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He expressed his feelings and expressed his regret for Brother Xu. I found a few books at Qidian today but couldn't put them down, but suddenly I discovered the reason why I like this book more and more. The author's writing style has made a qualitative leap from the Xiao Yuan incident. If I must say, the tension in depicting human nature has become stronger. In the early stage, all the characters were like setting boards, including Brother Xu, but with Xiao Yuan, at least the role of Brother Xu has stood up. Including the few little characters who were brutally killed in the first C-level dungeon, the book is short but very poignant, as well as the girl in the big sea world who is willing to sacrifice herself to be friends. This book makes me feel the tragic discussion of human nature and little characters in a post-apocalyptic novel for a long time. There is not much in it so far, but there is indeed some. (The strong supporting characters in the early stage are really not as well portrayed as the weak children and other small supporting characters in the later stage) The world is very dark, but the protagonist still has a bright heart. So I especially like to watch Brother Xu save people, even those who may cause a small problem to his progress. This is a holy mother in the eyes of some people now, but in my eyes it is a kindness that a capable person repays the world. I used to say that if you don't have the strength to do good, you are seeking death, but Brother Xu is already strong. Why are there still people criticizing you for doing good? I just don't understand. From the beginning of Chapter 500 to the present, some of Brother Xu's speeches made me feel that the author really has something in his mind, and that the protagonist is really an adult. He can say to Xiao Yuan, "You are a child, don't think so much." He can also say to the Holy Sword Society with faith, "A noble personality does not need to be set off by misery." He does not have diode thinking, is sharp but peaceful, protects the weak, and is not easily deceived by bad people. The only regret of this book so far is that there are no supporting characters with complex human nature. To be honest, although I see the author's writing power getting stronger day by day, at present, I feel that the only one who has truly established a character is Xu Huo. The other characters are either purely good or purely evil. Maybe because this book is Brother Xu's personal travel diary, it is more or less limited. However, I am satisfied with the advantages described above. These days, it is too difficult to find novels in which the world is dark but the protagonist belongs to the good camp. Therefore, I hope that some readers who do not like this direction will hold up their hands and stop scolding. I am afraid that this niche author will be scolded away. It's too easy to find a dark book at the starting point. You don't lack this one, don't you think? (Please don't argue with me about the super props. I have said countless times that I don't like that part and I have abandoned the book because of the super props. This book review is also about Xu Huoren's establishment after five or six hundred chapters, five or six hundred chapters! Pay attention to the review)

You can read the first few hundred chapters of Shuhuang's book, but forget about the rest. If you don't have a good book, you can read this book while looking for something else to read. The author is the kind of person who writes books just to make money. His writing style remains unchanged for 2,000 chapters, and the rest of the writing is very boring. I read that some people in the book review section said that they were attracted by the protagonist's personality and humanity. To be honest, I laughed. I don't know if the person who said these things has read less novels or read more Shuangwen! The character of the protagonist: decisive in killing, kind to the weak but not a saint, having his own judgment when dealing with unknown things, being sensible but not blind. What I want to say is that in addition to Shuangwen, the protagonists of Qidian novels or other fairy tales, fantasy cities, and other novels are all like this. This novel just writes more about the protagonist's personality, and you are attracted to it. But don't these people realize that this is just an additional product of the author's procrastination in the plot? One more question, what is the main line of this book? I saw more than 1,500 chapters but could not see the main plot! Discover the secrets of the game? I didn't see the protagonist's actions! Achieve perfect evolution? I didn't see the protagonist's actions, it was quite random. If I know the whereabouts of Dr. Wu from someone, I would ask him about it. I don't know if I am busy with other things at other times! Become a super player? There is no rush to find the perfect evolution potion. There is also the issue of the power system of the novel. Upon closer inspection, the logic is not very smooth. The protagonist's level-up challenge is only based on the fact that he is the protagonist. He is the protagonist, so he has an additional hidden attack power increased by 50%! A high evolution rate can suppress a low evolution rate. The degree of suppression varies depending on the previous evolution rate gap between the two. In Chapter 1500, the protagonist's 50% evolution rate and C-level perfect evolution can kill a medium-strength evolver in the B-level. I don't quite understand it. Isn't it too much to say that others have a 70% evolution rate? The evolution rate is more difficult to upgrade as it goes later. Can the protagonist's 50% evolution rate plus perfect evolution offset the evolution rate of others? Secondly, in terms of characteristics, a B-level evolver has made dozens or hundreds of dungeons for so many years. Even if the dungeon has a low rating, its characteristics are still better than those of the protagonist (if the dungeons were rated low, they would not be able to reach B-level or they would still be B-level with high strength). The third person has made dungeons for so many years and only has a few A-level props. Isn't it funny that the protagonist has a lot of them (himself) Think carefully about how useless this B-level player is to have only one or two A-level props when there are dungeon ratings and equipment obtained by players of the same level that he kills, plus going to other divisions to fight in the autumn wind. I count 100 million for each A-level prop. Ordinary players who have been promoted to B level for so many years can't earn four or five? A year's salary as a bodyguard for a big family is enough to buy one, right? It was mentioned earlier in the novel that the main character could be paid tens of millions a month for working as a bodyguard. At that time, the main character was not as powerful as he is now and has such a salary)). There are too many logical inconsistencies. Part of this is because the writing at the end of the novel is really cool. The other part is the reward for the operation officer deleting the comment. The operation officer does not need to delete the post, I This person is very petty. This book review I wrote has been copied to the bookmarks of my mobile phone. If you delete it and I come back to review it every hour, then I will really be a scumbag and blackmail your book. Don't get yourself into trouble with those shady takeout merchants. If someone gives a bad review about a product problem, they will say that they are peers                      ----A comment from a 13-year-old bookworm

OK, I happened to see the review section of this book that I have been following, Never Whore for Nothing, and after reading it, I decided to express my own feelings. When I first read this book, I thought it was an unlimited version. Although I also made a copy, it was very different. To put it bluntly, this extraordinary factor is well integrated into each area. More importantly, the logic is very smooth and no contradictions can be found. At the same time, the characteristic system and player categories inside are very interesting. There are not endless props in it. Different player categories have their own emphasis. Although it is a bit like the titles in the park, the difference is still very big. The existence core of the universe determines that it will have a strong impact on the newly created partitions. How people in these areas respond to the impact, and the fate and changes they suffer, is also a good thing to watch. After all, what I like most about the protagonist is that he practices his own principles and pursuits on the basis of rationality. He does not go back to ask others to do good, and he is not forced to restrain his hands just because he wants to do good. I have always felt that if justice is the state of the overall order and makes mankind as a whole show an upward trend, then in order to achieve this goal, we cannot act rigidly and must use different means flexibly. And the protagonist is like this. People are so complex, and it is most efficient to use different means when facing different people. There are also some problems in the comments. The protagonist is a very capable person, but there are relevant explanations in the novel, and the logic is very smooth. As for the protagonist's super props, please rest assured that wealth is not revealed. In a logical world, good things will of course attract the covetousness of others. Not to mention that this is a highly restricted auxiliary prop, and it is not often used. The protagonist's strength system has little to do with this. And overall, this novel may have some minor flaws, but the flaws are not concealed, and it becomes more beautiful as you go to the back.

I beg the male lead to focus on his career and not to have a female lead. He just came without a CP. If there is a female lead, I can't stand it. Don't scare me if Bai Kou is the female lead. I really don't like this kind of arrogant little princess character, and I hate it very much. If you want to refute people who call me a eunuch, don't jump out. I have no quality and a dirty mouth. Even if there is a female lead, Yan Jiayu is more acceptable to me. Bai Kou quit!

There are still 73 chapters to tie up. In order to slow down my reading, I will try to write a book review. I don't know the starting point and the rules, and I don't know where to write. 1 Let me talk about the conclusion first. This is a good book. To elaborate a few words, it is a somewhat difficult and extremely enjoyable book. 2 There is a threshold, because there are many characters, props, and characteristics, and the dungeon rules are complicated. People with poor memory can easily fail to follow the plot twists. The protagonist is cold-faced and warm-hearted, with very little psychological description. He often relies on a few meaningful shots and a few fine strokes to present the story, which is to follow the line of thought. Reading requires thinking and understanding. This one is not suitable. It seems quite suitable for people whose brain power has not been drained by work. Especially if the job is quite boring. It is more exciting and lighter than the script, and it is not burdened by pig teammates. The props and fighting are dazzling, and it is quite good. The plot can be touched repeatedly. For some books, I swipe twice to find a punchline, two plots, a twist, and then add a few touches, and the chapter is done. This book is full of punches and kicks, and is very detailed. You can read it slowly and imagine it in your mind. It feels like you are revisiting the ancient martial arts, and every move of the hero is worth memorizing. Some book friends said, is it true that writing in such detail will not make you bald? I don't know if I'm bald or not, but I just feel like my money for studying was well spent. 3 From which chapter does it start to look good? I think several people said that at the six or seven hundredth chapter, it started to become particularly good-looking, like two books. My own feeling is that it was around Chapter 550. Because I listened to the book while commuting. In the previous chapters, the author often described them too briefly, or new features and props appeared too quickly. I often heard the few words that just passed by in a flash, but my brain failed to understand them. After quickly turning over several possible homophones in my mind, I realized that the plot was over, and I had to read it again during my lunch break to catch up on the plot. After six hundred chapters, listening to books becomes very friendly. When the narrative reaches key points, the author will also take pains to slow down the pace and describe the characters' expressions and words in detail. When previous props are reproduced, the author will also explain them. Generally speaking, you can hear the whole thing and it's quite silky smooth. 4 Tell me what makes the protagonist so handsome? 4.0 According to my own reading habits, the protagonist Brother Xu can be regarded as a tough guy protagonist. The so-called tough guy novels are probably Chandler and Bullock. The novel is relatively old and classic. I was quite pleased with it, of course because these were the only books available at that time. The background of the tough guy faction is usually set in a city, and it must be a prosperous and sinful city. The city is dark and the security is bad. Society is out of control, with corruption at the top and bullying at the middle level; bad people are rampant and good people are in danger. The protagonist is a tough guy who speaks few words but is ruthless and speaks with actions; he explores the truth, upholds justice, and defeats the strong and helps the weak. The world is desperate and it is difficult for heroes to resist, but they still resist. Brother Xu is like this, he is a tough guy in many places. 4.1 A tough guy doesn't need words, strength speaks for itself. You go ahead, No bb. Brother Xu's strength is very real. Although Brother Xu is strong, he has repeatedly jumped up and killed, and got an SS rating; Although he was promoted from E-level to C-level in half a year; But this is already 1000 chapters later. The author has been writing for nearly two years. And in the past two years, the protagonist has not lost his wits due to the excitement, which is rare. Moreover, the feeling of powerful protagonists growing up together is not only real, but also realistic. Ordinary people, if they want to achieve small results in reality, they have to work hard on a yearly basis. Of course, when we look for realism in online articles, it is quite nonsense. That's it. But there is a difference between being cool and being cool. If you want to read a book like Awakening slaps you in the face, and the Bs all over the world let the protagonist finish pretending, you will naturally be very happy, but the experience is difficult to last in reality, because the reality is often: working hard for a whole year, without seeing a promotion, salary increase, or a generous year-end bonus. Where can I find a countercharge of 1 million for a stolen account? Where are the systems, cheats and superpowers? Putting down the book made me feel even more depressed. Reading too many non-reality genre cool articles will have sequelae. At least that's how it works for me. Because the refreshing points are too dense, resulting in strong secretion of dopamine, so that after putting down the book, the brain will feel a little dizzy. If you try to concentrate again and switch to real mode to work, the buffer time will be extremely long, resulting in a decrease in efficiency. Therefore, for a working dog like me, that kind of literature is not a good choice for catching up on daily updates. I can only keep it and read it intensively during holidays. Our book does not have such sequelae. Every time the protagonist moves smoothly and enlarges his moves, it often brings me a joy similar to clearing my work to-do list item by item. Happiness is neither too much nor too little. I switch back to work and feel more energetic. The last time I had a similar experience was when I played Assassin's Creed Odyssey and completed missions one after another. It can be called a working dog's best friend. 4.2 Tough guys are free, wandering among all kinds of people and various organizations, but do not belong to any organization. Brother Xu is anti-system, or at least suspicious. Because the more people a place has, the easier it is for it to harbor dirt and evil, and the easier it is for a fox to pretend to be a tiger. You can become friends with people who do good things, you can help the weak, but you are not bound. 4.3 (Write it as soon as possible, thank you for reading)

I went to see Spiritual Realm Walker in the past two days, and my assessment is: it's hard to live up to its reputation. Spiritual Realm is far worse than this book in terms of setting, world view structure, character portrayal, and plot. Not to mention the many bugs in the book, it is also clever! The method used to advance the plot is very crude, and the protagonist is unsophisticated and has no charm at all, so he gives up after a few moments. I read another book, "You are not allowed to engage in underworld operations in the earthly world. The writing at the beginning of this book is quite funny, and it follows the abstract flow." But the protagonist is obviously the reincarnation of an evil god. He is neither sophisticated nor decisive in killing. He also likes to pretend to be stupid... The only way to pass the dungeon is to play poker with the boss... I feel tired every minute. Thinking about it carefully, I feel more and more that this book is really excellent. It is not only large in quantity but also of stable quality, making people want to read it. The author is great. Your persistence and talent will not be in vain. If one day you become popular, these days of silent updates and hard work will be the cornerstone and footnote of your success. You are worthy of those praises and wealth. I think you are better than many great gods. I hope you can keep writing books. I am still a trainee, and I feel sorry for the author. I will make up for the subscription money I owe. If it doesn't matter, I will also give you soft promotion and book promotion somewhere else. For book friends who are passing by looking for Shennong, don't hesitate, it's really good-looking!

This is the latest chapter. . . Rationally speaking, the original sin is that the protagonist is apparently only C-level and is treated as someone who can be manipulated. The blame lies with the author who has been grinding away at the protagonist's level. Emotionally speaking: What kind of dog is this bastard trying to plot against the protagonist over and over again, right? How much benefit has the protagonist brought to this poor place by taking this place as his own? Even if one of these high-ranking officials kills them all, they are all innocent. 🤮🤮🤮

The disadvantage is that the author's writing style does have some flaws, and due to some setting reasons, the viewing experience of the drama is a bit poor, the writing is relatively bland, and the plot progresses slowly. But the corresponding plot is very rich, and there are many copies. Many authors don't write long because they have no ideas. I really admire this book in this regard. Generally speaking, the difference between this book and ordinary books on the main line is like Ring of Magic and Soul III. It may make you feel a bit bland, repetitive, and a bit "flat" in some places, but the overall quality is very good and large, and the author's writing also has its own distinctive characteristics. My evaluation is that it is a loss not to read this book.

After reading over 1,000 chapters, I really don't have the patience to read any more. Each copy is so long to write about those insignificant people and plots. My eyes are tired after reading too many miserable copies. The really important super players, the game government, Dr. Wu, hundreds of chapters and only a few strokes. With so many dungeon worlds, who cares about a dungeon where the protagonist swipes once and leaves, as well as supporting characters who are passers-by and have nothing to do with after encountering the dungeon in the process. But the plot is dragging, and there are only a few advanced players who can interact with the protagonist in multiple copies. It seems that they are just passers-by, A, B, C and D, which is really boring.

Very good book, unlimited streaming of original scripts, Liangcao+. The protagonist is strong in intelligence and force. Strictly speaking, it is a cool novel, but the author has good experience and intelligence, so it is not embarrassing. The position is authoritative and conservative, which is more in line with the appetite of most readers. The atmosphere of the script is in place, the design is reasonable, the plot arrangements of the positive and negative characters are back and forth, and the protagonist often makes unexpected but reasonable actions. Continue writing, don't be a eunuch, recommend eating.

So Bai Kou is the heroine... I don't like her at all. I still prefer Xiaoyu and Hua Nu. It's better to have no cp. I'm really annoyed. I thought it was pretty good at first. Ahhhhh. I don't want to read the few chapters I've already bought.

It's very nice. Can you update it soon? When I saw chapter 1520, I didn't see a female protagonist. I hope there won't be one in the future, thank you!

I have read more than 1,400 chapters, which can be regarded as the starting point article that I have been following for the longest time. I have tried my best to share it with all the friends around me who love to watch Infinite Streaming. It is no exaggeration to say that Brother Xu is my favorite male protagonist for so many years. Impeccable character design, I will keep watching it for Brother Xu. In addition, the author's copy is also very innovative, very logical, and very fluent in writing. The article is very easy to read and makes people very willing to read it. But, but! There is a small point that I have been paying attention to, but I still want to bring it up here. That is, basically every copy ends in a hurry. Every time I see the end and start the dungeon settlement, I will think "Huh? Is this the end?", And I will often flip back and forth several times to make sure it is indeed the end. The same goes for Gem City, and the same goes for finding the entrance to the mine. I searched there over and over again for a long time, and searched for dozens of chapters. Then I suddenly found it, entered it, and suddenly started the rest of the plot, which gave me a very uncomfortable feeling. The serious point is that the copy lacks focus and is anticlimactic, resulting in no memory points in the copy. I have a few suggestions for dealing with this problem. Of course, this is purely from a reader's perspective and is for the author's reference. The first one is to add boss battles/wonderful scenes, such as the time I fought Hugo in the Kou Kou division. I immediately quit after defeating Hugo. It was wonderful and impressive. Hundreds of chapters later, everyone can still remember Hugo and his severed hand. For example, the spores scattered by the wind at the end of Clown City, or the last fire of the Skinner, are very memorable, and I think we can add more space to exaggerate them. The second is to increase the review. Obviously the author is very good at logic, but sometimes readers just go through the article and read it, and then the logic of the reader becomes numb. Therefore, it is appropriate to review this copy at the end of the copy. This makes people feel like "Oh! So that's it!" In other words, emphasize the most important and core logical points. The third one is to adjust the fragments. Of course I know this is because of serialization and daily updated word count issues. But the breath brought by the chapter is very important, which can "refresh" the reader. For example, many authors like to catch everyone at the end of a chapter. Readers who read the end of the chapter will think, "Ah, why do you want to read the next thing so much?" This is actually very helpful for the reading experience. But in this article, the author often ends a dungeon in the middle of a chapter, and the protagonist goes on to do the next thing without taking any breath, which makes people feel that this dungeon is very unimportant. If there is no distinction between the descriptions of "clearing a dungeon" and "the protagonist casually does something good and good", the article will have no sense of hierarchy. Anyway! I like this book very much, and I sincerely hope that the author can make some adjustments in the way he writes by writing such a long review. I don't know if the author reads comments (I saw earlier that the author doesn't read comments), but in short I hope the author writes better and better~

I didn't watch it in the later stage, but it was excellent in all aspects in the early stage. Only the character and plot of the cousin are so poisonous that they strongly affect reading! I feel that deleting this character and related plot works can improve it to a higher level.

The character Bai Kou is indeed difficult to comment on. The design itself is very problematic, which affects the perception. Because he is arrogant and arrogant, he is directed at the protagonist. This is not arrogance. It is very annoying to treat everyone like this, especially when he uses his own power to take advantage of others. Then, the protagonist was so hot-tempered and cold-hearted. For the sake of information that he didn't need at this stage, he had followers who were attached to him, so he allowed himself to be insulted and just sat idly by. After such a long time, she doesn't even have a few close friends. If she has the time, she might as well develop the dungeon. Readers will not care about what she is thinking at all, they can only see what she does. I don't know what the author's quirks were that led him to write such a character, or whether it was someone's holster.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Traditional protagonists usually face each other. If they don't have the confidence to beat them, they'll naturally stay away from them. 😂😂😂Made paid money to watch such a woman lose her temper,

There should be no book that can surpass the typos in this book 👍

Xu Huo should be regarded as my favorite male protagonist in Qidian novels in recent years after Klein. It is also one of the highlights of this book. I think he is very humane, which does not mean that he is kind. In fact, Xu Huo has killed a lot of people, and he will kill a few more when he is unhappy. However, he has his own principles and something he insists on in his heart. Whether it is selfishness or selflessness, the copy of Ember Girl is quite typical. For various reasons, he is quite charming. The overall framework of this book is very good. The most regrettable thing is that in the early stages of Infinite Streaming, when the copy was most needed to be displayed, the author lacked writing skills and failed to attract readers.

Tie it up again, record the reading experience (dedicated the first review of Qidian +1) 1 Although I have tried my best to read it every time a copy ends, I still have the uncomfortable feeling of not being able to remember the characters and props, especially the author who did not finish the random copy in the hotel this time. The complete statistics of Brother Xu's props are even more sad, but it's much better if Brother Xu can briefly introduce the props when using them now 2 I feel a little lucky that Sister Kou's protagonist is not the female protagonist ps I always feel that Sister Kou is much older than Brother Xu, I don't know if it's my illusion. I remember Brother Xu was around 26, and Sister Kou played with He Pu when she was a child and called him Uncle He Pu. He Pu seemed to be around 56 when he died? (I watched it for too long and I can't remember clearly) So when he was young, he took Bai Kou out to set fires. Assuming he was about 35 years old, Bai Kou must be in his teens? After more than 20 years, does Sister Kou have to be in her 30s now? Please ask someone who remembers it more accurately to answer or analyze it 3 One of the reasons why I like Brother Xu very much is that Brother Xu really respects women. The author does not speak in a pornographic tone when writing, and there are not a lot of weird women who pounce on Brother Xu whenever they see him. Many women he meets are relatively independent. ps This is really touching 4 There is no strange golden finger, Brother Xu has always had a calm mind and rational analysis, neither a holy mother nor cold-blooded 5 The plot continues to be high-energy 6 I don't understand why it is not popular. Is it because of the reading threshold and not being cool enough?

Is there a possibility that the female protagonist is the "main character who advances the plot" rather than "the male protagonist's other half" Beijing Line's plot has not progressed very far before there are many comments expressing disgust. The subconscious ties the female protagonist and the male protagonist together. Wouldn't you feel constrained while reading the book?

The combat power gap between A-level players is very large. I think it can be mainly divided into these levels. Weak A-level players: They rely on dungeon guides to advance through dungeons. They have no good props and basically no super evolution. They can only bully B-level players 😅. Ordinary A-level players: Upgrade by playing dungeons on their own, with average or good ratings, a few good props, and may have super evolution but the level of evolution is not high. Strong A-level players: Strong and tyrannical, they are basically super evolvers and have many powerful A-level items. For example: Lao Deng, the bodyguard of some families. Super A-level players (mentioned in Chapter 2156): Can easily crush a group of ordinary A-level players, super evolvers, with a very high degree of evolution, and even super evolution in more than one direction. For example: Dou Shengnan, etc., Those with super props will be stronger 👍, but they can still compete or even defeat by stacking the number of A-level players and equipment. Half-step super: At this level, it is meaningless for ordinary A-level players to rely on numbers to win. If there is no super player present, half-step super is equivalent to a super player 🙏. For example: magician.

The author is very to my liking. There are very few situations in this book where the characters reduce their intelligence to promote the plot. There are not many deliberate plots for the sake of pretense. As a rare long novel, the combat power has not collapsed yet. The world view has been maintained very well since the expansion of the super prop incident. The world view advances at a fast and The characters are related, allowing readers to always keep the freshness of new settings and the sense of anticipation for the subsequent plot. This experience of slowly exploring the world is really comfortable, like the unfolding of a scroll. Many copies show that the author is very attentive. Although the text is not gorgeous, it is straightforward and straightforward, which is good! However, I also think that this book may not be a popular book by the author. To me, the shortcomings are still very obvious The first is the rhythm of the story. I think this is the biggest problem and it is also a problem that runs through the book. The author likes to suddenly intersperse some other things in a story that should be complete. (In my personal reading experience, I feel) The story is insignificant, so that the completeness of the story line is seriously affected, especially in some random dungeons that suddenly enter. What impressed me most was when I went to track down Dr. Zhang and went to the painter's section. It was originally a major plot that revealed the protagonist's life experience, but it was suddenly thrown into a random dungeon. It was very uncomfortable. Maybe it's to enrich the world view, enrich the copy, or maybe the author suddenly thought of a good idea, but really, rhythm is important. The second is the key issue of the overall story line. The bright and dark lines are not clear. I am always hit with a hammer here and there, which makes me dizzy. Personally, this story has two lines. One is to survive and grow in the cruel game world and even overthrow the entire game in the end (reflected in the improvement of the evolution rate, which is the Dr. Wu line); It is to explore the protagonist's life experience (that is, Dr. Zhang's line). According to my understanding, the protagonist's life experience should be regarded as the big dark line of the book, and it should be combined with the big light line to push the story to a climax. However, in actual reading, these two lines are relatively disconnected. If there is a lack of perfection, go to the bright line to advance a little, and if there is no shortage, go to the dark line to advance a little. There is too little intersection! ! The sense of interruption is also very strong! In the final analysis, it is still a matter of rhythm. The two story lines lack the feeling that you are part of me and you are part of me. They are very fragmented, and it feels like the climax of the story cannot be reached. Finally, in terms of character creation, it is still almost interesting. There is too little intersection between the protagonist and the supporting characters, and there is no better stage for the supporting characters. Judging from the latest chapter, Yan Jiayu and Hua Nu have written more, and they are more impressive supporting characters. However, when they are writing with the protagonist, their subjective initiative is very It is so lacking that from the early stage to the latest, the portrayal of the two supporting characters is very stereotyped. Yan Jiayu was an optimistic muscular girl at the beginning, and she still only has this impression. The painted girl was silly white with sweet pink and black at the beginning. It is still the same now. The three-dimensional sense is poor. Maybe the painted girl is reasonable as a super prop. I just said casually, I think from the suitcase man dungeon (especially after the protagonist fainted) Yan Jiayu was able to have a lot of subjective initiative to create a more three-dimensional character. As an advanced player, in addition to the optimistic muscle style, he must also have scheming, thoughts, ideals, ambitions and beliefs, but in the end he did not write it out, or it was not very in-depth, which is a pity. Actually, there are still a lot of small problems. Some of the settings are quite strange and confusing, but they are all minor matters.

When I saw Chapter 823, there was nothing I liked about the character Bai Kou. There were 33 comments in the sentence after the intersection point. I took a look and there were more than 20 replies to the first comment I clicked on. It turned out that two people were arguing about Bai Kou. At first I thought that both sides could talk reasonably, but the more I talked about it, the more I felt that he was reading from Bai Kou's perspective, so I continued to reply. I feel that it is inconvenient to argue in the chapter, and there are few people discussing it, so I posted a post here so that everyone can chat. This is just my personal opinion. I personally feel that there is nothing particularly likable about the two main female characters Bai Kou and Yan Jiayu created by the author when the author reached Chapter 823. Yan Jiayu was still a bit likable in the early stage, upright, kind, and a little naive about the world. The protagonist's feelings for Yan Jiayu are very similar to those of his own girl, with infinite preference and tolerance. Without any help from other elements, the behavioral logic has changed from exploration to favoritism. Bai Kou is like the author's own reflection in the story. She is strong, has no setbacks, has a happy family, and is willful. Xu Huo will never disobey me. From Bai Kou's appearance to Chapter 823, I think all her functions can be fulfilled by strengthening Mr. Dong, and maybe she can do better. On the contrary, there are some female supporting characters, which I feel are more likable, such as Hua Nu, Zhou Ning, Lu Slut who survived the previous copy, etc. Of course, having said that, after all, I have only reached chapter 823. Maybe there is some flashy plot between the two women that I have not seen. After all, there are already more than 2,000 chapters in just the update, and it is not finished yet. From a reader's perspective, I really hope that the two women can have more exciting plots. I also hope that more people can come to the comment area to chat. Until now, I have been single-player. To be honest, it is enough 🤤. I took some screenshots of the discussion in Chapter 823. You can go to Chapter 823 to read the details.

The writing is true, but it's too difficult to advance. It's understandable if you want to write a good story, but 1800 chapters of pig's feet are still quasi-B-level. It's too slow.

I listened to the book at first. Then it was too slow for me to read the book, so I read all the remaining 500 chapters in one go. Now it's even more uncomfortable to follow it every day 😭😭😭😭

It's only been a while, but it's getting old again. Can you keep updating every day? I've been following this novel for a short time and it's not enough.

I have collected more than 150 chapters, and I just wanted to ask everyone if Brother Xu has reached A. If it doesn't arrive, I'll check in again.

The protagonist relies on that box. It is also a prop in itself. But the quality of the props is not the highest, right? Anyway, I don't remember it. That prop pulled out a top-notch prop. The description of the box props will give you what is most needed at the moment. But even if a board fell, or something fell? Just enough to block the bow and arrow. Isn't it possible? It's just a thing that isn't even the most advanced prop in itself. It's unreasonable that he can pull out a top-level item. And it's a low-level copy. Although that place looked dangerous, it was just a low-level dungeon after all. There is an impeccable and perfect evolution. There is also a superlative prop. Is this really reasonable? And the background introduction was also introduced there. It was analyzed by the protagonist himself. Someone was watching before. It is quite reasonable that the master of this city's potion was not found. The most advanced props are in the room. Why wasn't it found even in the house? If you can't even find this kind of thing, you are the protagonist. A prop that can be pulled out. Others rely on power to search, and if they cannot find it, then I think the prop cannot be pulled out. There is a huge coincidence here. Even the infinite probability is close to zero. Without this paragraph, the follow-up would not have developed like this. This stop has also become indispensable. But this paragraph itself doesn't make sense.

Come on, come on, come on

1-16                                                                                                                                                                                         Having Siege of the Holy Sword Club 81-117 Decibel Town Dungeon 20 Evolution Rate Obtain super props 123-145 Players from outside areas compete for super props 146-176 Fairy Tale City Dungeon 185-219 Little Flower Red Building Dungeon 222-240 Hundred People Art Museum Dungeon 257- 287 Pink Riding Hood's Amusement Park Copy 291-306 Obtaining the Mental Copy Authorization Letter 307-321 Spiritual Mega Evolution Event 336-368 Rose Flower Castle Copy 370-413 Settled in Area 011 414-460 Deep Blue Laboratory Copy 461-474 Encountered Super Player 30 Evolution Rate 486-517 Murder Case of Nobles at Sea Open Spirit Dungeon 518-573 Clown City Dungeon Obtain Super Evolved Fungus 581-665 Area 014 Event Upgrade Spirit Dungeon 668-698 Copy of Common Eye 711-763 Copy of Sun Museum City 769-780 Copy of Master's Villa 781 -801 Incident of Painter Jiang Jiang 812-821 Orbital Storm Event 822-855 Area 011 Event 40 Evolution Rate 862-888 Sea World Copy 897-984 w37 Copy 989-1057 District 002 incident 1058-1127 High-risk copy 1127-1178 District 014 incident 1179-1186 Trying to retrieve memory 1202-1255 Card City Dungeon 1259-1314 Area 011 Event Obtain Fanxiao's Legacy 1322-1365 Twin Cities Dungeon 1370-1393 Bauhinia Restaurant Copy 1410 Reaching c2 Platinum Heel 1426-1460 King's Gem Copy 1482-1507 E25-026 Area Events 50 evolution rate 1509-1561 District 017 event 1562-1579 District 014 event 1595-1654 Midsummer Night Galaxy copy 1655-1689 Area 014 Incident 1703-1779 Ember Girl Copy 1803-1876 Wandering Melissa Copy 1896-1603 Time Evolution 1904-1921 Platinum Eye Incident 60 Evolution Rate 1922-2010 Justice Copy 2022-2046 Time Evolution Correction

Having read more than 1,600 chapters, I can say that the protagonist is still a C-level player. Because I just read that most book lovers are sensitive to this? I personally feel that the plot is very reasonable, and there is no deliberate delay. Whether it is a single copy or a series of connected copies or game partitions, the content is very exciting. The downside is that there are indeed typos. Personally, I am more shocked by some of the depictions of human nature. Maybe because I don't have enough experience, I didn't understand some of the depictions when I first saw them, because most of the online articles I read in the past were cool articles, and cool articles are nothing but cool. This book is very meticulously written, from the creation of characters and the portrayal of human nature, including the game between human nature in various forms, the entanglement of rights and desires, and various types of copies. They are all very detailed and three-dimensional, and have a lot of room for imagination. It's not as exciting as most online novels, and you may even feel a little frustrated at many times. You feel that the protagonist could just kill all the people who are an eyesore, so why keep them? When I saw the back part, I felt that it was the fact that Xu Huo didn't kill people casually that made him stand out. Rather than deliberately making the protagonist unique and disdainful of people and things in many novels in order to create a cold image of the protagonist, Xu Huo is more like a real person, because a person is not one-sided, he can save people or kill people, he has his own standards of judgment. Xu Huo is very principled. He sets a line for himself and does what he does under any circumstances. He is extremely rational and does what he wants to do within the scope of his own strength. As for whether it is a good thing or a bad thing, he actually doesn't care that much. He just goes with it. He does not deliberately be a good person and save people everywhere, nor is he the kind of bully who kills people casually when he becomes stronger. As the author himself describes, he respects the elderly, loves the young, and obeys the law. He is a perfect person. Maybe it's because he is too sensible and seems particularly cold and distant. I was not attracted to the role of Xu Huo at first. But this is exactly what Xu Huo is. The author used Tang Guangbo in the early stage to say that Xu Huo was an extremely indifferent person, but such an indifferent person repeatedly tried his best to help ordinary and vulnerable people. This is very interesting. I think the shaping of Xu Huo's character is worth discussing. It was introduced in the early stage that Xu Huo was addicted to gambling before the game appeared and was not a good person. As for why he was called a good person after entering the game, there are many possibilities. Maybe it was because his evil was taken over by his shadow personality? Or is there no comparison between the ordinary and normal society in the past and the depraved darkness in the game? Or maybe it's because his memory is incomplete? There are still many possibilities. I also saw some book friends speculating that the person who was so kind should not be Xu Huo, but Xu Zhi. 🙂 Besides Xu Huo, another person who I think has a very three-dimensional portrayal is Nie Xuan. Although he does not have many plots, his enthusiasm and hope for the country can be clearly felt every time he appears. As for other characters, my personal opinion is not to read the comments. Sometimes I just want to read the discussion about the plot, but there will always be some people who complain that they don't like xxx and then abandon it after writing it, which is very senseless. In fact, many characters are just normal descriptions. Even if there is no game, there will be all kinds of people in normal society. There will be good people and bad people. But who can measure the standards of good and evil? Everyone has his or her own standards. It would be boring if everyone was the same. As for who will be the heroine, or whether there will be a heroine at all, I don't think it matters. If there is, then Xu Huo's humane side will be more prominent. If there is not, it will not affect the subsequent development. After all, the main mission has not been completed yet. I can't guess the author's thoughts and ideas, and I often can't understand the later content involving space and time. One thing I don't quite understand is that everyone seems to be controversial about the appearance of super players and super props in the early stage. Do you think it is illogical? Or is it for other reasons? I can't quite get it. All worlds should be connected together, even those that have not yet been gamified (refer to Doctor Zhang on this point, or there may be a new explanation later), and players themselves can travel through various worlds through tickets. Low-level players may also consider their own safety, while high-level players do not have too many concerns in this regard. In this case, it is not surprising that high-level players appear in the early stage. What's more, the game will also notify the whole area. The super props are undoubtedly very attractive. Each one has a special function. Strong players will not dislike the large number of good props. Moreover, this is a zone that has just been gamified and has little resistance. Why not grab it? As for why the game needs to be notified? The book seems to have stated more than once that most areas of the game are dark and there is very little light, and judging from the Skinner dungeon and red players, the game (or those who control the game) are not good. In this case, why should we consider the consequences for the partition after the notification? Area 014 was lucky, and encountered Field Battle Angel, which attracted the attention of most advanced players. Some dungeons that appeared later and Area 017 were very miserable. As for some book friends who say that it destroys the sense of mystery, a lot of information can be seen under latitude, just like the Internet. Compared with ordinary people, high-level players and low-level players are like rich and poor. If you are poor, can't you peek into the lives of rich people through the Internet? And judging from Xu Huo's experience in various divisions, many players have a certain understanding of super players, such as the suitcase man who holds a grudge, the paper warrior's props that can be circulated, Lawrence Lee who is looking for solutions to the sequelae of evolution, and Dr. Wu and the perfect potion. Obviously, you don't have to be an advanced player to know this. Moreover, some of the high-level players who appeared in Area 014 were restrained by Lawrence Lee, and some were controlled by the Sophistication Knights while they were still watching. Xu Huo still relied on the painting girl to deceive them in a thrilling way, and it was mentioned in a subtle way that Tang Guangbo should have helped at that time. Under this logic, there is nothing unreasonable about super players and super props appearing early, right? And judging from the current situation, Dr. Zhang must also be an advanced player. Xu Huo has developed spiritual evolution under the training of advanced players since he was a child, and was exposed to it earlier than the super prop incident in District 014.