Start with a God in the Fairy World

I feel like you won't be able to persevere when writing like this. Share more experiences, or read your article from the reader's perspective and change your perspective. There may be new gains

Writing a book is not easy. Come on, author, keep summarizing your experience and listen to the advice of book friends. You will definitely succeed.

A bunch of settings from the beginning? Let's tell a story!

If it were me, In the first chapter, I would first write a short paragraph about the process of becoming a god in the human world, and explain the background of the protagonist. In the second chapter, I would write about what he expects the world to be like after ascension, and then encounter related plots after arriving in a different world, such as things that belong to him, and what the male protagonist will become in this world in the future In the third chapter, write the story and start it, but everything is difficult at the beginning. The male protagonist must overcome many things.

Faster, there are too few, it is best to update five, six, seven, eight or ninety times a day

Your update time is too messy. I always feel that you update as soon as you write, which will greatly affect your later performance (personal suggestion: write at a stable time, update stably, and save as many manuscripts as possible)

There were too many early settings and foreshadowings, and I didn't see the main body of the so-called "system" For example, what kind of person the protagonist will become in the end, The protagonist's background is unclear, and his purpose in the other world is unclear. The protagonist went to the village to recruit people and didn't see why he accepted them. . The transition is too abrupt and has no purpose

It seems like you really don't have an outline.

Boss, let's take a look at your masterpiece. Hahaha

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง