Civilization Observation Report

I've read Chapter 47 so far and can't stand it for the moment. Leave some comments and suggestions, I hope it will be helpful to the author's subsequent writing. First of all, the subject matter. I was attracted by the title of the book. It doesn't matter whether the topic is good or bad, but the subject matter of this book is difficult and wide-ranging, so I was attracted to it. But the side effect is that expectations are too high, and readers will treat this book with stricter requirements. You can read comedy novels without thinking, but the themes of science fiction and civilization will naturally inspire readers to think. If the content written by the author cannot withstand careful thinking, then this book is a death sentence. This is why science fiction is difficult to write about. It requires readers who like to think, but writers with insufficient skills are afraid of readers thinking seriously. In the modern world, no one is a general genius, most people are T-shaped talents. Once the author makes a mistake in a non-professional field, it will be quickly pointed out and posted in a paragraph review, causing the evaluation of other readers to be lowered. The smart approach is to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, be detailed and do not force yourself to write about areas you don't understand. A writer, especially a science fiction writer, once it is revealed that he does not understand what he writes, the consequences will be fatal. Because of this, the author has given a suspended death sentence in my personal mind. This has little to do with the author's own level, but is my personal reason. Because I liked science fiction since I was a child, but after I graduated from the physics department, I rarely read science fiction novels. Science fiction, science-based fantasy. Most authors who write science fiction these days don't even know what science is. Let's go back to this book. Except for the subject matter, I like it very much. The first impression was also very good. In the first chapter, the description of the nuclear apocalypse wasteland is relatively reasonable. The sense of life and immersion are quite sufficient. The lack of a twist in the plot is a minor flaw, but science fiction is about a logical progression, so forcing a conflict twist is not good. Personal rating is 9 points. The second chapter, Water World, the overall atmosphere is well created, with a relaxing feeling of a pastoral vacation. The only flaw is about the cause of planetary storms. What the hell is the rotation angle close to 90 degrees? No matter which direction you interpret it, this week either the climate is stable and there are no four seasons, or the day and night cycle is close to the revolution cycle. This little flaw interrupted my immersion. Start looking at other seemingly obvious things the author describes. But the second chapter itself doesn't cover much, so I can give it an 8 overall. But the third chapter is a bit miserable. The description of space battles is like talking about the game CG by looking at the pictures. Lack of understanding of the basic structure of Dyson spheres and the order of magnitude of required materials. Imagine the future social form without sufficient understanding of the operation of modern social institutions. Chapter 3 gave me the feeling that the author of this book lacks scientific literacy and lacks imagination. It is in stark contrast to the good experience I had in the previous two chapters. The overall experience is like going to eat, the first and second dishes are cooked by second-level chefs respectively. The third dish was the Wallace's last-minute special set meal bought next door. For the third chapter alone, I can only give 5 points based on the overall level of the starting point. The appearance of a middle-aged man. The review is over. If you don't give some suggestions, it's just a simple troll. It's not a book review. The following are suggestions: 1. Make use of strengths and avoid weaknesses, and pay attention to topic selection. Don't force yourself into territory you don't understand. 2. If you want to try to describe a new field, you must prepare in advance. You can refer to the storytelling methods of some professional ups in the video field. Find references in advance. 3. No author is an all-rounder, but novel readers are likely to have talents in all fields, so bragging in the air is worse than pretending to be an expert without saying anything. Try not to write about the parts you don't understand. If you must write, just write it down, or patch the settings in advance. After all, the author has the final say on the content of the book, and readers can only choose whether to read it or not. 4. Internet article authors should provide what readers want to see. Excellent authors will satisfy readers while providing content that exceeds expectations. Bad writers write something from their imagination and expect readers to accept it. 5. Stay humble and keep learning. , as an example, provide some specific improvement suggestions for Chapter 3. Dyson Sphere, due to its structure and required amount of material, is theoretically impossible to be realized by a civilization that requires Dyson Sphere energy. Can be changed to a continuously constructed Dyson Cloud. Being based on a large space station will not disrupt the existing plot line. Moreover, the energy produced by the Dyson sphere can theoretically turn all planets into lava planets within an hour. There is no plot conflict like fighting for energy quotas. After changing to a Dyson cloud, the material of the two planets created an incomplete Dyson cloud with limited energy output, and the reason for competing for energy became reasonable. At the same time, energy dispatch stations should not exist in theory. For photovoltaic power generation in space, the power transmission medium is almost impossible to pass through matter. It is more likely to be directional microwaves. It may not even require a power generation board. It directly emits lenses to change the light path. The power generation process is performed by low-Earth orbit photovoltaic power stations in the power-consuming area. So, if I were to write the plot of Chapter 3. Probably from the perspective of material limitations. The sun has infinite energy, why fight for it? GENERATION EQUIPMENT LIMITED. Industrial production, why is the equipment limited? The total amount of matter is limited. Eight billion people piled up can only make up a sphere of less than 1 cubic kilometer. Why is there insufficient material? Because there are many people. There are 800 billion people crammed into a star system. So the story line was formed. The population is exploding and materials are limited. If you develop outward, you cannot fly out of the star. You can only explore the virtual world inward. Keeping virtual worlds running requires a lot of electricity. There are good reasons to grab power. Both sides of the war do not have to be human beings. It can be the maintenance AI of each party group. Can be a 'player' in the virtual world. The ending can be good, with all parties reaching a settlement. Anyway, because of the existence of the virtual world, the population can be controlled immediately. The ending can be bad, the war will get out of control, and we will be destroyed together. It can be hope in despair, war destroyed large populations and virtual worlds. But some people survived. It can be despair in hope. Human beings in the virtual world have not stopped moving forward. The interstellar spacecraft has completed the theoretical verification, but the necessary materials have fallen into the sun in the previous war.

First of all, the first few chapters are really idiotic. The protagonist's own civilization is very technological. Normal people don't need to be trained to know common sense. First, they observe the planet's data in the outer space of the planet. If they need to enter the planet for inspection, they can send small detectors to collect data and information on the spot, secretly invade the alien civilization network, and other high-tech means to understand the social structure of opposite-sex civilizations and assess the degree of danger. Basically, the protagonist does not need to personally explore. The author's writing is very naive and does not reflect the advantages of the protagonist's own advanced civilization. It is estimated that many people will abandon the book in the third golden chapter.

It has nothing to do with human beings' bad nature. Death is the normal state of the universe. Life is a miracle, and the same is true for civilization. No matter how advanced the development is, continuing life is always creating miracles. As long as it is either continuation or death, regardless of whether there is bad nature, civilization is on the road of one step to heaven and one to hell. Therefore, no matter whether it is high-level or low-level, every civilization is great. Even if it eventually goes to destruction, it is still worthy of respect.

I thought it was a perspective like the Creator from the sky, but it turned out to be a field trip to the animal world.

Comrade, believe in the possibility and courage of human beings. Our ancestors were already transformed from animals to humans when they could pick up the flames feared by all creatures tens of millions of years ago. Even if there are still leaders with narrow vision in the future history, I am willing to believe that the stars will eventually become no longer out of reach due to human courage and curiosity.

[Book Title] Civilization Observation Report [Author] Han Family Fengzhu [Work Status] Serialized [Recommendation Index] 4 stars [Brief Review] The protagonist Mo Yu became a civilization observer and went to other civilizations to investigate simple information. As written in Liu Cixin's short science fiction novel "Poetry Cloud", advanced civilizations have exhausted the energy of the solar system and listed all the poems, but they are unable to retrieve outstanding poems from the collection. The detection center can capture every observable planet in the universe, but the civilizations that exist on it are different, and civilization observers need to go there in person. During his first internship mission, he came to a beautiful planet, but before he could recover, the war started. On the planet with only the last continent left, crazy humans triggered a nuclear explosion again, and Mo Yu and the survivors began a journey of survival. Although the world after the nuclear explosion is filled with despair, there is still a light of hope for mankind. Mo Yu accompanied them through the nuclear winter. The sun's rays shone on the earth again, and Mo Yu left quietly. Every civilization that the mission goes to, there are always people who are reluctant to leave. There is a special indicator in the institute - population quota, which can recruit them into their own civilization, but Mo Yu chose to forget each other in the world... #New Book Trial Reading#

The differences between different civilizations are smaller than the differences between high school and college. Alien cars also burn gas, right? When you meet a colleague, you actually call him "senpai"? Does the other person still feel that he is being called old? This set of oriental etiquette, let alone advanced alien civilizations, would not work in any other country on earth. The author's imagination is too limited. Barren.

Generally speaking, this book has various detailed descriptions, which can also trigger emotional resonance. The writing level is becoming more and more mature, and it is in line with my simple psychological expectations. However, the shortcomings of this book are also obvious. The first point is that there are too few races, and currently there are only humans. The second is that the descriptions are not out of the starry sky for the time being, and it also prevents you from feeling the magnificence and fantasy of the universe. To be honest, I was simply attracted by the title, but in fact it is completely different from what I thought. I thought it was interstellar science fiction, but it turned out that you just used a theme. The third is that it is routine, there is no Patient readers can start reading from the end of each mission. There are only a few chapters that are attractive. It is not that the technique is not good but that the content is too simple and easy to guess, and there is no interest in reading. In other words, it only becomes interesting when the protagonist returns to the main civilization. It is like science fiction. That kind of attraction is indeed more interesting than observing other planets. Or you can try to write about a world similar to cyberpunk, or other worlds with higher science fiction elements. The above are all personal opinions.

Are you interested in making a side story? It would be a report written by the protagonist. It can be used as the end of a volume.

Except for the system, the level is almost perfect. The only regret is that the protagonist cannot tell them what he knows.