A Beautiful Journey Through Rivers and Lakes

The author does not need to belittle himself. The article will definitely get better as it is written. It needs precipitation and practice I feel that this article is indeed a bit broken. The main reason is that the main line is unclear and the order of the characters' appearances sometimes gets sidetracked when the causes and consequences are discussed, leaving the readers a little confused. It's wonderful, and it's obviously a story about the rivers and lakes, but it's also mixed with the court, and the plot is not written in detail, so it's a bit nondescript The emotional line of the male protagonist is also a bit difficult to describe, especially the second male lead, who is arranged inexplicably. I have lost my memory, so after reading it, I feel that it may be the problem with the entire outline The stories of the previous generation are also a bit bizarre. The old monster Red Flower and the Ghost Fairy Empress are just too worried for everyone. I think the author may have designed these plots with your intention in mind. But From a reader's point of view, it's a bit redundant and feels like a negative impression of the characters The specific details and writing style are pretty good, and I want people to read on. But after reading the whole story, I feel a little speechless Continue to work hard on the next chapter!

I always owe this book a long review When I first read this book, the first four chapters felt unremarkable. I started to feel that I could keep up with it from about Chapter 5. The climax was from Chapter 71 "Muyun Villa" to Chapter 163 "Two Farewells". It was very rare that I laughed while reading it, and I couldn't put it down until the early hours of the morning. After Chapter 164, it became a bit confusing, and the male protagonist was nowhere to be seen. I was anxious to death while reading it. I think the main line of the story is actually well designed, and the plot about the male protagonist can only be said to be different for each person. What is rare is that this book is very imaginative, and it is not the kind of marriage where a man is talented and a woman is beautiful from the beginning. First of all, the male protagonist appears as a villain for the first time. On the contrary, the second male protagonist has the image of a good family background and good character. It makes people feel very interesting when it is reversed. In addition, the author's language is very vivid and interesting, and the time flies when reading. After reading this book, I feel deeply inspired. Maybe it's because I've read too many stories about the protagonist's brilliant character, and I feel that people with flesh and blood are interesting. So I also want to try this setting in my next book, so that the male protagonist appears as a villain. But why does this book flutter? I think the first thing is that the climax comes a little late. Secondly, from the reader's perspective, this setting is also very risky. If the same story were written starting from "Muyun Villa", and then interspersed with the previous parts, and the last part was not watered down, a good book with a million words could actually be written. However, it cannot be said that the author's current setting is not a good book. It is just unpalatable in the specific context of online writing.

Oops, I ranked second in the reward rankings, but I was surpassed by an expired rice ball. 🤣 I hope readers will surpass me and reward me more. 🤣🤣

The assistant saw it, the ticket is for you, come on, at least the contract is signed, then finish writing it, even if one day you don't want to write it, you still have to write an ending. I once wrote a book with 700,000 words, but I didn't sign a contract, and then I deleted it all, haha.

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The plot moves slowly, but the writing is exquisite~

If you didn't finish writing in the first month, it seems that you didn't have perfect attendance. I'm not sure about the female videos. You can write slowly and save some manuscripts for next month, just in case.

Come on! Very well written

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The writing is very good! If you write a female video, you can wear red sleeves.

The title of your book doesn't match the cover~

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If you have time. Two updates a day would be better

I would like to ask, how did you get your recommendation votes in the early stage?

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The writing is so beautiful, I hope to continue writing

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When will Douzi release a new book?