Doomsday Red Alert Commander

1. Opinions on this book: Based on the current content of this book, the potential is very high, and there are no poisonous points yet. The subsequent plot is also very expandable, and there are not many loyal fans of Red Alert. In addition, the author has sufficient time to create, so I think this book is worth investing in. 2. Suggestions about this book: Red Alert, its highlights are not limited to the three common writing methods of violent soldiers, flat push, and farming. Apocalyptic literature inherently provides a good creative soil for Red Alert (or other RTS). But what are the factors that make most Red Alert works boring to readers? First, the protagonist has no sense of presence throughout the entire later period. Secondly, in the later stage, there is nothing interesting except pushing or completing tasks, fighting against powerful enemies, accumulating resources, etc. Three, the harem scenes dominate the whole scene. Fourth, the combination of arms and weapons is confusing and unrealistic. Fifth, the plot was out of balance due to excessive violence. Sixth, there are too many descriptions of heroes and it is difficult to distinguish the priorities. Seven, the emotional scenes are embarrassing and disgusting. Eight, the Madonna's sentiments and IQ are worrying, and she can be commanded indiscriminately. Ninth, there is a serious lack of military knowledge. Let's list these nine first. Here are my suggestions for solutions (ω)👇 (1) Points to note: Red alert is definitely regimented and integrated, but it will become streamlined and devoid of anything new. Then it will definitely make you feel difficult to make a choice. Should you go the route of violent troops or elite troops? In fact, if we think about it this way, most readers in the early stage of the article will read it word by line carefully, which requires a strong sense of immersion. So we can put the protagonist on the front line and work with the soldiers to survive many difficulties in the doomsday city and continuously upgrade and recruit soldiers. This plot should focus on the route of elite soldiers, and do not recruit a large number of soldiers, heavy vehicles or even aircraft. The city mainly relies on infantry but also has elite troops. So what types of units can do the job? In fact, the author, you can choose the internal affairs force here instead of the conscripts belonging to the regular army. In urban and individual combat, the combat effectiveness of internal affairs troops is much stronger than that of basic soldiers. They know better how to fight and survive in the city, and are better equipped with weapons. (It annoys me that many authors are just special forces, which is one of the reasons why they are thrown out of my bookshelf.) What about leaving the city? Base, storm troops, gather survivors? Of course you can write it like this. I will not deny this way of writing, but reading too much will eventually lead to aesthetic fatigue. So, my plan is to build a real military base instead of a refugee camp. Military bases only allow soldiers to be stationed. This can hide not only the system but also the strength and secrets. Are they asked about their origins by the local army and people? You can just ask the system to draw up a hidden unit number (with the right to act independently and the highest command authority. Otherwise it will be very troublesome, because you will be controlled by others if you are wearing the skin of the army). It must be built in a remote area and have underground facilities. Let the regular army station and accumulate troops there, and you can also manufacture heavy vehicles and various types of aircraft. This is the beginning of the violent attack. You can put it in the dark line and describe it briefly, and write it in detail when you use it. Refugee camps, I recommend that soldiers reach brigade level before recruiting survivors, and that refugee camps should be established in recaptured villages, towns or counties (with buildings and other ready-made buildings, be sure to build city walls before recruiting, to reduce the possibility of system exposure. Survivors in villages and towns? Just all died of the virus. This is not impossible...) If you have written too many war lines, you can come to the refugee camp to write about daily transitions. What to do after the construction is completed? Are soldiers approaching the border? No no no! You can also use the perspective of a reconnaissance unit or an elite team to increase the sense of immersion! (You can also add the word count [cross out]) What should the protagonist do? It's easy! Isn't there a base? Let his body stay inside and control a soldier or robot to continue to promote the plot. It is safe and does not reduce the sense of presence. I understand, but where are the funds to build the base? Gold shop? Of course it's not enough (but it can be used as a plot in the city. Don't involve the survivors, as it will affect the image after all) Then, the underground vault of the head office! There are other things, no matter what you think about the author, I wouldn't be surprised if the protagonist encounters a distressed convoy transporting tons of gold. If the author is interested in other suggestions, you can ask me. There are too many words and I am tired of typing (￣∇￣)

Alas, I don't know how to evaluate it, so I simply limit the protagonist To be honest, if the heavy industry is not started, the pretentious cars are not started, the light prism and the magnetic storm circle are built? The power plant is not started to open the map? It all depends on the soldiers in the barracks. If Red Alert is not good, you can watch some live broadcasts. Red Alert has so many high-tech mods, and the whole process It's just a matter of sensationalism. It seems that I can't write anything other than sensationalism. I can't write about the construction of the base, material collection, how to use survivors, introduce the red alert system, the exchanges inside, there are too many watery contents, and then you will be able to sensationalize. Once or twice is fine, but after reading too much, I am speechless. How can your grades be good?

The content and writing are very exciting As the article progresses, the overall world background is also indirectly revealed, but so far the future development direction of the protagonist is still unclear, and there is no specific idea or goal The scene switch feels a bit abrupt. It jumps to the countryside all of a sudden, and from the beginning, it still revolves around two people. A supply box. I feel that there is too much emphasis on the supply box and ignores the main plot. As the Jiajing review said, for the Red Alert article, explosions of soldiers are normal. However, the replacement of personnel at the beginning will inevitably cause aesthetic fatigue in the later stage. In fact, a lot of things can be written in the early city. In the early stage, there can be fewer summons appropriately. The staff then sets up a main plot and develops the plot around it. By describing the emotions and changes of the protagonist due to the casualties of the team members due to some incidents, and at the same time enhancing the story through the occurrence of various events, then pick up the next main plot and intersperse various events and plots in the middle to advance the team step by step. Development and the growth of the protagonist. Once you have a base, you can properly explode your troops. Then, you can advance the development of the plot through a series of interspersed main and sub-plots. This way, you won't feel that there is no goal and you don't know what the protagonist is doing. Limited Culture refers to the content of the refined comments and comes up with my own thoughts. A very nice post-apocalyptic red warning article! ! Come on, author!

The overall writing is very interesting, and the author's writing style is also good, especially the part about faith and nationality is handled very well. At present, I feel that the biggest problem is that the difficulty of zombies is too high. After all, more people who read novels like to read novels that are exciting rather than sad. There can be fewer sensational links. It is not absolutely impossible to write about the Government. As long as it is a positive image, it can make readers feel more involved.

See see chapter ten. When Pigfoot saw the clone soldiers eating nutritional cream, he told them to stop eating and let them eat instant noodles instead. Let's not talk about how many instant noodles you give him. As for the nutrients inside, a warrior can maintain good physical condition only by eating highly nutritious food. Are you doing S? Arrange to eat instant noodles?

Which man is not passionate, and who is passionate but does not serve the country! ! ! ! The author's final sentence made me feel so excited that I couldn't control myself for a long time. From "Whoever wants to kill me, I will kill!" To "Whoever wants us dead, we will kill!" The protagonist is alive in my heart! From "If it really doesn't work out, take your family to the island and live a good life" to later when "It's not your turn yet" to step forward, it didn't feel abrupt at all. No one is born a hero Heroes are all forced I wait, expect, to see the birth of a hero

Let me tell you a joke, the Red Alert mobile game is really fun.

Already invested Apocalyptic Wen Shao Read and cherish it.

Why do you feel like a new coronavirus variant? The government prioritizes frontline vaccination, and then all institutions are gone. This is not an ordinary apocalypse. It is more powerful than endless zombies. It feels like a fusion of Zerg and zombies. The evolution and attack mode of zombies make it impossible for me to see any hope of human victory. Red Alert's most buggy endless bullets are gone. V3 requires gold coins. Killing a zombie costs one gold coin. It's just that new zombies are emerging one after another. There are actually spy zombies. It's depressing.

This fucking protagonist is really miserable. He finally developed and suffered heavy losses, and then he survived again because of something. I'm really torn.

I admit that you want to highlight the passionate patriot man, but you don't need to describe this plot in every picture.

Although it is Maozi's special forces, it uses Kalashnikov's explosive modifications like the conscripts ()

Monthly vote, recommendation has been voted, but I still have some suggestions, 1. Stop being uneasy, uneasy, and having bad premonitions. As soon as they appear, people will die on a large scale 😅. You can limit the protagonist, but try another way! 2. I feel that there are no details in the first major chapter later. If necessary, I can talk about material collection and engineering construction in detail, which may be good! 3. Less sensationalism and passionate words. If they are less, they will sound touching, but if they are too much, they will be a bit boring! (These are all personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you!!!) Finally, staying up late to read your novel is a bit empty, so I'll give you a +!

The author is really cool! Where is my knife? The finale!

It is recommended that the author randomly names, at least, it can encourage the survivors after the war, and it can also prove that these people who served the country and the people have been here...

I saw an advertisement today that takes advantage of the fact that zombies chase living things when they see them. A roller is installed to allow the zombies to run and generate electricity. This unlimited clean energy has appeared!

Will there be an army later? If possible, it is best to organize the protagonist into a special operations force, under the direct command of the Army Joint Conference and the Home Combat Command (the highest military organization). It is even said that in some special, crisis situations, you can call for support (including but not limited to air strikes, artillery support, arms support, manpower support from other forces) And you can accept optional tasks from the highest military agencies, such as: acting as a military police, offensive/defensive force, rescue or search, etc. After completing the mission, the official military rank can be improved, and the troops and equipment can be expanded. Resources are provided by the military department. In addition, the biggest benefit is: The protagonist will not be an overseas military organization/terrorist holding dangerous weapons. And with the support of the army, organizations that dare to attack can first weigh their own strength. (If there is a task of garrisoning the city, the protagonist can also visit the recaptured city and have a few casual chapters (｡･ω･｡)) How about giving suggestions? (^ω^){"NickName":"Sakurashima Mai-senpai","UserId":301380394}{"NickName":"You said you forgot","UserId":215300293} The language is so good that it may not be fluent in reading, please forgive me.

Chasing the investment Come on, author! Waiting for the villa to be close to the sea😜

The food is tasteless and does not feel good. You can read a post-apocalyptic novel written by the author of Mercenary War. It is also depressing but relaxed and very touching. You are really tasteless now. You are depressed, not happy and passionate, and you don't like the tone of the Japanese protagonist. You keep beeping in vain.

Do I need gold to redeem it? What about other resources? Are resources like copper, iron, and rigid materials not enough? The value is not as high as gold, but the quantity is much higher than gold! It's also much easier to obtain.

Author, if you update like this, you will be punished by eunuchs.

Authors of old books don't charge for it, so don't complain. Anyway, we have been promised in the group to add some elements to it.

Isn't it hung up? Any reversal?

I feel that the author is very strong. For the processing of Goldfinger, I directly used the Red Alert mobile game developed by the protagonist company in the book. In this way, the processing of the second and official settings is perfectly solved. Even for me, who is a person who is obsessed with settings, it feels very good. There is no problem to find. The progress is just beginning, haha

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Isn't it too difficult? Almost every time in the process there is a narrow escape, and there is a virus zombie that can infect units and buildings?

This is the end of the world. Full of despair

Author: Gugugu, Gugugu😅