The Shadow Troops Starting from Naruto

This book has collapsed. I personally feel that there is no value in reading it. I say goodbye.

Go and overhaul it. The subject matter is still good, but your Hokage dance is a bit too powerful. I haven't finished reading it. Let me tell you the problem I found now. The protagonist was too powerful in the first few chapters. It may also be that you did not clearly explain the source of the protagonist's strength. Furthermore, there is no clear description of the protagonist's strength. For example, is he a genin, a chuunin, or a jounin? This leads to the subsequent rise and fall of the protagonist's strength. Sometimes no one is the protagonist's opponent, and sometimes no one can defeat him. The second thing is that your writing progress is too fast. It's not that you can't progress faster, but that you still need to make some necessary preparations. Author, you can use your current content as an outline and repair it in detail. For example, for example, the protagonist goes to see Naruto doing a mission, and then is educated by an ANBU who suddenly appears, so he understands the changes in chakra. You can remove the paragraph and let the protagonist research and discover it by himself, and it is best not to make it too big.

What are you writing🙂

The subject matter is so good that you write it like a dog. Temari is a genin and the protagonist who knows her information actually said that it is difficult to fight. I think the protagonist has been an ANBU for more than ten years and even Itachi said that he is strong. However, even a genin of Sunagakure Village has to fight for a long time. Then I am afraid that all the people you have killed in these ten years are civilians, right? Besides, you haven't been able to hold a single seal for more than ten years. What kind of brain congestion did Hiruzen Sarutobi have to keep you as an ANBU? It was clearly said that there was no Shadow Corps during the ANBU days, so are you another ruthless person who criticizes ninjutsu with a knife after Emperor Kai's body was kicked out in the ending?

It's nonsense to join Konoha in the first chapter. The protagonist has enough strength to become a noble and a daimyo. You have to be someone else's dog and scheming every day to do it!

The author has no idea what he is writing about. The protagonist is the same age as Naruto and joined ANBU at the age of six. Naruto graduated and became an instructor and defected in the same year. During this period, he taught the Black Shadow Corps how to use ninjutsu. After fighting Kisame, he found that he did not know any ninjutsu. The protagonist's combat power fluctuates from high to low, creating a situation where "no one can beat him". The author's subject matter is okay, but it's a pity that what he wrote is really difficult to describe in one sentence!

The Shadow Corps is not really a physical body, right? The Eight Gate Dunjia opens the chakra in a person's acupuncture points to reach the limit of the physical body. Even if the Shadow Corps has chakra, it is just a collection of chakra similar to a tailed beast. If it were written like this, wouldn't it be Uchiha Madara's invincibility, the Rinnegan of the Rinnegan?

It's a mess, inconsistent, and the protagonists are a bunch of scumbags.

Alas, the subject matter that is well written is not the subject that I like, and there is nothing to read about the subject that I like.

I was put off after reading the first few pictures. What nonsense they were written. If they all joined ANBU and defected, they would be ordinary people who don't know anything.

I'll try my best to keep the world from collapsing next time... Probably

First of all, the death of the Fourth Kazekage was only known to the Suna Ninja after Konoha's collapse plan. As soon as you Naruto graduated, the Suna Ninja knew that the Fourth Kazekage was dead. Secondly, as a former ANBU defector, Konoha will issue bounty missions, but will not communicate with Suna Ninja. Because the protagonist is a half-Kyuubi Jinchuuriki and a former Anbu who defected, it is too late for Konoha to cover up, let alone communicate with other countries? Kakashi had an inexplicable intention to kill the protagonist, and asked them to form a team with ANBU for several years. The protagonist had not yet rebelled against the village, but he had murderous intentions against the protagonist just because he said a few words. Even after White Fang died, Kakashi did not defect and massacre the village. The early stage of Naruto is an intelligence war. As a person who has been in the ANBU for several years and has not died, one person slaughters the Konoha ANBU team and defeats Temari, who has zero intelligence about him and is at the Chunin level, it still takes some effort. Then you are only at the jounin level at best. Then the question is, Naruto only gained special strength when he graduated and joined ANBU at the age of 6. How did he survive the ANBU mission? I won't mention those small bugs. For example, when a new face appears in the Ninja Village, they will usually be monitored, and Temari also teaches Ninjutsu. Besides, Temari is a ninja and is very defensive. It is impossible for ANBU to join unless they know everything. The protagonist said a few words and was about to kill the protagonist. It was also based on this trust situation to join.

Even if the Naruto chapter sucks, how come the levels of Elemental Continent are reset later? You might as well open a new book.

It's a mess, the author's writing skills are too weak

It's boring. I don't even know what I'm writing.

When I saw in the introduction that the black shadow opened eight doors one by one, I didn't want to go in and watch it. The eight doors are for burning blood, so why should the black shadow burn?

I can't understand Chapter 7 😅😅😅😅

I don't understand. Are you sure the author is human?

He joined ANBU at the age of 6 and defected in the same year. After defecting, he found out that he didn't know any ninjutsu and could only dodge when he fought with Kisame Ingakaki. . .

I didn't understand why I wanted to defect from the beginning.

I think the subject matter is good, but Shen Nong said it was extremely poisonous.