I Actually Became a Master of Cultivating Immortals

There are many such books now. They were quite novel when I first read them. Don't go out of your way to read them...

No one? ? ? Then I'll go first, first

It will get better after reading Chapter 91 of the introduction, but I don't know if I can resist it, so I won't read it for now. Can anyone tell me if this book is a harem?

So poisonous. . . . . . . Are you sure there will be people who insist on seeing Chapter 91?????

After looking at the catalog, it looks like a stud.

Give me a small reward to encourage you haha

I've only read two chapters, but I feel like I've read it before

Ah ah ah, the investment contract has been signed, the author, please come on!

I read two of them in total. There are too many descriptions. Most of your novels are just descriptions. If you lose the plot, you are just rubbish. No one will listen to your nonsense. I looked at how many words there are in these two chapters, but there is no progress in the plot, they are all descriptions. You have completely lost the plot, you are garbage. For a novel, you can focus on the plot and describe it a little bit. There is no need to describe so much. A novel is all about description.

I think the author should use less descriptions. Everyone is reading the book, not these various descriptions, which are a lot of nonsense. Just give it a little description and focus on the plot. I want to write a love story, but if you add such useless nonsense, it will become garbage.

To be honest, I didn't think much about it after seeing similar introductions, but I'd better read the new book. I hope it's a little different. After reading the first batch of Dihua books, the new similar ones written in the future feel that they are not innovative. There are also many weak writing skills that forcefully reduce intelligence. I hope the author of this book won't be too stupid, right? ! ?

After reading Chapter 21, I was a little bit addicted. I felt that the protagonist was not a master.

Is there too many third person pronouns? Is there any poisonous king?

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