My Martial Spirit in Douluo Is Faker

The writing is really good, this is one of the top Douluo fanfics I have read. The main reason is that the author has his own ideas and is writing his own story, instead of just following the original story of the Third Young Master of the Tang Family. It is not a mindless and enjoyable novel. I love it 🙂 ()

Come on, author(ง •̀_•́)ง

There are no words to describe this novel! ! ! A combination of creativity and toxicity! A mouthful of poison and a mouthful of milk makes readers wander between life and death.

Advantages: The creativity is very good, really good, the protagonist has a good character, maintains his own independence, and does not make Wuhundian look silly and sweet Disadvantages: The author obviously lacks experience in writing, and the details and some plots are too simple. Just a few words 1. Why did Kayn introduce himself so heartfeltly before he entered school? If I were Tang San, I would have suspected something else. 2. Where does the sci-fi style clothing technology that can sell 20 million dollars come from (it can't even compare to selling the Zhu family royal family and adding soul bones)? 3. How was a money empire established under Douluo's extremely feudal sect system? If I were in the Wuhun Palace or a large sect, I would have become a vassal 4. Why is the protagonist obsessed with his adopted sister and unable to extricate himself? (The image of this adopted sister is too dull, she is just stupid and sweet, and she needs a six-year-old child to comfort her when she is assassinated). If the writing is not good enough, I suggest you not to set up your own heroine 5. Wait, wait, wait A little expectation: In fact, I like to watch women's clothing when I see this kind of behind-the-scenes scenes of wearing vests (ಡωಡ) Why can't the gender be changed by using the hero's power? It would be interesting to see the Ominous Blade and the Lord of Shadow Stream directly join forces This novel feels like opening a treasure house with expectations, but the treasure has long been emptied. Although it is still I was able to pick up some bits and pieces, but most of them were disappointed I wrote this book review with good intentions, and I hope the author will write better as he writes (；一_一)

Can anyone give me some side plot suggestions? I feel like if this continues, it will be over before I write 1 million words!

Let me tell you in advance that when the protagonists have too many vests, they will become unreasonable behind the scenes. Weakening Tang San's protagonist group in the early stage will make them stronger in other ways. After the Mainland Classic, the original plot will basically not be followed, because the world view of the Mainland has been changed by the protagonist! As for the protagonist's vest and skills, you can think about which heroes are better to use. Is the heroine Eun-jeong or multiple heroines? The new writer needs some advice! The vests currently prepared include Victor, Sword Demon, and Angel.

Martial spirit: Yan Chu Ma follows the war horse 🐎 First soul skill: Axiba (hammer on the floor to cause dizziness of the enemy) Second soul skill: Have you eaten (powerful palm) Third soul skill: Do you dare to kill my horse (charge for three seconds, during which the defense power increases by 100%, and go crazy for one minute after charging) Fourth soul skill: 1v1 man battle (forcibly kill the enemy) Control, it will only attack itself within two minutes) Fifth Soul Skill: Grass Mud Horse (interfere with the opponent's spirit, causing it to lose part of its sanity and has a taunting function) Sixth Soul Skill: Anger (increases one's own mental power by 200% and 150% overall strength) Martial Spirit True Body: Jin Gong... Can't edit anymore...

Author, this book of yours is really good. Can you write it as long as it doesn't end badly?

The creativity is quite good, but the plot gives me a conflicting feeling that I can't stand it but still want to watch it. It's very uncomfortable.

Post a comment, I have been watching it for so long Where is the sister in the beginning? Our royal empress seems to be missing

It feels like the protagonist despises Douluo Continent's system and other people's personalities, and he is just a selfish evil capitalist.

It's really boring to write a fan story and add bosses from other worlds randomly. You are writing a fan story?

This novel is ridiculous even before it becomes popular

I hope there will be Kayn and his lines, such as: Millions of armies will obey my orders, countless worlds will surrender, and my power will reach eternity.

Good guy, let me just call you good guy. In the future, there will be a Star Casting Dragon King who will directly engage in the God Realm to fool the God Realm, and then connect the heavens and worlds through the God Realm to take off.

I hope to recover soon, overcome psychological barriers, and encourage each other

Even though I'm a eunuch, I still subscribed and finished reading them all.

You update enmmm every day. Didn't the editor talk to you to help you evolve?

From beginning to end, I thought it was a very interesting book.

I am getting more and more disappointed, in many aspects The main body always pretends to be cowardly when facing a titled Douluo. No matter how wonderful the writing is, it is meaningless without fighting scenes. This is a world with super powers. Regarding the protagonist's plan: It is obviously safer to practice with peace of mind to unlock the hero. Since you have practiced to Soul Saint is basically invincible based on the abilities unlocked by the system, so don't engage in so many tricks. Without strength support, the conspiracy and tricks cannot be put on the table All plans are like dancing on the tip of a knife, and there is no room for any variables. I feel that the enemy's slightest lack of cooperation will reveal his flaws. The protagonist cannot see that he has the intelligence to calculate people's hearts. There are heavy traces of the author's hand I understand the protagonist's ambition, but if you want to change the social tone of the Douluo world, strength and support are the most important. If you have the ability to defeat Sword Douluo with one hand, Qibao will have to disband whether he wants to or not There is also an emotional drama On the other hand, the plot does not express how much Sang Hyuk feels for Zhu Qing, but it reveals a lot of flaws. I guess the author must arrange for Zhu Qing to find out Sang Hyuk's identity. After all, it would be difficult to arrange the protagonist if there is no leakage, but to be honest, it is too bloody! I don't know why, although the protagonist is doing major things to promote social development, but under those plans that can't be put on the table, I really don't feel that the protagonist has any charm⊙_⊙, no matter which side the protagonist is placed on It's a bit messy, but it also represents a little bit of my opinion. In fact, the core is that it is not enough to be cool. When facing Titled Douluo, I always pretend to be cowardly, reduce the planning and planning, and add more punches to the flesh. Wouldn't it be better? This will not only save some brain cells, but also make readers feel more comfortable Reducing restrictions a little, making more waistcoats to hang around, and doing things, readers will love to see it When I came into this book, I had the mentality of having fun looking at the pictures. Although the writing was a bit poor in the early stage, and there were some small bugs, but in the later stage The progress is rapid, and the author is willing to work hard on revising the text. What surprises me the most is that the characterization is very interesting, getting rid of the stereotypes of many other fans, and it tastes a bit like a pseudo-group portrait. These are my gains from reading this book I hope the author will work hard

To be honest, this is a good book that was delayed by the title. When I saw the title of this book, I couldn't imagine that it was a behind-the-scenes mastermind style. I just thought it was a script in which the protagonist of the invincible style keeps fighting and killing people to improve himself and finally kill a god. The result was unexpectedly interesting...

The book will be published soon, I hope it's not a stupid and cool article

It's pretty, he's just a eunuch

I feel that as a new author, I am fully invested in

I read dozens of chapters and found it quite interesting, but I read the author's speech at the end emm I'm scared 🥺 When will the author find time to finish the story?

Sit down and open a Douyin account or a Kuaishou account. I want to lose weight with you. I am almost the same as you now. Let's lose weight together.

I'm a little curious about the fate of Hu Liena, Qian Renxue and Bibi Dong in this book After all, they all lived quite miserable lives in the original text, and there is no dignity at all for love Can the author give some spoilers