Marvel Middleman

The first chapter is too big. I have been in tens of thousands of worlds. Let me go, can you write about that kind of state? Don't create a loser male protagonist with n years of experience. Seeing this kind of setting is basically very poisonous.

Don't forget your original intention, keep your mission in mind, and remember what's in the introduction. Don't be despised if you buy a car. The sandals I wore when I bought the car couldn't even get through the 4S door in the novel. In reality, who wears a suit and tie every day?

The author Niu A truly generates electricity for love

I haven't read the novel yet, but after reading the comments, the author responded to almost every post. I concluded that the novels written by the author are for himself to read, not for readers. There are many people complaining in the comment area, and every author who complains will give a targeted refutation. It seems that the refutation is reasonable, but in fact it violates a taboo of online writing.

After reading five chapters, I was completely confused.

It's very strange, very strange. I don't know if it's because I've been reading for a long time or something, but people always say it's confusing and has no beginning or end. 12345, this set of numbers is very simple, right? 23145 Some people can't understand it? Why? How many people have ignored the time written in the first chapter? How many people don't read the introduction under the title of the book? This is not a book that starts from scratch, so I won't introduce you to everything about the protagonist from the first chapter! ! If you can't understand the numerical arrangement of 23145, you are a book addict. Then I suggest you read more books and read less novels. If you really feel that any chapter is a mess and has no cause or effect, please post the chapter number and thank you, instead of treating it like a bunch of Riddler blah blah blah. If you want to make a comment, no problem. Please explain the situation. I will change everything I can. Someone said earlier that there were too many commas, so I changed it. Someone earlier said why the office is on the first floor, and I explained it clearly. If the wording was wrong, I corrected it as soon as possible. If the description was wrong, I also changed the description in time. So if you still think I am poisonous, please tell me why I am poisonous and make it clear, and I will answer it for you one by one.

Your article really feels like an emotionless composition.

This translation tone... I can't stand it anymore... Oh! My brother! Oh! Put down your weapons! Oh! Why are you there! Oh! What the hell are you talking about? Oh! Have you watched too many Chinese-translated movies...

Don't be discouraged. You eat free food without paying, and you say it's too salty and bland. It's really speechless. I'll reward you with 100 points.

Already collected! I came here after reading the introduction. I hope it's the same as what it looks like.

Recently I saw a few people saying that the writing is very messy. Please read every chapter completely. It is impossible for me to write out all the settings as soon as I start. The protagonist's story is revealed almost every few chapters. You can't let the protagonist remember the past every day in the world, right? It can only be described from the perspective of employees, products, or enemies.

What can I say~ I didn't feel anything at all when I read this book~ It's very bland... Like a running account... I can't substitute it.

I think a lot of people say it's confusing. The problem is that I don't think it's too confusing even when I read it from beginning to end. Also, you only update one chapter a day. Are you serious?

You are already a big boss and you don't need anything, so why can't you be more generous? You just want some petty advantages, and your style of doing things is not like that of someone who has traveled through tens of thousands of worlds! ! ! !

In fact, I feel that those bad time-travelers are a bit redundant

After reading thirty or forty chapters, I really can't swallow it. Is the main character a thief? The setting of the theme, the products sold by the protagonist and the strength of the protagonist are all highlights, but it is written in such a way that the first ten pictures can be seen in chapters more or less, but the following chapters are not mentioned, and they are not on the shelves now. Is the author purely relying on love to generate electricity?

Another author who uses love to generate electricity, so good

The author has not signed a contract, what should I do? ? ?

The subject matter is attractive, I hope the author will continue to work hard to update At the same time, I will go to the author in both directions Reply me

I'll give you some water, one post, can you please add some sperm?

I don't know what went wrong. I will publish the following three big red letters regularly.

Author-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎)