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It's really poisonous... No matter how awkward your personality is, you have been a human being for two lifetimes. You were eaten by a dog in your last life, right? Don't you know what the background and influence in your family are? Don't you know how to borrow it? Even though he is bullied to the point of being bullied, he still tolerates it The protagonist's character is also awkward and acceptable.

What I wrote in the front is quite good, I don't know if I can keep it in the back, so keep writing.

Why do the Xu family's mother and daughter have to come back with pig's feet, and are they still playing tricks? The pig's trotters were taken away from his biological mother, and it's not like his biological mother abused him. If a pig's trotters were really kept by the Xu family based on a few words, that would really be a look-down. Isn't your biological mother raising you for 10 years worth a few words from someone else? I have only been in contact with the Xu family for one year before time travel, so my memory is full, right?

I have read eighty or ninety chapters, and I do feel that there is something wrong with the protagonist's character. He lived for more than 20 years before his rebirth, and he was sixteen years old after his rebirth. Why does he still feel that he does not understand the world at all? This cannot be explained by his withdrawn personality.

The heroine, please give me Taeyeon, 🥺

It makes me so angry that I want to vomit blood

My virtuous 🌹

I endured the poison and read Chapter 60, but I really couldn't stand it any more. It's just a garbage novel, a super poisonous novel!

There is something wrong with the character creation. In addition, in the twenty years before his rebirth, his mental age was close to forty, and he was still so childish, paranoid and cold-blooded.

It's very strange that the background has three stars and the idol goes up to slap him in the face without mercy. I don't understand it →_→ If you want the protagonist to become mature, you don't have to deliver the poison yourself, right? Good writing is an advantage

There are many poisonous points. The biggest poisonous point is the protagonist himself. The protagonist himself is very entangled. The plot design is also very strange. He has a powerful background for the protagonist, but he feels that no one looks down on him. He and Seohyun are siblings. The hugging photos were posted online. Not to mention whether d agency dared to post it because of this background. Even if it was posted, it would not cause a black sea. Can you clarify that you have the same father and mother? All celebrities must be smart and ridiculed. If you look at hy, if it is sadomasochism in the relationship stage, it can be said to be sadomasochism. There are indeed good writings, but you haven't started anything yet, and the protagonist insists on having a black sea experience. It's no wonder that with so many words, the score is still the same.

I don't know what the author wants to do. Is it to screen readers? 1. The protagonist is portrayed as a pretentious monster, a white-eyed wolf, the biological mother who has raised you for more than 10 years. It took more than 100 chapters to even call him mom. The previous article said that he is a substitute. He knows how to call mom when he has been wronged. 2. The protagonist's background is backed by CJ, and his biological mother is also powerful. It was also revealed in the previous article that the protagonist has a relationship with the sx eldest princess. Will there be so many fools who will hit the gun and die, forcibly creating conflicts? This is what I thought after reading Chapter 105. Sorry, I can only go so far.

Happy birthday, Xiaoluyun❤️❤️❤️

Can the heroine Yoona make some arrangements?

I couldn't stand the part after I returned to Korea, so I wanted to ask the author. It's understandable that my writing skills were not good for the first time. However, the plot jumped a bit. I'll summarize the shortcomings in the comment section based on what I've read. Author, if you want to write a Korean entertainment book, read it, and stop reading after finishing this one. The protagonist was an orphan in his previous life, but even after 10 years in the past, he still has a deep relationship with his biological mother. This is completely invisible. The Korean drama about Huang Meiying pouring coffee cannot be written. Normal people would not pour coffee on their friends. Korean dramas only pour coffee on villains. I only found out about Li Fuzhen through the QQ browser news push. That was when Li Fuzhen's divorce was a big deal. Anyone who pays attention to South Korea should know that the influence of the Li family in South Korea is well known. Looking at the comments, the author may not have made good use of Li Fuzhen, but it can be adjusted in the later chapters. The author seems to want the protagonist to join the entertainment industry, but the setting is not good. The matter of sending songs can be big or small. If it is small, it means that the protagonist is trying to establish a relationship, but if it is big, it means that he has not made any money or accumulated capital. The thing about military service is that the timing is wrong. The protagonist ends up early. It is better to go to college and go back to Korea to serve in the military after being a sophomore in high school in the United States. Moreover, an American college degree is much better than a high school degree. The author, you can write about going to college at the age of 16. In reality, a 17-year-old skater goes to Stanford University, and the protagonist can also go to college at the age of 16. It was too early to go to South Korea in 2009, and it would be useless to go there during the Black Sea period, but I could contact Huang Meiying by phone. Since I don't dare to watch it later, I won't comment too much. It's understandable for fans to write for the first time, but please don't be blind-hearted. After all, there are entertainment opportunities every day, and your heart has been trained earlier than the average person. If you criticize the plot too much, you can finish it and start a new book immediately. This book will be used as a practice. You, the author, will always write a fanfic that meets your own and everyone's expectations. Finally, discussion is welcome. Book reviews can be deleted, but criticism is not welcome.

Wouldn't the author include the Zheng sisters in this book? They are all Americans after all. I hope they will be adopted.

Happy birthday!!!!!!!🌹🌹🌹

Author, did you cut yourself off and you're still a woman? The whole story is bloody. Mary Sue, you should go to Korea and become a screenwriter.

I want to have more Jessica as the heroine😃

If the author has time in the future, it would be best to revise the plot of the time when the male protagonist returned to South Korea to serve in the military, especially the words and deeds of 1 and 4. I have read a book by Xiaoxian's younger brother before. That book was about orthopedics. It was very exciting, but it was a pity that he entered the palace. If this book was also about orthopedics, it would seem very exciting. At most, it would just be a plot twist and make it irrelevant... However, the above is just a suggestion, and the author is free to do so.

I feel that the author's portrayal of the protagonist is not very good. He is indecisive, has a bad personality and lacks quality.

I have read more than 30 chapters and there are too many bugs. The protagonist's age is wrong several times. One time, he is two years younger than Seohyun, and another time, he is two years younger than Yoona. Seohyun was already four years old when the protagonist came to the house and he has no memory. There are no formalities and no documents. The protagonist's mother can directly take the protagonist to the United States. Even human traffickers are not that easy. It is a bit weird to use Korean customs when talking to American Stepney in the United States.

The character of the male protagonist is that of a white-eyed wolf. His character is so unpleasant. Did you, the author, say you don't read comments when you write? So many comments are saying that you haven't changed. Are you kidding yourself?

With such a background, why not do anything else but to squeeze into a crappy place to sing? Since the development there is not good in Bangzi, it is okay to go to North America. With a biological mother with such a background and such a talented person, you can go to North America to be a singer. Actors or other things do not have to be good in Bangzi. And why do you think you will be popular just by singing a song about a man after 10 years of debut? If you try Gangnam style, it's better than this. No matter how bad it is, you have to set up a personal setting. There is no representation, no innovation, no operation, and you deserve to be blackmailed. It's just pure abuse.

Didn't you say you don't know how to be a eunuch? It's been almost a year.

The author is just writing nonsense (not trolling, objective description)

Although it is a novel, I still wrote songs when I was five or six years old and told people about it. It's really outrageous.

It's almost done, ready to start, it's said to be multiple female leads, whether there's Seohyun or not, everything else doesn't matter

Why can I only see more than 380 chapters

This is the first time I want to scold the author.