Fairy King of Elves

The subject matter of this book is quite novel, but the description of the battle is not very good and very bland. Moreover, the advantages of being the chosen one were not reflected. The most important thing is that the subsequent plot is completely inconsistent with the setting of the opening chapter. How dare a family dare to steal elves? Where did your Poke Ball lock go? The logic is just confusing. As long as the author reads it several times after writing it, he will not end up like this.

It's been a long time since I've written a travel article. Reading campus articles makes me want to vomit. The current Pokémon fandom feels like they have no soul. The current campus articles are simply produced from the assembly line in a factory. They are all the same.

Forget it if there are 33 gyms in a province, after all, there are only a few! But asking for 100 badges is too much. How can there be so many officially, let alone being divided into several competition regions.

I probably know why there are so few comments. I read this book completely and found that there is very little about the growth of elves. Most of them are about travel and battles. This is not a very popular subject in the first place. If you want to write about elves, learn from the garden tree. There are many people who can foresee the future. People who can see the future are already very poisonous. Investing in them has also become a poisonous point. I think this book may have collapsed.

It feels like the protagonist is in a hurry, as if he was reincarnated. He treats the elves as if he is playing a game. He is either challenging the gym or on the road. Training the elves is just like Xiaozhi. He will not train until he loses. Also, he is like a tool man or a puppet.

Having traveled through time and having no memory is the most disgusting thing. How can you cultivate good elves even if you don't understand the basics? If you can become a king without knowing anything, then are all the books you read in vain?

It was really overwhelming to read dozens of chapters at the beginning. First of all, the proliferation of badge gyms caused the main plot to revolve around gym battles, but the gym battles were not interesting anyway. There were still more than a dozen gyms to fight in the future. Then, it was clearly about travel, but it was written in a hurry. Basically, every place would be over after adding a gym battle in a few chapters. Then there was the prosecutor general who abused his power as a protective umbrella and was moved by himself. Alliance officials were casually killed by the families below. Although it was clearly written about travel, it was all over. There is no sense of adventure travel at all, and there is very little part about cultivating elves and shaping elves. After all, the gym is also a subordinate institution of the alliance. There must be regular inspections or anonymous inspections by other public officials. Things like the gym are even related to educational rights. The higher-ups must attach great importance to it. How could it be messed up like this? Because there are elves in this world, it is easy to verify with the help of the power of elves. Moreover, there is a mature political group. How can such a mess happen down there?

Let's take a brief look at it. It focuses on fighting and challenging gyms, but it doesn't describe combat scenes. It's not turn-based, but winning is turn-based. It's boring. The protagonist's spirit doesn't know how to dodge at all. If you hit me, I'll hit you. If you have dodge skills, just dodge if you don't, and if you don't, you'll resist. Instead, you'll dodge in various ways. In the end, you can win with the protagonist's aura of one skill. Then there are all kinds of settings that eat up and destroy settings.

There is something wrong with the setting of the elf props. Whether it is based on the elf world or the game world, the price of your elf props is wrong.

In fact, the author is really strong. Even though he has few fans, he still insists on updating.

It's okay that the plot is bland. The various settings in the early stages seemed to be a complete alliance system, but as soon as they were set up, they started to mess with the settings. An ordinary gym owner snatched the trainer Pokémon, and a family killed people and snatched Pokémon wantonly. Where was the information on the Pokémon balls that was promised? If you steal it, you still have to put it in the ball. Doesn't putting it in the ball mean you are openly robbing it?

Larulas is not cute at all, he is so precocious that it's scary. The trainer's shout almost made me think it was the boss of 996 calling his employees.

Come on, finish one book and maybe the next one will become popular once you gain experience.

The male protagonist is predicted into the future by the super-powerful president. It feels like a kind of manipulation of the male protagonist's life. I personally don't like the obvious way of writing that the protagonist is manipulated.

Why, the elf battle scenes are so rubbish!

This elf battle scene is so described that I have no desire to watch it.

There are basically no battle details. Challenging the gym is just like playing a game. It feels very boring. After reading more than 30 chapters, it's basically just fighting the gym. It's like chewing wax. I really can't read anymore.

With 600,000 words and more than 2,000 fans, this cannot be the reader's problem. The author should at least read this book back. It must be your own problem.

Wujiang~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

It feels like looking at a set of settings 🙂

I like to use xxxx in battle too much. There are too many bar characters. It looks uncomfortable. Discharge, meditate, fantasy light... I wish I could add bar characters to every skill.

The previous setting is inexplicable, and the description of the battle is worse than no description at all. There is also something that appears in the front and is gone when you turn around. So why did you write about it? In terms of usage, it is the same as the setting set. Negative review, super double

Isn't it strange that the cultivation house is on the roof of the building? If you are not short of money, why not live in a villa garden and have a big yard?

Is there a female protagonist? I hope there is a heroine Nazi

Xerneas and Cang Xiang looked at the fairy energy in the air and thought, "It turns out that I have lived for so long, and now I realize that I have no attributes."

Ah? Is this a eunuch? How do you explain that there is still a charge?

Is the author reading it? There are some settings in your novel that I want to use. How can I tell you the intention?