My Disciples All Have Hidden Identities

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Let's talk about the shortcomings first: 1. The plot does not have a strong main goal, resulting in a lack of motivation for the protagonist. It is basically an accidental incident. Although the patching of the sky later is considered the main line, it is too abrupt. Although there is foreshadowing in the front, the foreshadowing is a little lacking and the tension is not reflected. 2. The map is not expanded, the transition is too fast, and the sect map is not fresh enough to attract people. 3. The emotional description is hasty. There is no excessive emotion in the two lines of Youkun and Qiluo. They have the same attitude from beginning to end. There are no ups and downs and they appear to be dispensable. 4. The presence of the boss-level supporting characters is low. For example, the Lord of the Chaos Sea doesn't even show his face in the entire book, and he has no back-ups. He is more soy sauce than soy sauce. Let's talk about the advantages: 1. It's full of laughs. I got it anyway. It's not pornographic, but the kind of plot laughs that are reasonable and unexpected. The characters' conflicts are funny. It's not just a joke about driving. I like it very much. 2. The short plot is quite enjoyable, and it has a bitch-like temperament in its pretense. 3. The supporting characters of the small characters are three-dimensional, such as Lu Jinhe, Qiu Xindie, Xiao Hongyu, and Chi Zhengyang. They have character flaws, but they are not annoying, and they are even likeable. All in all this is a very interesting work!

The biggest failure is that anyone can join the sect. It feels like picking up stones on the roadside. Yes, when you meet one, you add one to the other. It's a bit too ridiculous.

This is the most rubbish protagonist, I want to kill him halfway through watching it

There are still people who don't know the importance of hybrid rice. Some people think that hybrid rice is dispensable. Without it, the cost of eating will increase at most. Some children think that hybrid rice is not delicious. Everyone eats "Northeast rice" and hybrid rice is exported. Please, please have some cultural common sense. All current rice is hybrid rice. All Northeastern rice is just some of the higher quality hybrid rice. Without hybrid rice, half of the people in China now have to eat tree bark. Not enough to eat, but still want to develop the economy?

After this trip to the small world, the sect leader should know that his disciples are very strong, right? You can't always be a stupid sect leader, after all, he, the time traveler, can't be so stupid. If you keep making the protagonist a fool just to make the book funny, then it would be really meaningless.

One thing that is indispensable without a book is to be scolded. Please, readers, please just curse on this floor.

I didn't see any bright spots, and was extremely selfish, lustful, and blood-sucking. No responsibility at all. And his IQ is extremely low. First of all, the protagonist, Big Brother, thinks that he is a loser, and then he fools him casually, and even scribbles the exercises for him. Doesn't the protagonist know that if he practices the exercises indiscriminately, he will die? Although the author's own father ensured that he wrote 27 words and it evolved into a practice, then you can just take a look at the three words of the Tao Te Ching. The fourth son is an honest man, the only person in the sect who does practical things. He donates elixirs and works in the fields when necessary, so the protagonist just stares at the fourth son plucking wool and the fourth son's elixir. The protagonist accepts the fourth son's elixir with peace of mind, and also deceives others into doing things that he thinks are impossible. The reason is to establish his authority. The third child dragged such a big monster back, as well as the pills. He could tell with his butt that this monster was not simple. How did the third child beat it to death? He thought he had the highest level of cultivation in the sect. If you have the highest level of cultivation, how can you bear to let a kid like Lao San fight such monsters? He doesn't do anything all day long, sucks the blood of his disciples, and still looks like this. The second brother also does nothing just because she is a beauty, and the protagonist doesn't care. Just bully the fourth child. Maybe the protagonist himself is full of majesty because of the wisdom pearl. When I look at it, I just feel that the protagonist is like a monkey. He acts like a monkey in front of a group of big guys and still feels good about himself. I can't find any shining point. Why does the second child only like the protagonist? Isn't the boss and the fourth guy delicious?

1. As the saying goes: A good horse never turns back to eat grass; but as the saying goes: A prodigal son never turns back for gold! 2. As the saying goes: Rabbits don't eat grass beside their nests; but as the saying goes: The first to get the moon is the one closest to the water! 3. As the saying goes: The prime minister's belly can hold a boat; but as the saying goes: It is not a gentleman not to avenge one's hatred! 4. As the saying goes: A true man would rather die than surrender; but as the saying goes: A true man can bend and stretch! 5. As the saying goes: Tell everything you know, and you can tell everything you want; but as the saying goes: Don't talk deeply when you have a casual relationship, silence is golden! 6. As the saying goes: There must be a road before the car reaches the mountain; but as the saying goes: Don't look back until you hit the south wall! 7. As the saying goes: I will not offend others unless they offend me; but as the saying goes: strike first to gain strength, strike later to suffer disaster! 8. As the saying goes: etiquette is light but friendship is important; but as the saying goes: it's not strange if there are many people with courtesy! 9. As the saying goes: A hero has three gangs; but as the saying goes: It is better to rely on yourself than to rely on others! 10. As the saying goes: People go to higher places; but as the saying goes: when you climb high, you fall hard! 11. As the saying goes: a skinny camel is bigger than a horse; but as the saying goes: a plucked phoenix is ​​not as big as a chicken! 12. As the saying goes: It is better to have broken jade than complete tiles; but as the saying goes: if you keep the green hills, you will not be afraid of running out of firewood! 13. As the saying goes: A man cannot be judged by his appearance, and the sea water cannot be measured; but as the saying goes: A man depends on his clothes and a horse depends on his saddle! 14. As the saying goes: The sea of ​​suffering is boundless, but turning back will lead to the shore; but as the saying goes: there is no turning back when you open your bow! 15. As the saying goes: Take a step back and the sky will be brighter; but as the saying goes: When we meet on a narrow road, the brave will win! 16. As the saying goes: With three hundred and sixty skills, you will be the number one scholar; but as the saying goes: everything is inferior, only reading is good! 17. As the saying goes: When a book is used, it will be regretted; but as the saying goes: a scholar is useless! 18. As the saying goes: Money is not everything; but as the saying goes: Money can make everything go round! 19. As the saying goes: when it comes out of the mud, it remains unstained; but as the saying goes: when it is close to vermilion, it is red, and when it is close to ink, it is black. 20. As the saying goes: green is better than blue; but as the saying goes: ginger is still hotter than old! 21. As the saying goes: The younger generation is to be feared; but as the saying goes: a hairless mouth means a weak workmanship! 22. As the saying goes: We are destined to meet each other thousands of miles away; but as the saying goes: enemies will never get together! 23. As the saying goes: In the sky, I wish to be a winged bird, and on the ground, I wish to be a twig; but as the saying goes: Husband and wife are originally birds of the same forest, and they fly separately when disaster strikes! 24. As the saying goes: "Forgive others when you can; but as the saying goes: Let the tiger return to the mountain, there will be endless troubles!" 25. As the saying goes: good will be rewarded with good, evil will be rewarded with evil; but as the saying goes: good people will be bullied by others, and good horses will be ridden by others! 26. As the saying goes: No pain, no gain; but as the saying goes: A man is not rich without windfall, and a horse is not fat without night grass! 27. As the saying goes: Be careful in sailing the ship of ten thousand years; but as the saying goes: The bold will be starved to death, and the timid will starve to death! 28. As the saying goes: If you are petty, you are not a gentleman; but as the saying goes: If you are not poisonous, you are not a husband! 29. As the saying goes: A little impatience will ruin a big plan; but as the saying goes: If you don't steam the steamed buns, you will steam (fight) your tone! 30. As the saying goes: Everyone is for me, and I am for everyone; but as the saying goes: If anyone does not serve himself, he will be destroyed by heaven and earth! 31. As the saying goes: If you don't enter the tiger's den, you won't get the tiger's cubs; but as the saying goes: you can't touch the tiger's butt! 32. As the saying goes: Filial piety comes first among all virtues; but as the saying goes: Loyalty and filial piety cannot have both! 33. As the saying goes: Man can conquer God; but as the saying goes: God's will is hard to disobey. 34. As the saying goes: A wise person doesn't speak secret words, I want to praise you; but as the saying goes: it's useless to want to praise!

The style is good and a bit interesting, especially the part about aluminum alloy that made me laugh to death. The author writes books to make everyone happy. The so-called poison for others is my medicine. Writing is not something that can be done in a day or two. Come on, author, criticize or whatever. If it is appropriate, just ignore it and pretend it doesn't exist. Anyway, I am happy with it. As for those trolls, you are awesome, I will give you the pen. When you write, the great masters all start as newcomers. What if it becomes popular?

LSP(*´｀*)

How about this?

WOC, is it the author who is lacking or Ji Pingsheng who is lacking? Didn't Ji Pingsheng come from time travel? Why didn't Ji Youkun recognize him when he regained his body? The bird turned into a fish, a flying fish. Isn't that Kun? Ji Pingsheng said he had never seen him before. Is he a qualified time traveler?

To be honest, the protagonist is a bit too weak, and he doesn't understand anything, which makes him feel a bit uncomfortable.

I picked up this book in a blind box draw. After reading it, I felt that the early stage was good, the middle stage was good, but why was it so unfinished in the later stage? Black Gouzi only appeared in a few chapters? I just left it alone in the later stage, and the ending was extremely hasty. Is this activity of the QD planning team putting all unfinished novels into a blind box to disgust readers?

Looking at your profile, apart from the eldest disciple, who is your disciple?

Brother! My dear brother will give you two tickets. If you give my dear brother my refined and longer tickets, the tickets are indispensable 👍

I really don't know what to do. After all, there are many pictures of women here, and the author's description is too general, so I just picked the most suitable one (manual funny)

Everyone has updated, why haven't you updated? Also, can't you update one more chapter sometimes? Isn't it okay to update two or three more pictures a month?

There is a saying that goes well, I have already become an immortal and I still talk to you about science? Reason? Strength comes first. I read it and paid for it. I started to feel that the author will write about changes in strength later... Who knew that I would be automatically subscribed all the way? Unexpectedly, I can move mountains and seas, split mountains with one sword, and still listen to the protagonist, this little ant, talk about great principles and science and technology. If you are right Forget it, for example, create exercises and promote exercises for common people to learn, so that they can learn new exercises without qualifications and gain the faith required by the so-called saints later. I also admit that saints are accumulated by faith, but what the hell are you hybrid fish... Are you writing a historical novel? Or is this a hybrid novel?

When I saw the end, I felt a little stuck. A novel, a vast world, from the beginning to the end, it was like walking with this kind person for a lifetime. I don't care about other situations in this novel. The only regret is that the protagonist is lonely and widowed at the end. In fact, most people like a single female protagonist. You put a person (Qiluo) who the readers feel close to and the protagonist are not together in the end. The protagonist has grown up and is alone and widowed. You either don't write a heroine, or you end it with a single heroine. It's really disgusting. I despise you

I just want to ask, what does density have to do with the compatibility of water and fire? Aren't metaphysical methods bad, aren't metaphysical explanations good? Does fire have density? You're still studying chemistry. Didn't your chemistry teacher teach you that fire is a phenomenon that emits light and heat and has no entity?

Main task: Month Ticket 2: [Completed√] Recommendation ticket

After reading the introduction, I decided to leave.

How about fish farming? So few?

Very stupid and ignorant. It feels like he traveled through time before completing nine years of compulsory education.

It's a pity, it's a good idea. Chapter Sixty: Poisonous Hair💀

What a pity. The characters in this work are obviously so well created, but I feel that the author didn't pay enough attention to his work. There are obviously a lot of plots that could be written. I just can't fix the ending. I very much hope that the author can really take his work seriously and continue to pay attention to it.

Apart from anything else, there is a black dog in your sect.

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