The Roaring Tiger of Red Mansion

I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters. In the first chapter, the siege team only had twice the strength of the defenders, but the defenders were struggling. Where to put the faces of Sun Shiwan and his famous generals such as Lu Meng and Gan Ning who were beaten by Zhang Babai? Zhuge Liang also attacked Chencang, and his troops were far superior to those of Hao Zhao who was defending the city, but there was still nothing he could do. If the siege party doesn't play tricks, even with 10 times the number of people defending the city, they may not be able to break the city. Is it that pig's feet are useless, or are Zhang Liao and Hao Zhao both gods and bullying the children across from them? Chapter 2 The enemy troops withdrew for no apparent reason and started drinking. I can understand using wine to heal wounds, but drinking is nothing! Are you not afraid that the enemy will retreat just to wait for you to relax before attacking the city? In the first part, Pig Knuckle is given a genius character, but in the second part, there are constant subversive plots. In addition to the country name, I complained about it in the first chapter, so I won't go into details here. Has been poisoned

Depending on the identity of the protagonist and the operation to win over the old men, you must rebel when the time comes. The reason is very simple. The soldiers tie their heads to their belts and follow you so that you can become the emperor and gain the merit of being a slave to the dragon. They do not want you to serve the emperor and gain the merit of being a slave to the dragon. So what else do they have? On the road to fighting for the world, you must spend all your money to recruit heroes to eliminate your enemies for you. It doesn't matter what the people support. What matters is that the army supports you.

The author underestimates the clan system in feudal society. There is a saying that if the king wants his ministers to die, they have to die; if the father wants his son to die, his son has to die. This sentence is the culmination of feudal ethics and was the most politically correct in the era when The Red Mansion was written. In ancient times, the protagonist's actions were called intimidating aunts and treating elders harshly. He has no power as his base. If he does this, he will basically end up as a bandit. Still thinking about doing something big and rebelling? What are you thinking? As a political figure, the most basic thing is that the halo of appearance cannot be broken and there must be no political stains. Do you think there is any politically accomplished person in our country from ancient times to the present who does not have the word "filial piety"? There are a few emperors, and you can see what the outcome will be. As an unfilial person in the bureaucracy, all your achievements can be wiped out. You have to show off even if you don't want to see your elders. If you are impeached by the civil servants for your actions, the emperor will not be able to speak for you.

I am not Shennong, but I have been poisoned to death. Military and political affairs are playing house, the two palaces of Ning and Rong are fighting, and patriarchal family rules do not exist. You hurt me and I'll hurt you, that's it.

Let me go, you are a prince and a general in charge of the army, do you need to keep those nonsense things in the back house in your heart? All the high-ranking officials and princes in the past dynasties have not spoken at home. Except for your mother, other people can just ignore the things you decide. Don't spend all your time in the back house. It is too ridiculous. . .

This is the worst Red Mansion novel I have ever read. The writing is so crappy that it's 2021 and people are still using it indiscriminately. There are three types of unfilial piety, the worst is not having an heir. The plot is also self-explanatory, wasting 20 minutes.

By the second chapter, it's poisoning people to death. It's hard to defend 60,000 with 30,000. The knife can stop even an inch away from you. You really think the soldiers are robots. That's a battlefield.

When the protagonist returns home, he does all kinds of things that challenge feudal ethics, but the protagonist's family does not react excessively. Feudal ethics are the order of feudal society. As a vested interest, you are against your own class? If he was powerful, it would be fine to ignore him, an idle marquis who had been relieved of his military duties. If this is a real feudal society, you are digging your own grave!

First of all, the writing style is not good. Even if you don't tell me, you will know that it is a bit fluent and the pace is too fast. Secondly, there are also problems with the plot. In invasions such as the Huns, the state organized large-scale armies with civil servants or veteran generals as commanders, and palace eunuchs as supervisors. The protagonist was too young and had insufficient qualifications. His family background was at most a vanguard or a small side army. And then as an official, a young reserve talent in your family, your aunt, brother and sister are still fighting with you. The dispute over home and family cannot even be brought to the table. The promising eldest brother didn't dare to breathe when he looked at his younger brothers and sisters. There is no need to fight. As an official, the decision-making power of the family naturally lies in your hands. Mother Jia will also have to consider your words. After all, she is a woman. Feudal families are supported by generations of male officials. A promising person is the future of the family.

It looks like we are all brave men, brothers, they are all rat tail juice

I like Red Mansions mainly because of its historical background and meaning, as well as the richness of its characters. Looking at the current historical literature, most people don't know what to say. It can be said that from top to bottom, everything is lost. Some people even wrote a book about the daily life of time-travelers, such as making ice, steaming wine, cooking, and making steel. I have read it, so why write it down? It's not right if I don't know how to do it. This is the first failure of history writing. As for Wen Chao Gong, isn't it normal for the moonlight to shine in front of the bed? A mentally retarded person can even memorize a few Tang poems. And the second failure is that the plot is written in a lonely way. I won't go into details. It is a dynasty where celebrities are born. Even if it is a fiction, a few awesome characters must be written to set off the protagonist. Haha, may I ask, do you have decades of experience as a senior civil servant? If not, it is nothing. How can you compare with others. The final summary is that history is bloody. To embellish it, it's just like fighting and iron horses. There's a reason why Three Kingdoms and Water Margin have become famous novels. Secondly, whether it's The Legend of Yue Fei or the Sui and Tang Dynasties, there's no way it would be exciting without the immediate 70% fighting. Either you have decades of life experience and a familiarity with history, then all kinds of conspiracies and conspiracies will be at your fingertips. Either write well, be bold and have depth, and be bold and have foundation. I just have some words that I don't like to say during the book shortage, and they are not directed at the author. Of course, they can also be understood as a kind of expectation for the author. Because I love novels, I love historical novels, and I don't want people nowadays to bring their own three views into the works. After all, the feudal era is different from modern times, or modern people are weak. The environment we face is not as bad as that of the ancients, just like the Song Dynasty and the late Han Dynasty, the times are just different. Finally, I wish the author this book will get better as he writes more.

Are any books popular and recommended? This primary school student writes like a composition🤫

I just don't understand, why all the red buildings? I have to put up with that old lady

That of the North. . . Brother is right, I totally agree. Don't think of the ancient feudal dynasties as the Communist Party. Their starting points were different. How can your demands be the same? What he said really had little effect on people's hearts in the feudal era. Otherwise, how could Zhu Yuanzhang win the world? Zhang Shicheng is more popular with the people than him, so many people were fooled by Li Shimin's words. He himself is not popular with the people, so he is talking nonsense. When he came up, he challenged the traditional Confucian moral values ​​and carried out the Xuanwu Gate Incident. Soon after, Tu Que troops came to the city. Do you think the nomads who came to the Central Plains could have as strict military discipline as Yue Fei led his troops? I don't know how many people were killed in the north. Less than a year later, there was a severe drought in the north. The concept of divine right of kings meant that the emperor was immoral. In addition, in order to make Tuque retreat, he lost all the treasury and had no money for disaster relief. His reputation among the people was almost the same as that of Jie and Zhou. But as long as he compromised with the aristocratic family, he was still a saint. Any black spots would be corrected for you as long as he pleased the literati. History books are nothing. It's a pity, he didn't expect that archeology would now prove it. So in the feudal era, it didn't matter what the common people thought of you. As long as you had the support of interest groups and were strong, it was different how much it cost to bribe the people, but it was different to bribe an interest group that could maintain its rule. Groups that don't pay wages are the most evil. The Soviet Union is like this. If you don't pay wages, they will actively betray the country. In the end, the people will not help you. You will not be able to please both sides, and you will still be remembered in history for thousands of years. Yang Guang is a particularly typical example. He betrayed his own interest group and wanted to remove the Hu people from the ruling class during the integration of Hu and Han, allowing Han groups to replace him, and even considered himself Han. However, his policies harmed the aristocratic families, and as a result, the southern Han clans did not support him, preferring to let the Hu people step on his head. In the end, after losing the support of the Guanlong Military Group in the north, he failed to gain support from the south and finally died. He did so well without looking at the use of ordinary people. In the end, it was the interest groups that had the most solid support.

Eh... After reviewing it, the writing style is quite immature. Every time I read it, I don't want to read it anymore. I can understand what the author means, but his writing is too poor. All in all, the idea is good, but the writing is poor.

What the hell are you writing? Inconsistent, inconsistent, contradictory everywhere, and the explanation is also messy? It's hard to write such a huge work without some ink in your chest

After watching the beginning of "Destroying the Turks", I was granted a title, but there is no real title. It's really poisonous.

People's interactions are based on emotions and morality. But groups and groups, countries and countries only care about interests. For example: massacre is cruel and inhumane, but war is inherently cruel and inhumane. Do you want to trust the safety of yourself and your family to the kindness of your enemies? Your country is dead, your territory is lost, and your people are dead. If you go and scold him for being unethical and anti-human, can you scold him to death? That's what you think! The exchanges between countries are not based on my belief that you will not do anything to me, but based on my belief that you will not dare to do something to me! Why do you need national defense construction if your rhetoric is useful?

It feels a bit like an idol drama. The author is young and inexperienced. After reading more than ten chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. Those in power don't have the mentality of those in power, the male protagonist is a Mary Sue type, and the parents are short-tempered and childish. Some stories are difficult to write well without experience. The horse nation went south not for wealth, but for resources. These resources were necessary for the horse nation to survive. There's no way he'd back down just because his lair was stolen. People will die, and they will die if they don't plunder. This is the true situation of the Ma people in ancient times. Not to mention anything else, a character who is not an idol drama would not be that childish.

I haven't read the original work, only a lot of Red Mansions fans. Your writing is not bad, but your writing is messy and quite immature. Someone has feelings! ! The characters in the plot don't match up. I think you may want to write one story at a time. There is only a simple outline. After reading a few chapters, I can't see what you want to do, and I don't understand who you are! Unlike other Red Mansions, the main plot is very obvious, and the pursuit is also clear. It is also written about what my character is doing and what I am pursuing! Including the kind of YY red building

Qin Keqing's private life was very bad. He had several affairs with several people. When his affair with his father-in-law was exposed, he hanged himself.