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I looked confused. This protagonist plays football in kindergarten, right?
I don't mind if you score a lot of goals, after all, it's a novel, but they are all really disgusting to me. There are dozens of novels in one chapter, and it doesn't matter whether the sentences are fluent or not. I'm afraid this is not a novel automatically generated by a computer.
It made me feel embarrassed. Excellent product!
He's a bit too awesome. He can easily score more than 10 goals, or more than 5. A hat trick is the same as drinking water.
Is the author too cautious? Other novels are about China or China. You have become a dragon, and you look awkward for no reason.
Can this be promoted? ? Xiaobai's writing can't be called a running account.
What is written? Why can't I understand it?
The author must have been gambling for a long time. Many of the contents made me smile knowingly after reading them. Is the author so angry because of the fake⚽️ that he wrote a book? Haha
It's really funny, why is it a sports product?
Let's finish it early. I've never seen anyone write about football and get votes. I can only blame the Chinese football team. It can influence all kinds of things across borders. It will stink if you touch it.
It actually feels a bit funny, but the author could use more black humor.
Suddenly I feel like I have wasted a lot of time cultivating immortality, please pay me
What is the main character's hook? Just know the system name
I feel like the writing is a bit invincible, and I still can't understand it 😭
Sports boutique? ? ? 10% Off water bottles? ?
Let the author rewrite it. There is a market for mindless white-knuckle writing. Anyway, it's just fun to read. But there are many places in your writing where the language is incomprehensible, and even elementary school students cannot write like this. For example: This word appears too much, and it is meaningless. Many sentences that do not make sense can be made fluent by just removing them. Football novels should also have a sense of immersion. Dragon Kingdom and Sunset Kingdom are too dramatic. Why do you care about this in a street novel? It's fun to be able to bring it in. Scoring more than 10 goals in a game is too brainless, but no author has written like this at present, and it can also attract a group of readers in a new way In short, if the sentences are smoothed and the harmony is changed, there will still be a certain market and results. At least making some cigarette money is probably no problem. I wonder if the editor has contacted you to mention these issues.