My Good Brother from Tomorrow

It is one of the few online articles with flesh and blood. I have read a lot of historical articles from great masters to newbies. There are only two books imprinted in my mind, this one and "Picked Up a Book of the Three Kingdoms". When I close my eyes, I can think of a little fat man climbing a tree waiting for his Grandpa Xiu. Come on, author✊✊✊✊✊

It is very well written, and describes the leadership charisma that Emperor Hongwu dealt with in detail. I came here after reading the pirated version, and am ready to subscribe to the genuine version. A good book must support the genuine version!

Personally, I feel like I'm just guessing. If it's not right and you don't like it, don't complain. 1. In this book, Zhu Yuanzhang's daughter-in-law is Ma Xiuying, and Xiaojiu's daughter-in-law is also named Ma Xiuying. Is this historical? The real Ma Xiuyun has died young? Later, in order for Guo Zixing to tie Zhu Yuanzhang to a chariot, he betrothed Ma Xiuying's personal maid Yue Ya'er to Zhu Yuanzhang? Because in historical photos, Queen Ma's face is relatively large. She looks fatter, so I think of Crescent Moon. Is it better to eat later? Because I'm a queen. 2. The chapter of this book revealed that Yue Yaer made new clothes for Xiao Jiu. Zhu Yuanzhang rushed to wear it. Zhu Yuanzhang once said that in the end, even the dragon robe can be worn by you. However, Xiaojiu refused, but the author has revealed it. Xiaojiu will become emperor in the future. In addition, neither woman is pregnant, so Zhu Yuan and Zhu Yuanzhang may have no heirs. That's why the emperor was given to Xiaojiu, so that it makes sense. If Zhu Yuanzhang had an heir, Xiao Jiu might only be named a hereditary and irreplaceable prince. 3. This book also revealed that Zhu Yuanzhang asked Xiaojiu to kill them on the sickbed. The meaning of this is self-evident, and it must refer to Huaixi Xungui Group. This may also mean Tuogu, or it may mean that Xiaojiu will become the emperor.

Boss, please write well. We will read it carefully and recommend it. You update frequently and rarely, so please do your best for the first book! ! ! Support you! ! ! !

In fact, the author's book is a bit anti-internet historical Internet writing routines. The protagonist gradually becomes stronger and grows up, as well as Huaiyou civilian Zhu Chongba. The concise writing style outlines exquisite characters. This kind of writing can be said to be very sincere in today's Internet writing.

The touching point of this book is that it has flesh and blood and creates a real and cruel world. The protagonist is described as a little person from the beginning, but he is just a little person. It made me feel that he is slowly becoming stronger, and it gave me the ultimate shock in both my heart and my soul.

You can write your story with peace of mind, and we will give you a god-making activity! Full reservation, recommendation, monthly pass etc. Will be reserved for you later...

Come on, I recommend it to you... The brotherly warmth between the lines is something I didn't have time to write about.

Come on, author, you have great potential. Your writing description should be at the upper level for novices, but there are two problems There are too few on the first day (this is very important at the starting point). You can look at the combat power list, which has 20,000 words a day. Second, the reader base is very small. Some chapters say that it is very easy to dissuade new readers. If possible, you'd better find someone to be an operation and assistant. The new book period has passed, and it will be difficult to turn around without lists and publicity. (Because I think it is a story conceived by the author, I generally do not evaluate the content of the book. If it is good, read it, and if it is not good, discard it, so I will not talk about the content of the book.) In addition, no matter what the score is, please persist in writing this book. It may not make you a god with one book, but it can bring you readers who support you. The reason I say so much is because I don't think highly of your book, but I do like you, the author. Of course, if you update 20,000 words a day, I will give it a try 😊 I will add a hall leader for you, the results are really shabby. Come on, author, you have great potential. Looking forward to you becoming a great god.

Yue Ya'er is the only heroine in the novels I've read who has a bad figure and not good looks, but I like her very much. The whole early part of the article is very interesting and the writing is also very good, but the plot of Yue Yaer's assassination is said to be to promote the plot and develop the plot of the capital, which is barely justified, but why did a princess be added? The character of Xiaojiu and the plot of the princess are completely serious, very special and super inconsistent! Finally, the character of Yue Yaer is very good and lovable, so you should make this character more lovable instead of forcing a tragic scene. Life is already very difficult. We read novels just to enjoy ourselves. There is no need to force away these fans who like Yue Yaer.

Zhu Yuanzhang really tried his best to make the people live a better life. Who else but him would dare to peel off the skin of corrupt officials? As for the fact that he did kill heroes in his later years, firstly, it was to eliminate threats to his heirs, and secondly, it also depended on what those heroes had done. Aren't those heroes arrogant and lawless?

Yue Ya can die, but Zhao Min cannot live. Why Yue Ya can die? The tragic ending of a character with strong emotional projection will prompt a huge change in the character. This is a kind of plot thrust. In a reasonable plan, it is possible, and as a reader, I can accept it. But why not Zhao Min? Because once she has Zhao Min, her relationship with Yue Ya is no longer true. Especially in this situation, your wife is almost dead, and you still have an affair with this... Even if you cry like a grandson in the end, I still think you are a grandson. After talking about how to love as much as possible for a long time, in the end the fat girl gave way to Bai Fumei... It was really boring no matter how it developed. Several routes: 1. Yue Ya is not dead. A. But Yue Ya generously persuades the protagonist to accept Zaina~Agree/Disagree. B. Princess Minmin is still rejected by Ku Zhui. 2. Yue Ya is dead. DBoth of them are interested in each other, but they are destined to have no connection (vomit) The above routes are all greasy. There is no way he could be regarded as the same person as this young man who was still a little innocent when he appeared, but now he has grown and changed but still retains his innocence. In this way, the character immediately becomes unlovable. The so-called "truth" of the past is no longer credible. Even if you don't mention the emotional issues, this plot itself is too vulgar, and the elements of classic Jin Yong's martial arts are too dense, seriously conflicting with the historical theme genre. Are you writing a historical article or something else?

Map of the Red Turban Uprising at the end of the Yuan Dynasty

Comments after reading my good brother from the Ming Dynasty! ! ! Real historical figures always move forward with heavy loads. Things in the world are never smooth sailing. Zhu Jiu, a person from later generations, came to the troubled times of the late Yuan Dynasty. He went from fear to confusion, from being alone to having Yue Yaer. If Yue Yaer dies, as Zhu Chongba said, how will Xiao Jiu survive? Readers can't accept it, let alone Xiaojiu. If he dies, Xiao Jiu's personality will change drastically, and he will either become a demon or a saint. Growth comes at a cost. Nineteen-year-old Zhu Jiu is about to experience life and death again.

, My eldest brother's name is Zhu Chongba was also written by him, I guessed it very early. . Because as long as there is something going on, the two numbers will be together 😂😂

You ruined this book. I would rather never have this finale. Whether it is one month, two months, or ten years, I can wait, but you, alas!

What the author handled best was the character design of the pig's feet. A high school student has never seen the real ugliness of society. Although he has heard about it but has not experienced it, he can be a little innocent and a little bit holy. It's not that he's omnipotent and doesn't understand firearms or technology trees. But knowing the general trend, a hot-blooded and middle-aged man can accept that the age of a man is exactly the age for a hot-blooded middle-aged man. Never again after that. The intertwining of fighting for world supremacy and the growth of one's mind is great. The people and things he encounters are helpful to Pig's Foot's growth. Unlike other books, Pig's Knuckle is all-powerful from the beginning and has no room for advancement. The only thing that I think is a little too dramatic and unnatural is the singing, which I feel is a little too dramatic. The author has life experience and the writing is very good, and the characters are full of life. Have certain writing skills. The handling of character relationships, views on things, and the principles of life are all very rich. Writing is not easy, but it is also very fun. If the author is a trumpet, it doesn't matter. If he is a newbie, his talent is very high. It's not easy to make each chapter feel inconsistent. It takes a lot of skill and skill to ensure that the character dialogue is neither abrupt nor inconsistent nor monotonous. I once criticized the author but was criticized by the author. You go ahead. I actually went to school, but the writing was unsightly, and I realized that it is not an easy task. Pig's Foot has a very good character design, so some of the plots in other books would be scolded by readers. In this book, this is not only due to the character design at the beginning but also to the author's solid writing foundation and writing style. Writing style is a very confusing thing to say, but it does exist. The only bad thing is the update problem. I have been cheated many times, so I don't finish the book and don't subscribe. These are fucking tears! There should be many readers who have the same sentiments as me. Some authors are very talented and imaginative, but they end up in trouble as soon as they write, which is very annoying. Writing is very brain-consuming, boring and very interesting. What the author describes is a story. A story with pig's feet as the first point of view. This story is a world. The author's setting is the cornerstone of this world, and the background characters and plots are the flesh and blood of this world. And pig's feet are generally the readers' introduction, which requires characteristics. There must be something different about the pig's trotters that can be distinguished and better introduced, but looking at the whole world from the first perspective of the pig's trotters will bring about the characteristics of the pig's trotters, which will be a bit biased or out of shape. This requires a detached or secondary perspective to create a leaflet to narrate some alternative views or witness the transition of some plots. Some authors will use a lot of it and some won't, but I feel that this story should need this perspective to dilute some of the plot. If Zhu Yuanzhang's perspective can be mastered, it will add a lot of color to the story. I originally wanted to write my thoughts on this book but ended up going off topic a lot, so I deleted all the rest of it. Maybe it's an old habit coming back. If you don't like this personal opinion, don't criticize it. I am a bully and don't like others to raise my bar. I only like to raise others'.

I really don't know why I wrote about Yue Ya being assassinated and entering Yuandu to save people. This plot feels out of place and embarrassing in this kind of historical text.

Selfish people like Zhu Yuanzhang would ignore their own safety and save others. If they think too much, just look at how Zhu Yuanzhang unified the world and killed a large number of heroes. We can only endure hardship together, but cannot be rich together. The protagonist should be allowed to stay and run away first.

The Yuan Army's siege equipment (1)

Sigh😔😅😅I don't know what to say. Can the author cancel me as the operating officer?

We don't know what to say either.

After reading Chapter 10, why can't I see the main character's purpose? Just a small follower, all the limelight belongs to Zhu Yuanzhang, the protagonist has not shown any outstanding qualities, he is just a cuckold. Although Taizu is indeed awesome, what use do you need? It's okay to help out. Just open your mouth and say a few words to relieve Taizu's boredom?

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Why write Lao Zhu to death? The protagonist can die but Lao Zhu cannot!