The Ultimate Butterfly Dream

Although no one may read it, I still want to say sorry. I have been learning how to write novels recently, so I have no more manuscripts saved today, and there is only one update.

I read more than 10 chapters, cast three votes, and saw the author in the comment area saying that he wanted to know his opinions, so I will tell you my feelings. Of course, it is just for reference, and I don't mean anything else. The advantage of this book is that the writing style is quite good, but not very good. How should I put it, the words are just words, and there is no writing style. This thing is very mysterious, and the results cannot be seen in the short term. The author has to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง Then there is the story. I think it is good. It can be seen that it has been carefully thought about. The author has also added a lot of his own ideas to it. It can be seen from the subject to the beginning. But, yes, there is always a but for everything. The setting is too cumbersome and the audience for the subject matter is too complex. In fact, these have little to do with the work itself. No one is reading it. I think the settings are too cumbersome, giving people a feeling of seeing flowers in the fog. In fact, the author can lengthen the text and integrate each setting into the story, or focus on the settings, and the author feels that he is neither good nor bad. Of course it's just a personal feeling, don't believe the author entirely, you are the master of your own work. I think everything else is a big problem, like the three golden chapters, the ups and downs, and the foreshadowing. That's a commercial writing model. And fantasy authors also know that there are really few people, so they just need to write their own stories. No matter how commercial they are, fantasy is not as satisfying as there are many writers, so they might as well write their own stories. Finally, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง I will follow up. Finally, don't be a eunuch, I will be sad if you are a eunuch ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )