Nightmare in the Steam Age

The writing is ridiculously poor, and the word "Sean" appears a dozen times. Sean couldn't stop listening to the book. Very poor experience

I feel like the plot jumps a bit between chapters, but overall it's very interesting

Damn it, old eunuch, this is (ー_ー)!!

The book is good, but it's too fast, lacks detailed descriptions, and the content is concise and to the point.

It's pretty good. Let's talk about why I feel like I'm in a math class. This chapter is actually incoherent with the next. Each chapter feels like the plot has started over again after a few days, and it's always fast forwarding.

The front is good, but the plot of the new world is a bit familiar, with a trashy start, pretense and slap in the face, meeting nobles on the road, and arriving at the port. Next, is it necessary to enter the academy, get to know the nobles in remote places, and then open up trade routes and take charge of the trade routes of the north and south nobles?

Damn it, the old eunuch with ten books, this book has so many words, it is considered extraordinary.

Control your rhythm. Where are you going so fast →_→? At a normal speed of eighty yards, you are already almost three hundred. Slow down and write slowly, and write well. It's just that the pace is too fast. Take your time and write it, it will definitely be a masterpiece.

The front is pretty good, but the back is hard to describe.

Good books have been sprayed away

After reading more than 30 chapters, the main book is just a running account, and I just skimmed through several chapters. The rhythm is really bad. Sean appears too much, and it feels like I am just trying to make up the word count. I hope the author can improve it

Personally, I think this book is good. If the author has time, he can write it slowly. Since he has always been a eunuch, he might as well choose a book with some potential and continue writing.

I could still watch it before going to the new world, but suddenly going to the new world was a bit silly. It's not like I couldn't survive in the previous world And the original world didn't know whether it was because I watched it late or something, the various plots suddenly turned And the other supporting characters were a bit silly, and they conflicted for the sake of conflict

I think it's very good. I'm a long-time reader. It's not easy to come across such a book. Why haven't you updated it?

There are only ten Seans on the first page, and there are endless Seans.

My mind is full of Sean🤐🤐