Time Travel to Before Swallowing

There should be less of this kind of supporting role that lowers your wits, it seems very annoying. And the main female star is this female star. I just exploded on the spot. It's all these years. What kind of virtues do female stars have? Isn't it disgusting?

Randomly changing the settings won't last long, because it's just for the purpose of devouring it. As a result, except for the name, all the basic settings have been completely changed.

See Chapter 7, let's talk about it. Overall, the writing is quite good, and it is a relatively new subject matter among Devouring fandoms. But after all, we are writing fan fiction, so it is best not to change some basic settings randomly. After all, the earth is really small, and it has been 50,000 years since the Fallen Ink Star crashed. Some basic settings are actually in the universe. Now that you have made changes to enter the cosmic era, have you also changed the ones in the universe? We can write our own plot. After all, it's so far in advance, so we can write freely. But just like the bloodline of earthlings, it is just a race created by a mountain guest. The bloodline is very low-level. It seems that there is no awakening (I vaguely remember) and martial power. You can refer to the gains in previous lives, but don't change some of the artistic conception of Swallowed... Generally speaking, some basic settings are a bit flawed. There are still few chapters. I hope the author will follow and read more of Swallowed. It is also helpful for later preparation and overall setting.

There is no book to read, what it's like to try drugs three times and be persuaded to give up! To be honest, readers who read fan fiction basically search for fan fiction online because they love the original works very much. That is to say, some basic settings of the original work are the basis for these readers to follow the humanities. The first poisonous point in this article: bloodline! Not to mention the setting and how to match the plot for the future, once this setting appears, it will inevitably dissuade a wave of people. They read fan fiction just to continue the feeling of the original work, or to make up for some unfinished wishes in the original work, so if they change the basic settings, they will unreasonably abandon the book! Because they love the original work emotionally. If the author feels good about himself and tries to reason with them about how good the new setting is, how exciting it is, how exciting it is, they won't listen and will abandon the book directly. This is also how I felt after five chapters of trying Poison for the first time. Let me talk about the second poisonous point of this article: the heroine. When I saw the star appear on the stage, vaguely running towards the heroine's seat, I tried the poison again and failed for the second time, so I abandoned the book and left. In fan fiction itself, the most outstanding ones are basically the female protagonists, and in the original novels, the female protagonists are basically the ones that the male protagonists will succeed in the end. Therefore, in the fan fiction, try not to strengthen the female protagonist, but downplay it, otherwise it will feel like stealing the show. In addition, the newly added characters often affect the reader's feelings due to a weak sense of substitution, which in turn affects the performance of the work. This can easily make the author lose the desire to write, and finally click the knife, so it is recommended that the author pay attention to his subsequent creations. Finally, let's talk about the poisonous point of being knocked down during the third poison test: the plot setting. After going round and round, I clicked on the recommendation for the third time and tried this book. Before the subscription was released, I really couldn't hold it in anymore and was about to withdraw again. And this time I had a lot to say that I couldn't help but say, at least to make myself comfortable, right? I have been reading online novels for many years, so I just subscribe as much as I want. I have also read a lot of fanfics, and most of them are unavoidable. Because writing fanfics is not only because you really like the original novels, but also for grades? Many of them were good at the beginning, but as soon as they were subscribed, the results were not good, the author's mentality collapsed, and he left shortly after. So I feel like the biggest problem is that it's too casual. That's not to say that it's not good to do as you please, but in order to earn commissions from subscriptions, how much do you really pay? Is there an outline? How many words? Have you thought about the ending? Many fan fiction writers are basically unable to answer these questions, and this article feels the same way. So with such an attitude and dedication, what do you want to get back? What can be exchanged for it? Wake up, except when you were in school, who said that if you pay, you will get the rewards you expect? What's more, ask yourself, how much have you paid?        ，，，？ Isn't it good to write well? Isn't it delicious for us to watch? Wouldn't everyone be happy if I subscribed or even fully subscribed to it? Slipping away...

Collected it, haven't read it yet, I'm keeping it, hoping it won't be a eunuch.

I just put on a layer of skin and borrowed the map and level. How have the other settings been changed?

It's a waste of books, but I can't stand it anymore. The description of the fighting is okay, but it's uncomfortable to watch when you're bored and paddling. Especially the grudges between ghosts and gods that haunt and abuse the Lord. Besides, there are so many written on the earth, what should we do in the future?

I don't know why Mo Xiaowu wrote this. It's so disgusting. It's barking like a wild dog.

This Progress Earth chapter can write a million words! ! !

It's too long, it's nearly 300,000 words, and the base city hasn't been established yet.

Well written, keep up the good work! Only when you write your own meaning and don't stick to the original work can you have a future. It is better to read the original work than to read the original work. The last few Devouring novels are somewhat interesting. The world is so big, I want to see it! Hurry up and finish the Earth chapter! In addition, it is recommended to write less emotional scenes, as Devouring is really not suitable for romance. Furthermore, Devouring the World is a genius. If you are not talented enough, you will not be able to go far. With Pig's Foot's current talent, it feels like he is still close to being a peerless genius. How can he compete with other beings? How to prove the source of chaos? The pig's feet are cheating! It doesn't matter if it's like the Golden Horned Behemoth, it feels a bit low, and I basically won't write it in the later stages.

Anyway, my friend used to be in that industry. The entertainment industry is really, Ouyang, it's okay if you understand, what Huang LEI, Zhang Zifeng, father and daughter are really speechless.

There's a lot of plot about the main character's change of mentality ~ it's not a romance novel

The protagonist should be based on strength. There can be many women, but don't focus on the word count of women. You can learn from the authors of the Three Kingdoms. Women must only write when they are relevant, such as the protagonist using a beauty trap or something. For example, the protagonist trades women for advanced skills and so on.

The protagonist really has a bad fate! Uncomfortable 😭! Withdraw, withdraw.

This book is okay at the beginning but not at the end.

Now I want to know how Pig's Feet is going to return to Earth! ! The golden-horned giant beast is here, but if the pig's feet don't come back, there will be no need to write about it later! ! Pig's feet take too much of the earth's resources. Luo Feng, Hong, Lei Shen and Ben can't grow up! !

This is the first time I've read dozens and dozens of chapters, and I feel like there's no bright spot, such as opening a martial arts gym to teach people on earth martial arts for this ball, and secondly, the main character has no qualifications and is mediocre. After dozens of chapters, it's still so rubbish.

I've seen the latest one, and I feel like it's just average at the beginning. It's exciting after more than a hundred chapters, but I don't recommend skipping chapters. It feels like you can only feel the excitement after it gradually accumulates. Tested for poison, worth a look. Although the plot progress is very slow, it seems exciting and rich. The only shortcoming is that I skipped the early climax of the golden-horned beast and added a lot of content myself. It's innovative, and although it's a little uncomfortable at first, it's great to watch once you get over it. Overall, it's still under the same starry sky, and it feels very immersive and realistic. And the single heroine is not a big star yet, so it feels good. There are adjustments after battle, but the amount of adjustments is a little less. It is recommended to increase some. Finally, I wish you a happy new year and may the author achieve greater success.

The author's writing is a bit messy, and even the relationships between the characters are messy.

The beginning is a bit messy, but I have watched 40% of it, which is not bad. And when it comes to Europe, I feel it is a pity that young Venina is not accepted. The three senses follow the five senses. The anime Venina is quite good.

It's the first time I'm watching Devouring fandom and I'm jumping to watch it, I wish

Is that woman the heroine? Looks disgusting

🤔Although I don't know what to say, I support you and hope that the next book will be better.

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I just paid for it and read Chapter 160, and you told me that the main character is gone 🙂