The Sea We Lost

Bro, I haven't even read it yet, so I'll leave you a comment first. 1. What do you plan to write in this title? Prose? Then you are afraid that you are posting on the wrong platform. 2. What did you write in your content introduction? Read it yourself.

Just by reading the introduction, you can tell that the author is not a novelist.

The narrative of the novel is delicate and feels more like published literature, and it reads like a classic. I have only read a few chapters so far. The content is very unique and very good, but to be honest, the novel is a bit slow. Let's talk about my personal views: 1. Let's talk about the title of the book first. I can't see what I want to express. If this is a piece of published literature, no problem. But it is really not suitable as an online novel. Most of the names of online novels are simple and straightforward (check out the rankings), and people will know what kind of story the book is about after reading it. Of course, among the straightforward titles, this title is still very unique. 2. Let's talk about the introduction. Has the author considered formatting? A large paragraph of dense text reduces readability and is not very friendly to readers. The content also has no elements that make it attractive to read. The introduction of an online article is not just a summary of the story, it must clearly lay out the selling points. 3. Finally, let's talk about the content. I'm not writing a novel, I'm just speaking from a reader's perspective. The first person is very sad. Nowadays, few people write first person books, and readers don't like first person very much. In my memory, the last first-person online article was "Zhibeiyou" (Zhibeiyou is pretty good), but I haven't seen it since (I don't read much, so don't be surprised if I read some).

No one was watching at all, not a living soul.

Finished spreading flowers! I want to keep it up again... When will the next book be released?