My Girlfriend Is the Eldest Lady

I would like to give you some personal suggestions. What can I say about this novel? The plot made me look forward to it at the beginning, but there were indeed a lot of bad things later on. First, there are too many female protagonists, and the emotional lines cannot be true. Personally, I think 3-5 is better. There are too many ambiguous heroines in this book to write about. Secondly, the emotional line of the male protagonist is really not well developed. At the beginning, it is said that he likes the senior sister, and the senior sister chooses the elder brother. However, the male protagonist later falls in love with other female protagonists, but he still feels that the elder brother cannot steal the male protagonist's girlfriend. But to be fair, it's understandable that the senior sister doesn't like the male protagonist and ends up liking the older brother. If the male protagonist only likes one senior, or likes the senior very much (you can't tell from the text, okay), then forget it, but the male protagonist likes too many people, does he have the qualifications or position to think that this is not allowed? ? ? Third, I personally think that dark (qj) plots in light novels are not necessary. Because light novels are generally daily novels, they are not meant for urban readers. The above are all personal opinions. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better. After all, there are fewer and fewer light novel romances.

Kaguya Shinomiya is the heroine Kaguya Shinomiya is the heroine

I have read about 20 chapters so far, and I can only say that some chapters are okay and some are a bit nonsensical. The character setting feels appropriate, and there is no need to introduce everything. There are really not many people who read light novels without watching anime. The godfather and godson around chapter 10 were a bit awkward to watch, maybe because I don't watch enough Japanese entertainment. There is so much to read. I can only say that there is no harm if there is no comparison. It is not that the writing is not good, but it is still inferior compared to excellent works.

The author added an update. So slow every day

I suggest you change your name and call yourself a cuckold. Don't come here 😁

Let me talk about the points that I personally think are very discouraging First, the protagonist's reborn brother is hostile to the protagonist. There are currently more than 200 chapters. The brother wants money, power, and beauties, and some of them are popular anime heroines. Basically, they are fucked by the protagonist's brother, who has a harem. What about the protagonist? He wants money but no money. The billions he won from gambling is under the control of the protagonist's father. He doesn't have much money to spend. He wants power but no power. He wants beauty. Although Rem has a crush on the protagonist, she may not be able to pursue her. In this comparison, who is the protagonist? Second, there are currently many anime characters in books. Some of the popular female protagonists have been given supporting roles by the author, and some have been taken advantage of by sidekicks. For example, Chika Fujiwara was molested by a lewd man. Is this trying to discourage readers who like these female protagonists?

Ntr is disgusting, and he even described it in detail

Toxic, if you don't write that Xia Laofei likes the protagonist before Tianshu is reborn, it's nothing. It's okay to have sex with her after rebirth! ? Are you a female author? 😥😆Female authors wouldn't care about issues like giving away daughters. . 👍🙏

Did the author participate in the partisan struggle between the Novel Party and the Animation Party of Practical Education? He brought his own emotions into writing about Juibei.

Write with confidence and boldness. You can still read it after reading this introduction. No matter what the plot is, readers will open their mouths and swallow it 👍👍👍

Um... What's the significance of retaining the role of Banze Tianshu? A dirty trick to trip up the protagonist? Promote the plot? Expand hidden lines? Or is it simply disgusting readers? I originally watched it well, ignored some of the issues and continued watching, but this character disgusted me every time he appeared, and I wanted to know when this character would disappear.

Under the light novel label, try to use original characters for tragic characters. It is too easy to offend people 😅

Probably everyone who likes cuckolds is a sufferer in reality😅

The title of this book has big characters, it will definitely become popular!

Stop backstabbing Mr. Sad, people don't like cuckolds

Good luck in the Year of the Ox🪖

If you come here because of its reputation, you will have more bulls in the Year of the Ox.

Author, do you think readers will like these popular anime female protagonists giving benefits to other male supporting characters, especially the protagonist's brother who has taken advantage of some popular anime characters and is just short of having sex with them, and some of them have even had sex with them. I think readers who like these popular anime heroines will not like this kind of plot. I know that the author has changed the story of Senpai and Horikita Reine, but there are still many plots in which various anime heroines are taken advantage of. The author has changed the story of Senpai and Horikita Reine, so you should know how dissuasive these plots are. It is best for the author not to write such plots anymore.

Reading the comments, there is something good about this novel. The author 🐂 criticizes it, but I can't accept it 😅

How many brothers came here because of it😃😃

How should I put it... I came from the piracy side, and I admit that I felt a little aggrieved when I first read this novel. For example, the protagonist's predecessor was killed by his brother, and Shinomiya was inexplicably captured by the Daomingji Temple... Although the author said that he had changed it, I still felt a little bit uncomfortable as a person who read the pirated version from the beginning However, the hidden plot of Kudo Shinichi's revenge and the hidden plot of the black hand behind the Shinomiya family were also very exciting. However, I suggest that the author try to be original when writing characters with darker plots. After all, not everyone can deal with it calmly when their favorite characters are ruined. This is very important. After all, I read light novels just to enjoy myself and not to let you bother me. Finally, I hope the author can maintain the quality of his work. I will support the original version of the following chapters. I hope the author can present us with better stories

Hattori Heiji and Mouri Ran becoming a couple is too funny. It's not for nothing that Hattori Heiji, Toyama and Yeno are childhood sweethearts. Their parents are a good pairing, and their families all agree that they should be together. Unlike Kudo Shinichi and Mao Lilan, Kudo and his wife were very happy, but Maori Kogoro's attitude was very obvious (not because Kudo was in the limelight, but because he felt that this person was not good). Even Fei Yingri's attitude was ambiguous. It was not surprising that the two did not get together in the later period. When Hattori Heiji and Toyama Kazuha's fathers were active in the police force, and even when Hattori Heiji and Toyama Kazuha were born, the protagonists hadn't even started to be active yet. Unexpectedly, the two came together like this, and Hattori had his first love (Kazuha) when he was eight or nine years old, and he could not forget it until he was seventeen or eighteen. I really didn't expect Mao Lilan to be so "involved". I agree very much with Kaitou Kidd being imprisoned. Sooner or later, he will have to pay the price for disturbing the order of the country for his father who brought it upon himself. The fact that he didn't die was unexpected, and the government agencies that slapped him in the face every day didn't die. There was an inside story. (Although anime Japan does not have the death penalty, the country has so many ways to die that one cannot think of)

I am an old two-dimensional person. Although I am not the kind of person who talks about "XXX is my wife", I have no resistance to the charming characters in my favorite dramas. I personally like the eldest lady Shinomiya Kaguya very much. I was very excited when I saw this character at first (I personally prefer to read novels and put myself into the protagonist). I originally thought that the author's protagonist would have some sparks with Shinomiya Kaguya. It turns out that I was overthinking it. Until Daoming Sihao appeared and directly attacked Shinomiya Kaguya, I had the same feeling at the time. It's frustrating It's very frustrating But I still insisted on reading it (after all, I was still reading pirated books at the time, and I didn't spend money anyway) The author's writing is indeed not as good as other daily writings. This work is mixed with too many animation works, so many As for how this work will collapse, I was very interested until the author later published a single chapter "Please don't read pirated copies" I thought at the time, "Huh, okay, let's support the original version." It was the first time I read a book review, and there was a screen of "ntr" and the like. Maybe it was the plot of the senior sister getting together with the protagonist's predecessor's brother that poisoned a group of people. But I don't feel it at all, because I haven't watched the TV series "The Passerby Heroine" at all. I still think it's quite subtle. After all, I understand, the kind of two-dimensional wife I like is not with the protagonist, I can't accept it! I understand the feeling! Then, the author said that the chapter about Shinomiya Kaguya had been revised, and I rushed to that chapter. After reading it, it's not bad. It's much better than pirated books. At least I feel much better. After reading the subsequent events of the Suzuki family, I personally felt that it was a bit confusing. I don't know if it is considered a poisonous point. Originally, I didn't like the character of Suzuki Yuko very much, so I naturally felt that it would be better to just let her die. But the author's thinking is different from ours. He just wants to do something different. After reading it Hmm I feel very speechless. There is something wrong and I can't tell. But if you want to say that the author wrote this paragraph very well, I will be the first to disagree. Really, I really don't understand the meaning of this paragraph, other than a slap in the face, it's really embarrassing and boring! (Maybe I read too many fantasy invincible articles) Skip this paragraph, and the plot gradually gets better after that. Although there are still some awkwardnesses, the rest is generally okay. Just now there were some people who "came here because of my reputation", please forgive them. They are victims of book piracy! I would like to say secretly that I, a person who reads daily harem literature, also felt that this book was not good, but I still read it, and I don't know why Maybe I wanted to witness whether Naoki Hansawa soared into the sky in the maelstrom planned by the author or drowned In reality, we are tired for life, reading novels that interest us, and watching how the protagonist makes his own path step by step. I enjoy this feeling (can the author write less pretentious and slap-in-the-face routines? I really feel embarrassed after reading too much!) This is all I can think of. Maybe I will come back next time, or maybe I will abandon this book and never come back. I wish the author a lot of inspiration and good writing skills See you soon

The recent progress has been controlled quite well Kudo Shinichi's revenge line: I'm looking forward to it very much. Judging from the latest chapter 163, did Kudo Shinichi change his name to Edogawa Doyle? And he adopted a child and renamed him Edogawa Conan?

Humph, that's all! What, you stabbed Mr. Pei in the back? ! If you want to nag about this, then I won't be sleepy~

Happy New Year and may this book be a hit!

After reading thirty chapters, at first glance, it seems that there are too many anime characters, a bit of a hodgepodge, and non-experienced two-dimensional characters will not be able to understand them. However, the author handled it quite well, and many of the secondary settings are quite interesting. Then I asked the comrades who saw the book at the back, apart from daily life, is the main focus of this book doing business or playing chess?

The protagonist can gradually show his fangs, and don't say a full-scale "war" with his brother, but don't completely play behind the scenes and make it unknown. Don't underestimate the former Prime Minister. It is not easy for anyone to reach the top of the country, and the power in their hands is not small. The time-travelers were "done" by others. Half a year has passed, and both my family and my business are fine, which shows the problems. The Prime Minister dared to kill and would care about a few "ordinary people". However, half a year has passed, his family is fine, and the company is running normally, which shows that the forces behind him have made a lot of efforts. (Although the protagonist's family has lost power, they still have to protect their face and bottom line, otherwise they will lose their hearts). The official power is probably more optimistic about the protagonist's family. With its own huge company and the rise of his son, coupled with the help of his connections, he may not be able to stand up again in the future. There is also the arrangement of the time traveler's mother for her two sons. The way the time traveler has "magically changed" the lives of various comic and animation protagonists can be seen. Even "idiot" protagonists such as Sakuragi Hanamichi and Nohara Shinnosuke can play and support them to the leading position in the industry. It can be seen that in addition to the promising plot in the plot, it also helps Sakuragi and others a lot after the "end". I say all this just to show that I can spare no effort to help "outsiders", let alone my own biological son. Moreover, the resources given to the two children should be the same. Whether you have the qualifications is one thing, and whether they will give you the resources is another. Besides, if one parent is really unable to support him, then he can also switch to the other parent. After all, he is "one of our own." But this time limit will definitely not be within the next two or three years. Many anime protagonists develop their talents in the later stages. Can the time traveler guarantee that his son is not this type? This is the reason why the protagonist is not allowed to retreat behind the scenes and command. It sends this signal to "own resources". In addition, it is also necessary to support the old forces and cultivate new forces that belong to their own lineage. There are always some forces and individuals that look down upon the protagonist's brother and the protagonist's brother. Not everyone likes his cool and ruthless personality. The protagonist can see that those people are good, but they are just not suitable for him.

I haven't been diligent in updating lately, can you add more updates?

Great, great, it would be even better if it could be faster.