Civilization Observation Report

It has nothing to do with human beings' bad nature. Death is the normal state of the universe. Life is a miracle, and the same is true for civilization. No matter how advanced the development is, continuing life is always creating miracles. As long as it is either continuation or death, regardless of whether there is bad nature, civilization is on the road of one step to heaven and one to hell. Therefore, no matter whether it is high-level or low-level, every civilization is great. Even if it eventually goes to destruction, it is still worthy of respect.

Generally speaking, this book has various detailed descriptions, which can also trigger emotional resonance. The writing level is becoming more and more mature, and it is in line with my simple psychological expectations. However, the shortcomings of this book are also obvious. The first point is that there are too few races, and currently there are only humans. The second is that the descriptions are not out of the starry sky for the time being, and it also prevents you from feeling the magnificence and fantasy of the universe. To be honest, I was simply attracted by the title, but in fact it is completely different from what I thought. I thought it was interstellar science fiction, but it turned out that you just used a theme. The third is that it is routine, there is no Patient readers can start reading from the end of each mission. There are only a few chapters that are attractive. It is not that the technique is not good but that the content is too simple and easy to guess, and there is no interest in reading. In other words, it only becomes interesting when the protagonist returns to the main civilization. It is like science fiction. That kind of attraction is indeed more interesting than observing other planets. Or you can try to write about a world similar to cyberpunk, or other worlds with higher science fiction elements. The above are all personal opinions.

I've read Chapter 47 so far and can't stand it for the moment. Leave some comments and suggestions, I hope it will be helpful to the author's subsequent writing. First of all, the subject matter. I was attracted by the title of the book. It doesn't matter whether the topic is good or bad, but the subject matter of this book is difficult and wide-ranging, so I was attracted to it. But the side effect is that expectations are too high, and readers will treat this book with stricter requirements. You can read comedy novels without thinking, but the themes of science fiction and civilization will naturally inspire readers to think. If the content written by the author cannot withstand careful thinking, then this book is a death sentence. This is why science fiction is difficult to write about. It requires readers who like to think, but writers with insufficient skills are afraid of readers thinking seriously. In the modern world, no one is a general genius, most people are T-shaped talents. Once the author makes a mistake in a non-professional field, it will be quickly pointed out and posted in a paragraph review, causing the evaluation of other readers to be lowered. The smart approach is to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, be detailed and do not force yourself to write about areas you don't understand. A writer, especially a science fiction writer, once it is revealed that he does not understand what he writes, the consequences will be fatal. Because of this, the author has given a suspended death sentence in my personal mind. This has little to do with the author's own level, but is my personal reason. Because I liked science fiction since I was a child, but after I graduated from the physics department, I rarely read science fiction novels. Science fiction, science-based fantasy. Most authors who write science fiction these days don't even know what science is. Let's go back to this book. Except for the subject matter, I like it very much. The first impression was also very good. In the first chapter, the description of the nuclear apocalypse wasteland is relatively reasonable. The sense of life and immersion are quite sufficient. The lack of a twist in the plot is a minor flaw, but science fiction is about a logical progression, so forcing a conflict twist is not good. Personal rating is 9 points. The second chapter, Water World, the overall atmosphere is well created, with a relaxing feeling of a pastoral vacation. The only flaw is about the cause of planetary storms. What the hell is the rotation angle close to 90 degrees? No matter which direction you interpret it, this week either the climate is stable and there are no four seasons, or the day and night cycle is close to the revolution cycle. This little flaw interrupted my immersion. Start looking at other seemingly obvious things the author describes. But the second chapter itself doesn't cover much, so I can give it an 8 overall. But the third chapter is a bit miserable. The description of space battles is like talking about the game CG by looking at the pictures. Lack of understanding of the basic structure of Dyson spheres and the order of magnitude of required materials. Imagine the future social form without sufficient understanding of the operation of modern social institutions. Chapter 3 gave me the feeling that the author of this book lacks scientific literacy and lacks imagination. It is in stark contrast to the good experience I had in the previous two chapters. The overall experience is like going to eat, the first and second dishes are cooked by second-level chefs respectively. The third dish was the Wallace's last-minute special set meal bought next door. For the third chapter alone, I can only give 5 points based on the overall level of the starting point. The appearance of a middle-aged man. The review is over. If you don't give some suggestions, it's just a simple troll. It's not a book review. The following are suggestions: 1. Make use of strengths and avoid weaknesses, and pay attention to topic selection. Don't force yourself into territory you don't understand. 2. If you want to try to describe a new field, you must prepare in advance. You can refer to the storytelling methods of some professional ups in the video field. Find references in advance. 3. No author is an all-rounder, but novel readers are likely to have talents in all fields, so bragging in the air is worse than pretending to be an expert without saying anything. Try not to write about the parts you don't understand. If you must write, just write it down, or patch the settings in advance. After all, the author has the final say on the content of the book, and readers can only choose whether to read it or not. 4. Internet article authors should provide what readers want to see. Excellent authors will satisfy readers while providing content that exceeds expectations. Bad writers write something from their imagination and expect readers to accept it. 5. Stay humble and keep learning. , as an example, provide some specific improvement suggestions for Chapter 3. Dyson Sphere, due to its structure and required amount of material, is theoretically impossible to be realized by a civilization that requires Dyson Sphere energy. Can be changed to a continuously constructed Dyson Cloud. Being based on a large space station will not disrupt the existing plot line. Moreover, the energy produced by the Dyson sphere can theoretically turn all planets into lava planets within an hour. There is no plot conflict like fighting for energy quotas. After changing to a Dyson cloud, the material of the two planets created an incomplete Dyson cloud with limited energy output, and the reason for competing for energy became reasonable. At the same time, energy dispatch stations should not exist in theory. For photovoltaic power generation in space, the power transmission medium is almost impossible to pass through matter. It is more likely to be directional microwaves. It may not even require a power generation board. It directly emits lenses to change the light path. The power generation process is performed by low-Earth orbit photovoltaic power stations in the power-consuming area. So, if I were to write the plot of Chapter 3. Probably from the perspective of material limitations. The sun has infinite energy, why fight for it? GENERATION EQUIPMENT LIMITED. Industrial production, why is the equipment limited? The total amount of matter is limited. Eight billion people piled up can only make up a sphere of less than 1 cubic kilometer. Why is there insufficient material? Because there are many people. There are 800 billion people crammed into a star system. So the story line was formed. The population is exploding and materials are limited. If you develop outward, you cannot fly out of the star. You can only explore the virtual world inward. Keeping virtual worlds running requires a lot of electricity. There are good reasons to grab power. Both sides of the war do not have to be human beings. It can be the maintenance AI of each party group. Can be a 'player' in the virtual world. The ending can be good, with all parties reaching a settlement. Anyway, because of the existence of the virtual world, the population can be controlled immediately. The ending can be bad, the war will get out of control, and we will be destroyed together. It can be hope in despair, war destroyed large populations and virtual worlds. But some people survived. It can be despair in hope. Human beings in the virtual world have not stopped moving forward. The interstellar spacecraft has completed the theoretical verification, but the necessary materials have fallen into the sun in the previous war.

First of all, the first few chapters are really idiotic. The protagonist's own civilization is very technological. Normal people don't need to be trained to know common sense. First, they observe the planet's data in the outer space of the planet. If they need to enter the planet for inspection, they can send small detectors to collect data and information on the spot, secretly invade the alien civilization network, and other high-tech means to understand the social structure of opposite-sex civilizations and assess the degree of danger. Basically, the protagonist does not need to personally explore. The author's writing is very naive and does not reflect the advantages of the protagonist's own advanced civilization. It is estimated that many people will abandon the book in the third golden chapter.

I thought it was a perspective like the Creator from the sky, but it turned out to be a field trip to the animal world.

Comrade, believe in the possibility and courage of human beings. Our ancestors were already transformed from animals to humans when they could pick up the flames feared by all creatures tens of millions of years ago. Even if there are still leaders with narrow vision in the future history, I am willing to believe that the stars will eventually become no longer out of reach due to human courage and curiosity.

[Book Title] Civilization Observation Report [Author] Han Family Fengzhu [Work Status] Serialized [Recommendation Index] 4 stars [Brief Review] The protagonist Mo Yu became a civilization observer and went to other civilizations to investigate simple information. As written in Liu Cixin's short science fiction novel "Poetry Cloud", advanced civilizations have exhausted the energy of the solar system and listed all the poems, but they are unable to retrieve outstanding poems from the collection. The detection center can capture every observable planet in the universe, but the civilizations that exist on it are different, and civilization observers need to go there in person. During his first internship mission, he came to a beautiful planet, but before he could recover, the war started. On the planet with only the last continent left, crazy humans triggered a nuclear explosion again, and Mo Yu and the survivors began a journey of survival. Although the world after the nuclear explosion is filled with despair, there is still a light of hope for mankind. Mo Yu accompanied them through the nuclear winter. The sun's rays shone on the earth again, and Mo Yu left quietly. Every civilization that the mission goes to, there are always people who are reluctant to leave. There is a special indicator in the institute - population quota, which can recruit them into their own civilization, but Mo Yu chose to forget each other in the world... {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}

The differences between different civilizations are smaller than the differences between high school and college. Alien cars also burn gas, right? When you meet a colleague, you actually call him "senpai"? Does the other person still feel that he is being called old? This set of oriental etiquette, let alone advanced alien civilizations, would not work in any other country on earth. The author's imagination is too limited. Barren.

Are you interested in making a side story? It would be a report written by the protagonist. It can be used as the end of a volume.

Except for the system, the level is almost perfect. The only regret is that the protagonist cannot tell them what he knows.

Taking into account the profound game color and inconsistent plot of this article, and most importantly, the fact that the protagonist does not have the scientific literacy and experience required by a higher civilization, it is recommended that the name of this article be changed to "Someone Hire Me to Go Out to Play!" Hehe, it's just~playing~Only a novice can let himself go: Travels in the Universe

Is this a weekly update? The more I watch, the more I feel anxious

Author does not update when readers go

Was the inspiration for the civilization's observatory coming from the stars?

Storage office!

Author, your book is quite good, but if you write it this way, you will soon run out of content to write. The first world you write can end early, but you cannot write the subsequent worlds like this, but have to write them long! For the chapters after the first world, you should at least have more than 80 chapters per story, and for each world story, you can add some themes, such as family, friendship, love, growth, etc. To write in the direction of healing, and rank your investigation second or last! Instead, put what you see, hear and see on the journey first, a separate story!

This update is too slow. It seems that it's not surprising that eunuchs suddenly appear anytime!

I will never let the author become a eunuch 🙂

Like the first one to describe the end of the world, I think it is very well written. It contains the desire of ordinary people for the future, and the calmness of the great towards the coming of death. The spark of mankind is endless. Come on, the author does not want eunuchs (›´ω`‹)

Weekly updates become monthly updates? Don't be lazy, author, where are you waiting?

Chaos is born and the universe opens, but the years pass by like a rainbow. Civilization began to have a raging fire, look at the starry sky under the stars. More than 30,000 years have passed in this world, and the rest of my life will be the same as the ups and downs. It's a pity that pen and paper are short of smoke and rain, and history can only be praised by a few people. The journey has not yet returned to the mortal world, and the future has already come but it is difficult to catch up. Thousands of flowers bloom in summer and turn into ashes under the scorching sun. The cool breeze of golden autumn passes by, and the surface of the still water lake is broken by the blowing. The pear blossoms are in full bloom and winter has arrived, but the cold ice is sharper than a sword. Where can I go back to my hometown without a hometown? The sky is filled with stars and a sea of ​​characters. Life is born and destroyed, and the body changes into dust and has no fields. As time goes by, it can be felt that desolation and prosperity will eventually perish. The fantasy book with ink is a fantasy, and it will always be a fantasy. , Understanding the universe and seeing the vicissitudes of life, observing the light with a staggering step. The stars in the dark night do not recognize the moon, only the sparks light up the sky. Yu Qiu still recalls the sea of ​​civilization, don't panic when chasing the stars and the moon. After stepping back, I realized that the sky and the sea are vast. When I turned around, I still saw the young man.

I'm going to read the book for a while, but I still read it to the end every day, refresh to the last page, and just make a mark when I read it. It's easy for a novice to become addicted to it.

The setting of a civilized observer makes me yearn for it, especially the two chapters of Forever Cloudy and The Only End. Walking around different worlds and meeting different friends feels like a beautiful dream. On the contrary, I didn't like the space station chapter very much. They beat each other back and forth, which made me a little tired after reading too many such plots But this novel Overall it's good, like reading a pastoral poem. A civilization that is on the verge of destruction can regain its future with the help of the protagonist, while a civilization that has already found its future can allow the protagonist to relax and integrate into it and travel happily The author has been updating almost every month. How can I catch up? Are there any other books of this type that you can recommend 😆

"Recommended Copywriting" If you choose to become a civilization observer at the institute, in order to expand the universe sociology database, according to different investigation needs, you will randomly go to the corresponding civilization location. So, when you witness the rise and decline of one brilliant and unique civilization hidden in the deep space - What kind of report will you write on what you see and hear? "Work information" Book title: "Civilization Observation Report" Author: Hanjia Fengzhu Type: Science Fiction·Interstellar Civilization Tags: Interstellar Travel, Space Exploration, Civilization Observation Hard science fiction Number of words: 200,000 words Status: Serial Recommendation index: ★★★☆☆ (3/5) "Brief description of the work" The novel begins with the protagonist Mo Yu successfully applying for the position of civilization observer at the institute. It tells the story of the protagonist Mo Yu going to the observable planets in the universe captured by the detection center, witnessing various civilizations in the universe, and writing a report on them. "Reason for Recommendation" The main plot of the novel is "witnessing and recording cosmic civilization from the perspective of a civilized observer". When reading, you will have a feeling similar to a road trip. There are many unknown civilizations hidden in the universe, waiting for human beings to explore and discover. This process of observing and recording is romantic and somewhat lonely. In the novel, for Mo Yu, the work of a civilization observer is like choosing a public trip. Why don't we, the author and readers, follow the protagonist Mo Yu on a journey of exploring one civilization after another, learning one story after another, and feeling the similarities of happy civilizations and the differences of unfortunate civilizations in the universe? The protagonist Mo Yu in the novel goes deep into various civilizations to witness the desolation and prosperity of the planet, the rise and decline of civilization, and the unknown experience of the birth and death of life. Combined with the author's delicate and spacious narrative style, it accurately expresses the author's inner thought that "the future of mankind lurks in the deep space, and the starlight is shining on the path forward of human civilization." "Recommended Group" ❶Readers who like hard science fiction novels; ❷Readers who like interstellar adventure novels; ❸Readers who like civilization observation novels. "Similar Recommendations" ❶"Group of Pigeons" a milk fish; ❷"Retrospect of God-level Civilization" Manyu. CS; ❸"Four-dimensional Creator" non-singular matrix. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

It's just that there are too few updates. The data feels very bad now. I was bored today and looked at how many books I have on the bookshelf. I was really shocked to see that there were ten unread chapters.

Why hasn't it been updated in three months? Is this book still alive?

I've just tied up with the updates over the past few years. More please.

Is it a monthly update or is it a permanent change...? If you are alive, I will start chasing you.