Saiyan God Rice

I suggest you write urban cool articles, which basically don't require any IQ. Your writing style is wrong, your thinking is not clear, and your logic is messy. Do you not know what the second dimension is? I was so embarrassed that I got cancer after reading this fanfic. Your protagonist has no position and is completely made up based on your own ideas. Good writing is about creating the protagonist. If you do this, it can only be regarded as obscenity at best.

Well, how can I put it this way? It was good in the early stages, but not so good in the later stages. The author seems to have failed to understand one thing, that is, Dragon Ball is a passionate anime, and Le Xue Animation, to put it bluntly, is actually a cool novel in the novel world. People who read Dragon Ball basically read fan fiction with that feeling in mind. And this author's novel really is. The main exciting fighting episodes have been skipped. It says it wants to be original, but there aren't many original fighting scenes.

I've read Chapter 4 now, and overall it's okay, except that the pig's feet inducing Goku to borrow money from Bulma really didn't work. Even if Bulma doesn't mind, there are many ways to get money. Dragon Ball makes a wish, and Goku comes to Earth to ride on the Saiyan flying machine (trade it normally). Wukong and Chichi are both people with martial arts skills. It would be more practical to directly ask Bulma to invest in opening a martial arts gym than to directly ask for money (although they are not very optimistic about Wukong's teaching level). Wukong and Bulma can be said to be childhood sweethearts! Actually, to be honest, if Qiqi had not taken the initiative, if Wukong had not made an engagement with Qiqi in a daze. Maybe Goku and Bulma will get together.

I hope the author will slow down the plot and write more delicately. I just need to write more about the protagonist's growth, such as soul, strength, etc. Otherwise, it won't be very engaging (novel readers must have a sense of immersion before they are interested in reading). Of course, the core of this book is the most important. You want passionate and enjoyable writing...

Anyway, they are all parallel universes. I think it would be good if the protagonist accepts Bulma. Since the protagonist is no longer the top student Gohan, I might as well accept Bulma. If you have money, you won't care about the protagonist's training.

Where is the protagonist now? Which galaxy? How far is it from Namek? Can he contact the Kaioh? Even if it is too far away and the protagonist cannot contact him actively, the Kaioh can find the problem and go to him. The author didn't write it at all. I think it is a loophole. A five-year-old still knows how to find a woman. It's a bit like that.

Give it up, there is no point in going to the universe. I don't know what the meaning of writing this is 🤫🤫

Gohan's potential is really a question mark. When I saw the explosion against Cell, I was fooled. Fighting Buu is also about developing potential. The key is that he didn't practice much. He just kept practicing, so it was okay.

It's really not a big problem to modify other small places But you have to change the settings of the fused human? Change Gogeta to be so weak And create a "Gogeta's fiasco"? Old Birds: Gohan Buu tortured Super 3 Goku, Normal Vegetto tortured Gohan Buu Fusion Man Zamasu was comparable to Super Blue, Normal Vegetto completely tortured Fusion Man Zamasu Theatrical version: Evil Thought Wave tortured Infinite Chi Super 3 Goku, Super One Gogeta used Star Explosion to kill Evil Thought Wave within five seconds of his appearance Yellow Hair Broly beat two Super Blues, and Normal Gogeta was able to briefly compete with Yellow Release Raleigh. Super One Gogeta suppressed Yellow Release Raleigh GT: Super One-Star Dragon defeated two Super Fours, and Super Four Gogeta completely tortured Super One-Star Dragon with one finger No matter which version of the fusion he is, he will always be invincible, but what about this book? : According to the judgment of the previous life, the increase rate is between 6 and 8 times The original work did not say that the increase of 10,000 times has become a single digit for you? Still judging? According to my judgment, Sun Chao is a cloud spectator : Super 2 Goku judged that he could not take a few punches from Cell. Super 2 Gogeta was defeated by Cell, who is also Super 2, in a few minutes Good guy, judging from the performance, I estimate that this increase is not even 6 to 8 times. I believe you said it was Goku who opened the Double Kaio Fist I suggest changing it, a big change. Otherwise, 99% of the original writers will abandon the book.

I just don't understand why the heroine insists on having Bulma and Number 18 in every fan fiction. . . Isn't it okay for a passerby girl? I really can't understand it. . Well

Domestic comments related to Dragon Ball are all smoky. The lower the place, the more messed up it is. Especially those who always say that Dragon Ball Super is rubbish and use their own logic to prove Honkai piracy. It is really ridiculous. Where does the courage come from? It is really an excess of self-awareness. It is Dragon Ball Super that makes Dragon Ball a world-class IP, dedicated to Dragon Ball. The Dragon Ball Studio was also established during the Dragon Ball Super period. The global Dragon Ball official social website was also established during the Dragon Ball Super period. The number of mobile games with an average monthly income of hundreds of millions of yen was also brought about during the Dragon Ball Super animation period. This country always thinks that there are too many guys who have an understanding of aesthetic logic that exceeds that of the vast majority of people in the world 🤭

There is not much difference between the dead and the undead in the Dragon Ball world, except that there is an extra aperture. So the question is, if you take away Son Gohan's body, where is the original Gohan?

Don't you think it's unreasonable for Gohan to find a woman at such a young age, even if he is mentally mature? I wish I could write less about this

The front is good, the back is a bit disappointing

To be honest, Dragon Ball is a world that relies on bloodline. If you have a strong bloodline, you can quickly become stronger by yourself. The growth potential is high. People who don't have enough blood and work hard to practice can't catch up with people who have good blood but don't have the strength to practice. Of course, except for your protagonist's halo, you are the protagonist just like an unbeatable Xiaoqiang. Various undead resurrections, various circumstances and reasons, the strength continues to increase. The qi in Dragon Ball is the power that everyone naturally has when they are strong enough to a certain extent. Why do people on Earth in Dragon Ball use qi in various ways and techniques? Because it is difficult for people on earth to improve their qi when they reach a certain level. They can only continuously develop the use of qi to improve their own strength.

🙄🙄🙄Not good. The previous part was quite exciting, but I couldn't stand it anymore since the beginning of the Battle of the Marquis. I don't know what the protagonist is doing. He keeps being a thug for others. It's boring. Goodbye.

There is a problem, how can you learn the vitality bomb! Only those with pure hearts can learn! This is the first necessary condition! From the description, Gohan should be a cautious person...

People who can't walk when they see women are useless people. It's best to control such people. For example, fights in shopping malls, workplaces, and officialdom are all weaknesses.

I don't know what the author is thinking. Do you feel that being at ease can be learned individually? Or do you think Gohan's talent is just so awesome? Even if you are a person who seizes the body, you can perform it perfectly and realize the ultimate meaning of freedom. What's even more awesome is that you can realize it alone. What's even more awesome is that a cat who is not even a god actually knows the ultimate meaning of freedom. This kind of thing is unknown to Kaiou gods. A cat is more awesome than a Kaioshin. You can also say that this cat has lived longer than a Kaioshin, and has lived longer than a Kaioshin 15 generations ago. This cat is really awesome!

Who writes a book without originality? But there is a problem when you rise to the level of teammates and heroines. Not to mention the 18th, even Lan Fang, Violet and others have a YY impression. For ordinary people, it would be disrespectful to Piccolo and Tianjin fans to force them to catch up with the protagonist. If you accept it, you can choose Universe 6 Caulifla or Super Girl. You can also do Emma if you don't like Saiyans.

It's really off-putting that they are still engaging in planetary political struggles with more than 100,000 combat troops. The idea of ​​destroying the world as soon as they unleash their energy seems like a conspiracy all day long. It doesn't feel like Dragon Ball at all

The characters are all broken. . The characters and the way they speak are so different from the original work that I have no desire to read it.

After reading five chapters carefully, I felt like it was a self-help article. In Chapter 5, it can be seen that the protagonist is not only stupid but also likes to be smart, and the plot progress is also inexplicable. There are many logic bugs. The author pretends to be blind when it comes to bugs that are obvious to readers. His answers are wrong and he has no intention of changing this ostrich-like attitude of burying his head in the sand. I feel a lot cold. Even if you don't read the plot behind this attitude, you can still imagine the quality of the article. Sure enough, after exiting and looking at the comment area, the following plot is even more inexplicable. Gohan's character has completely changed, from a noobhan to a loser. You might as well stay the same. Forget it, let's stop here…

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