I Just Want to Quietly Fight Monsters and Level Up

The writing is enjoyable and progresses very quickly, and it looks pretty good later on. Not too poisonous. A woman would hinder my speed in drawing the knife. I like this very much, after all, the heroine and the emotional drama are the hardest hit areas. Let me tell you a few personal feelings about the hidden mission of the disabled old farmer looking for his son. I was a little impatient at the beginning of the mission, but this mission made me remember it. How should I put it, maybe this mission gave me a little bit of identification with the protagonist. Only when you read a book that matches the protagonist's values ​​will you feel involved. I am following Red Moon and The Watcher, and I like them very much. They are stuck in the quagmire but have a bright heart. The justice of family and country in The Watcher. A character can portray many aspects, but as long as there is one that I identify with, it is enough. Maybe I don't like Lu Xin's way of doing things, maybe I don't agree with Xu Qian's fish pond doctrine, but it doesn't affect that I still like them. But if there is a lack of recognition, some shortcomings will be magnified and become poisonous points. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

It feels quite embarrassing to read this book. You can offend someone for no reason. The way it was written a few years ago is very embarrassing now.

It's pretty cool, but bringing a younger sister is something I personally don't like. (Tool person feels too heavy) After all, as an emotional object, it cannot be defined in this way due to blood relationship, but as a supporting role, it does not feel that strong. I feel that in the later stage, the protagonist will train his sister to make money as an alchemist, and the protagonist will make money as a weapon refiner. The follow-up is nothing more than someone taking a fancy to the sister's beauty or ability, wanting to rob her, and then being beaten up by the protagonist as a stepping stone. After all, I have seen many novels where how the sister is dealt with in the end is a problem. What I think is a good operation is that the role of the sister is downplayed. For example, the sister will interact with the brother, but most of the time she is outside the main plot. (Maybe the author didn't intend for the sister to be a point of advancement.) In other places, I can only say that the routine is very cliche. For example, if I was rejected by the narcissistic girl Xiaoqi, I might have thought it was okay before, but now I just feel embarrassed😓. Although I know that people who have been flattered for a long time will feel good about themselves, but it is amplified and makes people think that such rich girls are really NT (I also have rich girls around me, but they have good academic performance and are sensible people. Although they are sometimes willful, they are not that excessive. If you tell her that her behavior is inappropriate, she will admit her mistakes). There is no need to keep emphasizing how delicious my sister's cooking is. I saw 109 leave notes many times, and the protagonist eats... I find it boring... I recommend another way of writing to describe my sister's cooking (although I think it is really unnecessary to write this thing so many times). Just tell the reader once or twice that my sister is very considerate.

Well! The class beauty, the school beauty is so cliche Why write a disgusting plot in which the protagonist fails to court a few days before his rebirth, and is despised when they meet again after rebirth? ? ? Don't tell me the author doesn't know this is a plot to persuade people to quit... Are all authors today so willful? The second chapter is about this kind of plot. I know that this book will contain a lot of vulgar plots from more than ten years ago without looking ahead. I simply have no desire to read... Having said so much, isn't it just to persuade the author to write well? How can you capture the theme? Enter the game to fight monsters and upgrade, and pretend to be a cold boss in life to save the world Don't write about brainless villains who look down on the protagonist, despise pig's feet, and persecute the protagonist for no reason. What kind of genius school beauty, wealthy lady, and good-for-nothing protagonist Our protagonist can start off as ordinary, neither a genius nor a good-for-nothing. I don't know any rich and beautiful girls or school beauty geniuses. Play the game quietly and upgrade, quietly become a strong person, and then suddenly surprise everyone, and turn the tide when the protagonist is needed. Where did so many people look down on and steal women?

The most annoying thing now is that a younger sister or a fat best friend comes to you in this kind of start, and you have them all. Sharp

Not bad, a little wordy in some places, but it doesn't have much impact. Overall it looks pretty good. Personally I don't like this kind of lawless writing in reality, it's easy to collapse. As for the younger sister, it was a bit redundant. I was a little irritated by the relevant scenes, so I skipped them. Also, the pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot is a bit too dense Come on!

I feel like vomiting when I see the school beauty and class beauty. It's just a joke and a childish slap in the face.

You must read this book quickly and not think too hard, otherwise you will be poisoned. Don't ask me why I know it.

I'm so embarrassed after reading Chapter 12, the writing style from ten years ago 😅 The school beauty BB pretends to be a slap in the face with her pig's feet

The author is a primary school monk, go home and study hard, don't waste time doing all these bells and whistles

The writing is very good and I like it 😁

When cooking a bowl of food, it's like seasoning. If you add too much, it will definitely not taste good. Although everyone's taste is different,

The effective content of the first three chapters does not exceed 200 words, and the rest are not interesting. To put it simply, the plot and writing are poor. Not recommended.

There are many self-contradictions. Just now, you said that it would be good to recycle 100 pennies with this knife, but the next second you recycle 120 pennies, you feel that you are at a loss. Also, the protagonist's inner activities are too rich. It is good for you to explain clearly, but too much clarity will give people the feeling of a running account.

The author should work harder and continue to update! I support you! ! !

I would like to ask, is this an online article written by a primary school student?

I thought the book was written several years ago, but it turns out it was only written 20 years ago 😅

The server has just been launched for a month, how come there are so many prefecture-level masters who are better than the protagonist?

This was indeed a good novel ten years ago.

When I think of the beauty of the class and school girl, now her whole length is crooked, I vomit to death! So can you please stop writing about class beauty and school beauty? My previous girlfriend was not the class beauty and the school beauty, but now she is getting more and more beautiful. On the contrary, the class beauty and the school beauty are really vomiting! Little boys don't understand, they will change. Like there won't click there, now you click, you click

Sloppy, corny.

It feels like it was written by someone who has never read a novel. Every chapter is addictive and makes you addicted to the point of poisoning. . . Speechless

The beginning is about parents paying homage to heaven + younger sister + fat guy's best friend + school beauty, all four pieces are included in this brainless piece of writing.

It's pretty good, come on＾0＾~😊

It's not logical at all! It is possible to die or be injured in the game. Then when you play games, you still kill people at every turn.

With this word count and such a small post, was it maliciously deleted? Still, no one cares about this book.

😂What can I say, I only read two chapters. It's okay to have a best friend, but it's better not to write about the school beauty and class beauty, and also add a confession failure. Quite embarrassing

After reading a few chapters, it was a bit bad and the plot was poor.

For future readers, the protagonist's rz ID will not be changed until Chapter 69

This book reminds me of "I just want to play games quietly"