Entering the Dream of All Heavens and Worlds

The first eleven chapters are pretty well written, but then things get messed up. There are too many situations where the protagonist appears and organizes opponents as soon as he has the ability. It is too old. It is also poisonous to have superpowers in this world. The key is that there are too many such routines. Write about other worlds where the protagonist enters the dream light, add some life of the protagonist in this world in the middle, and explain how it came about or the ending of the ability to enter the dream. In this way, the protagonist's idle life in the real world will not collapse, and he can do whatever he wants in the dream world. If he gets screwed in the dream world, he can marry another one. The advantage is that the book cannot collapse even if the main character collapses when he enters the dream. This kind of novel about traveling through the heavens that does not leave the world where the protagonist was born is always poisonous when it appears in this world. The master will say otherwise. Come on, author(ง •̀_•́)ง

Write less about reality. If your copy is 8 points out of 10, then what you write about reality is almost minus five points. If you write more, you can become a eunuch (;｀O´)o

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I have always wondered whether the author and the reader are people from two different worlds. When writing a novel, you should at least avoid the poisonous points, but every author must write down the poisonous points in order to have a long memory. I'm just curious, shouldn't I read other novels of the same genre before writing a genre novel? Take the essence and discard the dross, and then look at the comments section to note down any bad points to prevent yourself from making mistakes. Is it difficult? Some minor poisonous points can be ignored, but some authors are able to write extremely retarded and disgusting plots. Then I lost a large number of readers and ended it hastily... I was really speechless.

I saw that the slime came back and shared the same body with the protagonist, and could not control his own body. Furthermore, he forcibly lowered the protagonist's level. He could have been at level 5 or 6, but he still didn't become stronger when he came back. This was forced suppression, and it was completely written in a Japanese comic style. Not used to it.

The mode is too old-fashioned. This genre is actually good, but the author is stuck in one mode and can't get out of it. Becoming a god in a dream can only bring back a small amount of energy and restrict the protagonist over and over again. I have already guessed the ending of the new one. . .

The most important thing about these dream books is knowledge, only truth is eternal

When the main world is changed to the ordinary world, there are more people. Either the main world at the beginning is an extraordinary world, just like the earth has nuclear weapons.

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