Transforming American Comics Starts with a Leap of Faith

I took the time to read it from the beginning today and found that this book has many shortcomings. The writing is average, the plot is a bit scattered, there are some bugs in the details, and the characters are not outstanding. But the overall impression is pretty good. From my old bookworm's point of view, it can score 65 points, which is a level that can be pursued. However, I don't know much about the follow-up plot, so I lack some sense of expectation. Unfortunately, I can't help it. Who told me to write this book? Alas... Hug yourself

I haven't read it yet, but reading the review looks like it's another Marvel novel routine. I won't mention the name, but I'll read the content first.

There is nothing to say. Writing is a side job. Most authors cannot reach the level of masters and can only use it as extra income. I hope the author will update more every day, and support me with all subscriptions.

I don't know how it was written, but it suddenly jumped from one month ago to one month later. What happened in the middle? You didn't even say anything, you just jumped to a month later. How do you think about this?

It's too short, I suggest you combine it into one, so that you can save one chapter title to think about.

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I haven't written many books, but I finally wrote this one with good results, and it has also been recommended. After that, you can take steps to attract more readers. Under such a good situation, the author actually chose eunuchs. Is he so ambitious and thinking about becoming famous and rich overnight?😅

Not many American comics are well written The bottom line is that most authors have little love for the original work There is no point in seeing sincere fan fiction I wish your work success Looking forward to Captain!

If you really can't do it, can you send me the outline and I'll finish it for you? 😅😅😅

Although it shows Hoshi Shou, I still think Chunhui is beautiful.

It's about to be put on the shelves, I wish it a great sale. There are no big problems with the plot so far, but some small details are not explained clearly. For example, does this hero template have its own consciousness? If it has the equivalent of summoning it, it is a hero. If not, why will everyone's character be so greatly affected? Is the focus of this book on LoL heroes or American comic heroes? It feels like the protagonist is gaining abilities while the villain is replacing consciousness. Of course, there is no big problem with this treatment so far. In the following words, I hope that the clown will remain pure evil without any moral shackles. The morality of American comics itself has a sense of superiority that is disgusting. It's enough for Mr. Kui to pretend to be a saint in front of others. After writing these two kinds of pleasures, he will definitely not be disappointed. If he really wants to mix Marvel's childish plot with those disgustingly false morals and humanity, it will be a matter of time before he fails. The reason why most American comic books are sold out is because they have to swim in the cesspit of American comics. Wouldn't it be nice to run on the ground by yourself?

Let me give you some advice, it's boring to play alone. You can mention any heroes you want to see appear and I will watch them. Finally, I would like to ask for a recommendation for collection and investment. This is really important for new books. I am just a newbie and have no foundation at all. If you think my writing is not that bad, please give me a little attention! Please! Also, if you spray, please spray gently! Once the defense is broken, I can only do three consecutive rounds of quality (escape)

When I first read this book, I felt that An Neng was abandoned and castrated into the palace.

So do all the protagonist's abilities come from lol? Or, if you don't play lol, it seems confusing...

It's been almost a month. What's going on? Even if you're a eunuch, you can tell me.

It was quite interesting to see what was going on behind the scenes in the beginning, but it was hard to see the void coming out and not being able to control it. I still like to see the protagonist master the void invasion by himself, and the transformed character fights against the void...

Good luck to the author, but I won't send you far away. There will be no incense next year, just mouse tail juice. 🕯️🕯️🕯️

After reading more than 100 chapters in three hours, I would like to express my feelings about this book. Please forgive me if I am wrong. In addition, this review only represents me personally and does not represent other book friends. 1. I like this theme very much. This theme covers Marvel, lol, and villains. But it seems that nothing is implemented thoroughly, but I like the concept of skin very much. If the author wants others to like the book, does it need to have a fascinating point? No matter the point is the theme, the protagonist, the supporting role, or the story. 2. In terms of character creation, I originally thought that the protagonist could summon characters, but after reading it, I found that the indigenous people were chosen to give authorization. It felt uncomfortable at first, because the person who gave the power was not loyal to the protagonist, but later it didn't matter anymore. It was not given to anyone, so it was acceptable. The author has spent a lot of time fleshing out the supporting characters, but so far there hasn't been a character that people can talk about. 3. The three identities of the protagonist. As a student and the identity of the killer, there are relatively few descriptions, and there are basically a few hints. But it doesn't matter. As a reader, you can completely understand it. The key is that the other two identities are lacking in portrayal. So far, I feel like this book is like an ensemble drama, with the protagonist taking up too little of the text! Don't ignore that the protagonist has three identities. Even if you focus on one identity, I always feel that the current protagonist's presence in the article is too thin. Let me just say here that I like the identity of the clown. Ten birds in the forest are worth less than one bird in the hand. Describe it well. After all, he is the protagonist. A book should at least have a likable character. 4. This point is very important! Very important! That's it! Updated! Less! Less, less, less, less! You have put it on the shelves, please update it quickly. Crying.

Author: Have you ever thought that with the increase in superheroes, people will gradually become accustomed to them? And it's too uncomfortable to support the enemy. I would rather see the protagonist create a decent organization than see the template he redeemed and give it to SHIELD for free. This feeling is too disgusting.

QuanDing eunuch, you not only ruined your own character but also made me doubt QuanDing. I might as well watch a pirated version.

Bastard! Why do we need eunuchs? It's clearly written very well! So angry. 🔪🔪🔪🔪

I really hope that the next time the red dot appears is because of an update and not because of the completion notification.

Damn it, next time I read your book, it will be for free.

I came to visit the grave again😆

Fire Tongs Liu Ming~

Two monthly tickets need to be refined, come on, duck

Burning incense and kowtowing, beng beng beng beng, the ceremony is over! Qingming Festival is coming

I'm back again. I think about how many people there were in the comments in the past. It's a pity that now the building is empty, so sad! 😟

Oh haha

I booked all the recommended tickets and gave them to me I want to be fine too 🐶