Blazing Gun God

It's well written, but the first few chapters are very familiar, especially the family background and the protagonist's attitude towards his sister and mother... It seems to be exactly the same as the beginning. I hope the protagonist can maintain the current relationship with his mother and sister and not become a licking dog... However, I guess the author will try to ease the relationship with his sister next, and the probability of becoming a licking dog is very high...

Author, can't you be faster? You've written so many chapters for one plot. Isn't that enough?

The protagonist has a brain disease. He knows his genetic skills and virtues, but he doesn't prepare cooked food and evolution fluid in the ring?

There is one more eunuch at the starting point, and there has been no update for two days.

In my personal opinion, the protagonist's level is too slow. Chapter 84 is just the early bronze stage, and he has offended so many powerful people. There is a mastermind behind those people. It is a bit unreasonable. If there is no genetic bullet, if you write that there is a leapfrog in the early stage of bronze and silver, it is a bit exaggerated. Personally, I feel that the protagonist is better in the early stage of silver. He can participate in some big and powerful adventures or events, save people or take revenge, and at least have some self-preservation ability. Even if you write 50 to 80 chapters of silver, you can be forgiven. Everyone No one is a fool, especially in this post-apocalyptic or spiritually resurrected world, and it is very easy to check you. Who is there when the protagonist saves people or goes out to kill people? What are the abilities, levels, strength, names, and where do those people live? They suddenly take out a lot of materials, equipment, etc. It is very simple for really big forces to check you. The author should not forcefully lower the IQ or ignore the writing. I really like reading your book. I hope the author writes better and better, and the plot is a little faster and less poisonous or uncoordinated.

Parents, sisters, etc., It is best not to write if you are inexperienced, it is easy to write something toxic.

It hurts →_→ It's okay if you're just an ordinary bronze person, why are you going to do woolen work when the relationship is so complicated? Also, the team action space equipment is also useless, and the training skills are also half useless. They can only shoot five shots, but you can shoot fifty. If you dare to expose yourself, which of the two parties who are not afraid of breaking your hands will come to you? After all, the boss may not care about this thing, but the younger brother does? Being someone's little brother means you have to work hard for someone else, and you have to fight wherever you are asked to break armor. Even if there are good things, they will be used by the direct descendants first. It is your turn. If you really want to do this, you might as well contact your own mother. After all, she is also your biological mother, and she saved your stepfather's daughter. This favor requires a set of bronze to gold full-matching genes. It is a piece of cake, right? I don't know what the author thought of putting this whole plot on the shelves to hurt the reading experience.

I really want to cry. Do you dare to come back and continue writing? Your uncle ~ don't abandon this book, it's so well written 😭

It's over, eunuch, I wrote it in such a protracted manner so I knew it would be compared sooner or later.

If I had killed that cheap girl with one shot, this book would have been a god. Really, one shot would have eliminated all the blood! One shot to crush all the tricks! One shot to hit the road to platinum!