The Cauldron Breaks the Sky

The writing is fairly fluent, but transitions are not handled well in many places. It seems to be a cool article, but the excitement is not strong enough. The plot lacks twists and turns, and it is not completely within the readers' expectations. This kind of article is not attractive enough to readers, and it is still a very traditional fantasy-upgraded cool article. There are no eye-catching settings and no novel ideas. I am afraid it will not be popular in the cool article market. In addition, many dialogues seem to have forgotten to add quotation marks. And the mark of imitation is very obvious. I must have just written online articles not long ago. If I guess correctly, the imitation should be "Fights Break the Sphere". Since it is imitating potatoes, let's talk about potatoes. Tudou's fighting scene is very interesting. It is based on a template. It is not obvious when writing the fight, but it becomes more obvious later on. Although this routine is criticized by old bookworms, it is of great reference for newcomers. Tudou writes a fighting scene. At the beginning, the opponent is very strong and the protagonist seems to be unable to defeat him. At this time, the enemies on the opposite side are ridiculing and looking down on him, and his teammates are all hopeless and persuade him to give up. Then the battle begins, the protagonist is in a weak position, the opponent's taunts are even more severe, the opponent is even more contemptuous, and the friend is more worried. Then the protagonist uses a trump card, which suddenly changes the situation. Everyone can't believe it, and they are all surprised. Then, the opponent releases stronger moves, and the protagonist cannot hold on anymore. Then he is worried about himself, and the opponent is ridiculed. Then when the protagonist is about to die, everyone thinks that the outcome is determined, and the opponent has begun to cynicize, the protagonist suddenly shows another trump card, completely defeats the opponent, slaps him in the face again, and then the opponent's all kinds of unbelievable and unacceptable, teammates are overjoyed. By the way, don't have too many twists and turns, as too many twists and turns will annoy readers. In this way, one battle, three turns, two slaps in the face, twists and turns and a sense of satisfaction are all coming, and the battle you wrote seems a bit too bland. Then there are some details that can be used to slap someone in the face. For example, in Chapter 40, when the protagonist goes on stage to test his cultivation, don't directly write about how others are amazed by the protagonist's power. You should write about outsiders first because they have never seen the protagonist before. The protagonist is not a powerful person. He is plainly dressed, unattractive in appearance, young, and has a dull aura. The protagonist looks down on and despises the protagonist for various reasons. Then the protagonist shows strong cultivation, slaps everyone in the face, shocks everyone, and immediately changes his mind. Only in this way can you feel like you are being slapped in the face. One more point, when writing a cool article, you can try writing like this. The protagonist is looked down upon first, and then one person comes to provoke him. After being slapped in the face by the protagonist, you can let the protagonist or others say it was a fluke or some other reason, so that other people think that the protagonist is still nothing more than this. Because this time it was just an accident, including the person who was slapped in the face before, this way the plot of the slap in the face can be added. The person who was slapped in the face will be slapped in the face again just to vent his anger, and a few other people who still look down on the protagonist can be slapped in the face. In this way, the plot will also be enriched. The last advice I would give you is to practice, practice hard, write more and read more, write more and read more, the feeling will come slowly, and you will gradually have your own style, your own completely independent novel world and novel plot. I have to say that the seemingly zero threshold for online writing has deceived many people, thinking that writing online articles is easy. Indeed, anyone can write online articles, but it is impossible to succeed without working hard. I also worked hard for four years before I dared to publish a book, but even so, I will still hit a wall. I hope I can work hard. Finally, I don't write cool articles, nor have I done in-depth research on cool articles. My opinions are only of reference value. Please consider them carefully before deciding whether to adopt them.

Thinking that I have left a mark here, and I can come back and stamp my card when nothing happens, it is worth persevering with a purpose. I am very happy to see that the author has not stopped updating! The more I write, the better. Just knock me out, a person who dares not even move a pen.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

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This book is beautiful, the story is exciting, and the characters are vivid. Come on!

I read the first three chapters, and the overall layout is quite good, but some details are not well controlled. There are many novels of the same genre like the one you wrote. If you want to stand out, you must write the details well. I haven't read the rest, so I won't make any comments. (Already collected, keep going.)

After reading two chapters, although the writing still needs practice, it is still worth encouraging to persist in writing it down. Come on!