I Train Miko in Tokyo

Author, you don't need to care about readers' comments, because basically no novel that cares about readers' comments can be written well. Because now is the world of cool writing, so as long as you don't write something poisonous, your grades will be good, such as abusing a master and sending a girl to lick him, because the title of the book is "Pei" Raise a witch, so the main line of the text should be written around the growth of the witch and the sour daily life of the protagonist and the witches. According to the setting of gods and witches, your book must be a harem novel, and the most illegal thing about harem novels is brainless promotion. Therefore, emotional scenes must be handled well before being promoted. If the emotional scenes are not written well and are pushed out, they must be made up for later. Multiple heroines must not disappear for no reason. Each one must appear with enough personality and distinctness. When writing emotional scenes, you can write them separately, such as what happened with a certain witch and why. How did you fall in love with the protagonist? When the protagonist interacts with the miko on a daily basis, you can refer to Kaguya Shinomiya's inner drama. The personality of each miko must be written well. For example, the yandere will act out the inner drama crazily when a certain heroine sticks to the protagonist. For example, the tsundere will not admit it when talking about the protagonist. But the body is very honest. For example, the poisonous tongue can be used to tease the protagonist and a certain witch when they do something wrong or have daily quarrels. However, it should be noted that the tsundere and the poisonous tongue are basically soft on the inside and strong on the outside. After being pushed, they will be the type of husband and godson. Although bickering and tsundere are inevitable, they will be more caring about others. The above is I have ten years of experience as a reader of fan fiction. If the relationship is not written well, it will definitely lose popularity after a while. The most important thing is to grasp the personality of the heroines. As long as the personalities of the heroines are written well, LSP is indispensable. The reason why many people say that the harem is disgusting is because the author cannot write the personalities and emotional scenes of the heroines well.

Raise your hands if you don't understand, the male protagonist's sense of presence is so low!

Don't have too many heroines, just don't do the same thing 365 days a year.

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I feel that some of the brain circuits in the writing are not enough to react. After defeating and taking off the mask, I am no longer me. The mask is the real body, and then the person runs away. This is very Japanese theater version!

What about the male protagonist's subjective consciousness? Now if you tell me that there is no male protagonist in this drama, I will believe it.

Well, I think it's a bit too compact. A slower pace would be better, otherwise it would be a bit tiring to watch.

After reading dozens of chapters, I can only say that there is a reason why no one reads it. To put it simply, this is a story about an unreliable master leading a few idiots. The writing is okay, but the characters are not so good.

"It would be nice if there were lolita" (I'm not a lolita fan, it's just that the person I like happens to be a lolita)

The writing is good. We are both authors, and I hope we can make progress together!

More than 300 photos and 18 comments are awesome.

The author writes well, come on💪, will there be something about that guy later?

Come on, author! Full reservation. Do you understand?