ring: 9000-year-old Xuanming Turtle. Soul skills: steel and iron bones, body hardness exceeding steel, immune to any damage below the soul king level Third soul ring: 20,000 Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear. Soul skill: Dark gold body, immune to control of no more than two realms, enhanced body strength. Soul Bone: Dark gold claws, with powerful attack power. Luffy's third gear development The fourth soul ring: 50,000-year-old Blue Silver King. Soul skill: Life recovery. After being injured, the body automatically absorbs soul power to restore the injury. The fifth soul ring: the 90,000-year-old Giant Ant Emperor. Soul skills: strange power, as powerful as Titled Douluo Sixth soul ring: One hundred thousand year Youxiang Qiluo immortal product. Soul Skill: Immune to any poison below gods. The soul power is restored, the recovery power is greatly increased, and it cooperates with the fourth soul skill to regenerate the soul and restore the field. The seventh soul ring: the 300,000-year-old king squid. Soul Skill: Body of Life, absorbing soul power can restore any injuries, can regenerate broken limbs, crush the ninety-fifth level titled Douluo with physical strength, greatly enhance the physical endurance, and develop Luffy's fourth gear. Eighth Soul Ring: Emperor Tian, ​​Soul Skill: Space Affinity, can control space at will Ninth Soul Ring: Deep Sea Demonic Whale King, Soul Skill: Vast Power, Body God-King Level The protagonist uses powerful soul power to refine the 100,000-year-old Youxiang Qiluo skull, the 300,000-year-old King Squid's double leg bones, the left arm bone of Emperor Tian, ​​the right arm bone of the Dragon Divine Claw, and the torso bone of the Deep Sea Demonic Whale into his own divine costume. The invincible protagonist unites the world and establishes the Shaolin Temple. Through the faith of the entire continent, break through level 100, kill the Silver Dragon King, and achieve the God of Order. Use your own powerful strength to lift the restrictions on soul beasts, and restrict soul masters from harming soul beasts when they don't need soul rings. Soul beasts can only harm soul masters who need soul rings. Build a spirit transfer tower and ascend to the divine world

It's pretty good to watch, but it overwhelms the protagonist. His combat power is the weakest in the team. There is no reward for the God Test. After becoming a god, he is also the weakest among the gods. His name is a very high-end creation god, but he doesn't have any spatial skills, so he doesn't deserve the name at all. He is just called the God of Sand. Tang San, who becomes a god at the age of 25 and kills people through leaps and bounds, is a normal protagonist, right?

The writing is quite good, much better than the title Douluo, Hundred Thousand Years, and Million Years Soul Rings at the beginning.

The bland writing style, like the introduction, is pitiful. All the sentences are basically plain and simple sentences. I have never seen you use a series of rhetorical techniques and all the declarative sentences. Some people believe you even if you say you are a primary school student. However, there are too few starting points like you. Most of them use rhetoric indiscriminately, make a lot of wrong sentences, and a group of funny people appear from time to time. Some of the funny themes are quite good, but they mess it up. It is really a pity. You have no desire to watch at all. It's up to you to get angry, just like pouring cold water on you in winter. Some places are simple and clear, while some places are focused on description, and the details are appropriate. After reading it for so long, I don't even know what you want to write (you have read more than 50 chapters, and the history of the protagonist's becoming stronger in the world? It's bland, no fun, and meaningless). You have to learn to highlight some aspects! I advise you to write in Chinese. Your style is too concise, it is just a mudslide at the beginning, and the writing style of Douluo-themed novels is basically very passionate and fast-paced. You are also very fast-paced, with only about 2,000 words per page (probably not that many, personally I think it is only about 1,000 words) It completely belongs to Douluo's new style - but no one will imitate it for sure - Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

I personally feel that this book is well written.

Let's talk about running accounts! It's not even a running account! But it really is! There is no passion, no plot, and no sense of counterattack. I only think of the three-no products here! !

Author, author, please let the anchor of Kuaishou update

It was okay in the early stage, but I added too many things in the later stage, and my personal life did not match the progress of the plot. I can only say that it is barely watchable.

Directly perform a martial soul fusion skill with Xiao Wu. Pole dancing increases white charm by 100% to reflect all damage.

The author used to play that guy JJ in the comment section when he was a kid?

Requesting the author to update Babel Monkey

Cut the nine colors into seven colors, it really belongs to you, waste

Do you know that you, a "hundred-thousand-year-old soul beast", almost confused me with the "concept of the soul beast race"? If "soul beasts" were a race, would Tian Meng be hunted down by the Ice Emperor as soon as he left the house, and then become a nutritional supplement for Di Tian and the others? When you wrote this book, Dou Er had already been released, right? I can also write about how much this thing is worth!

The further the setting goes, the more disgusting it becomes. Meng Yiran's third soul skill, the snake staff, turns into a snake? Do you know that the original setting of "Weapon Soul Beast Soul Transformation" exists, and it only exists in the "Weapon Soul True Body" of some special "Weapon Soul". The first one used is "Snake Spear Douluo"! You set the seventh soul skill as the third soul skill, which is a bit of a benefit!

You all know the concept of soul, which means you have watched Dou Er, and then you say to me, "Soul beasts cannot become gods"? Is that "unable to become a god"? That is "not allowed to become a god". There are huge differences between the two, okay?

In the end, I had to make a time traveler to make people sick. Use a creative idea to write it with such virtue. You are really a talent.