There’s a Ball in My Head

It feels like the people on the spaceship are cold, even the chainsaws can't cut the alien creatures, and it feels like everyone on the ship has been possessed by intelligence 🤔

Sorry to read Chapter 90, I just can't stand it anymore. The author made flaws in the setting and plot, but it's okay to read it as a beginner's article. First of all, let's look at the setting. The background is the near future world. Under the global federation, there are Dragon Federation, American Federation, Russian Federation, European Federation, and non-federal countries (which can be regarded as the Five Constant Nations), among which the Dragon Federation is the strongest. Secondly, from the 20 chapters, we can see that the author has integrated the Elysian Space and Global Storm into more places to write. Finally, the protagonist is a space station scientist who accidentally gets a black ball in his head. Looking at the setting, the author can write a lot, and the protagonist has a very high starting point. However, there are several flaws here. 1. The Dragon Federation is the strongest. The Mi Federation has the Paradise Space Station (Ministry of Defense). Why doesn't the Dragon Federation have a similar space station? Normally there should be similar or even stronger space stations. Otherwise, there is a knife hanging above your head and no countermeasures? So why is the Dragon Federation the strongest? 2. Space station accident and alien invasion, this should be the highest crisis. In terms of treatment, ① it is best to control the eight claws (freezing, anaerobic, etc., We can't talk about it anymore). ②Secondly kill it (freezing, high temperature, cutting, etc.). ③ Then use the space station to block it. The modular space station can separate it and wait for subsequent processing; if it is not modular, the personnel will evacuate urgently and wait for rescue in space, and the space station will let subsequent professionals handle it. ④Finally, if personnel cannot evacuate, or if the space station personnel have died, the space station will be blocked or temporarily pushed away from the earth, waiting for subsequent processing. Unfortunately, the author chose to run with the plot and gave up ③, a reasonable and effective method. Of course, it may also be because in 1, only the United States has the Bliss Space Station. This is a huge loophole in the setting, so I have to choose ④, and then in order to ensure the survival of the protagonist, I will only make more and more mistakes. 3. The most critical flaw! The black ball in the protagonist's head cannot be explained! In the novel, the black ball greatly increases the protagonist's physical fitness and self-repair ability, allowing him to return to Earth or successfully escape. How to explain this? The protagonist's third type of contact, coupled with the black ball in his head, will inevitably be observed and isolated; it is even reasonable to treat the protagonist as an "infected person" of Ba Zhao. Therefore, the protagonist's identity as a space scientist + third-type contact person + black ball + quick repair ability = the protagonist loses his freedom in the future. The originally very good setting of the protagonist as a space scientist has become the biggest limitation of this book. Because, for human beings as a whole, no one can be too careful; unless the government in the novel has the ability to explain, or is insane. So, I chose to abandon it.

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I suggest the author change the title of the book! The title of this book is not attractive!

After reading about twenty chapters, it seems that the author has combined several science fiction movies. There are a lot of things to write about in this way, but I also need to remind you. I hope the book is more reasonable. Because in movies, in order to highlight a certain characteristic or a certain spirit of the United States, people often become partially incapacitated or lose consciousness at critical moments. I hope a similar situation won't happen!

What's the difference between this and "Alien Awakening"?

The psychological description of the characters is quite clear.

The name of pig's trotters seems confusing, why can't we choose a normal name?

At the beginning, the story of a madman, a wilted man, a captain with no opinion, and a bunch of tool men fighting against alien creatures made me feel a little frustrated 😰, just like Alien, not Prometheus. There was also a sense of narrative about Calabash Boy saving grandpa. The subject matter was broad and difficult to grasp, and it failed to capture my interest at first, which made me feel more and more uncomfortable as I watched it. However, I still have to cheer for you (ง •̀_•́)ง and hope that the follow-up will be better.

Qiu Shuzhen beautiful legs and bumps