The Daily Life of Genshin Impact as an Executive

The writing is good, but the sentence needs to be dealt with. The first picture is level 60, and the following is level 19. If the latter 19 levels are adventure levels, it is best to say it. If the first picture is before the subsequent plot, it is best to say the following chapters. And in the game, it should be adventure level 20 to reach 60, level 35 is 70, and levels 40-49 are 80. There is also the word "I" in the first person. It is best to read it when writing. It feels a bit weird and a bit uncomfortable. Also, if the previous one ends in the palace, the next one will simply pick up the previous one. Otherwise, some people may think that the plot jumps too much and makes it difficult to understand.

Weird sentences—— Although it feels pretty good, the sentences don't make sense, the punctuation is missing, etc. I'd better revise the article, right? Looking forward to the follow-up~

I don't know how strong the protagonist is compared to other executives. Also, the hand holding the big sword in Chapter 3 is a little shaky? Is it very low?

First person. . . Farewell