The Great Dream of Myth Comes

The entry point is good and the contradictions are well designed, but there are big problems with details. First of all, about Chu Yue, you wanted to write her as a conflict due to misunderstanding in the early stage, but the sudden darkening in the later stage was too abrupt. In reality, monsters appear too quickly, and the casualty data are unreal. Even if animals could enter that world, they would never improve so quickly. There are obviously many people with potential in that country in the article, but the article only mentions the schools of the Special Bureau. Where did the rest of the people go? Do you want to say that they are part of the official government, part of the Alien Bureau, and part of the aristocratic families? Not only the minors, but also the potential among adults went there. So your article seems to be fine, but the details are too rough and will jump when you run it. More importantly, the dragon turtle said that Jiaolong seems to have lost his memory. They knew each other before, which means that they were independent existences before coming to the world. They also created a passage to another world and merged their bodies. If you dig a hole like this, how can you fill it? You can say he is a human without fusion, but will he still be a human after fusion? It is bound to go to the opposite side

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