Start Pretending to Be a Ghost from Tokyo

Some bad points: 1. The Death Note with terrifying abilities 2. The uncontrollable Snake Man Hannya 3. The Shinigami who is very afraid of the sun 4. I don't know the protagonist's combat ability. How does it compare with the Snake Man? 5. In the first few chapters, the ability to happily increase the lifespan is very pleasant, and then there are a lot of troubles immediately. 6. According to the author's writing, the protagonist is a bit cold-blooded and the mastermind behind the scenes. I still hope that the protagonist is kind-hearted. It doesn't matter if he doesn't like to help others. Just don't kill people for no reason. 7. I like imaginative stories but don't like dark style and suspenseful thrillers.

If you write three million words in this book to accumulate luck, you will definitely become a god! !

It would be a pity not to write a dark text for this mechanism of plundering lifespan and gaining transcendence.

The wizard part was a drama, it was embarrassing

The front part is good, but the back part is a mess, not interesting, and I can't tell what the main character wants to do.

I go to the comment circle and there are a lot of trolls. To be honest, I have read so many accounts and I still can't figure out what you want to write. I wanted to write Extraordinary and rewrite it, but something was different, and it felt like I had failed in writing.

Those who have great ambitions all have unwillingness to do so~ Only in this way can they have goals and better realize their life ambitions

The climax is coming! Kira shows up

The subject matter is very novel, but the plot feels messy and a bit strange.

The identity setting of the male protagonist is very unique. I support it. Come on, the author.

At the beginning of the film, I was attracted by the author's imagination. The story is very interesting, but later I found that the main line of the story and the purpose of the protagonist were unclear, and the order was confusing. At this time, I doubted the author's writing level. After the author finished writing, I can read it myself and feel it.

First support

We are still preparing to put the fully ordered books on the shelves. It has been a long time since we prepared fully ordered books. Now the eunuch has spoken.

Do you think it is forgivable for the author to abandon his wife and children to the point where his ex-wife became mentally ill?

It's not pretty, I'm confused when I look at it

The protagonist has no sense of existence at all, and is just a supporting role. . .

The plot in the novel is properly set up and can always capture the reader's heart appropriately.

The writing is very good! The most important thing is that it's fun to watch.

Shock! ! Eunuch! ! Writing requires accumulation of experience and luck. This book is already wonderfully written! It's just a lack of experience! Author, you eunuch has ruined all your luck! And twice! It will be as difficult as ascending to the sky if your luck is cut off at a young age! Look at those successful authors, which one doesn't insist on finishing each book and gradually accumulates luck and waits for the moment of prosperity! !

Eager for quick success! ! Which writer doesn't accumulate popularity experience little by little, then gives up when the results are not good enough? He doesn't know how to accumulate! What's more, this recommendation of tens of thousands is already a good score for a new book! How do those writers who persist with millions of words and only a few hundred recommendations deal with themselves?

The writing style feels so domineering[fn=2_4]

Read the author, I despise you, I despise you for being so slow, I didn't finish reading until I was satisfied 😵😵😵😵

This anti-Kira alliance is so big that no flaws are left unturned. It would be unreasonable not to have a large number of high-ranking government officials and plutocrats

Hurry up and break out, writing is too slow.

Nice. Come on↖(^ω^)↗

Even before Uemoto's world view was written, it was already a eunuch. What did the author think? Come on, I really like Western fantasy novels, but there are not many good ones written purely in Western fantasy.