American Comics: Magical Era

When the protagonist uses a spell, he recites the name of the spell. It would be more exciting to recite a spell instead.

The magic in Jackie Chan??? Some secret techniques are really not enough in the magic world. As for the magicians in Marvel???

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Insert an eye, what if it becomes popular?

There are many protagonists in novels nowadays who don't even believe in our own country. The author actually believes in the United States so much🇺🇸, it's really cool...

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is not good. Many sentences have typos or do not make sense.

It's rare to find a protagonist of the Dharma type! Well written ( ﾟ∀ ﾟ)

Did the author use phonetic coding? , There are too many typos

I just want to complain, is it really okay for you to be exposed to Ross and a group of people like this? Even if you want to use this as a lead to lead out Kama Taj, it is a bit too much. I feel that it is not handled properly. I feel that it would be more reasonable to change the slightly poisonous direction to stealth.

The magic systems of Sorcerer's Apprentice and Harry Potter are not very good. If you have the entire Warcraft, dnd, moon, and other systems that can touch the origin or explode the star, you can't even reach the edge of the single universe.

There were so many typos that I couldn't stand it and slipped away.

I wanted to check it out, but if there are mutants, I'll give it a try.

The writing is pretty good, but I really need to practice my writing. It makes my head spin when I read it. No matter how good the content is, I can't stand it with this writing.

A million dollars worth of wine is ridiculous.

A magician's apprentice? ? ? ? ? The magic there is weak. The magic is activated by its own bioelectricity, and there is no meditation method. The magic of Hogwarts? ? ? ? Are you sure the protagonist is using it? There is no need for magic runes or spell models. It only requires accurate pronunciation and movements to use magic... Does it look like a blood warlock in an online game? There is no meditation method per se, and magic power increases with age. They are also a weak group in terms of combat. Relying on these two unreliable magic inheritances? Hanging out at Marvel? It's a bit difficult.

It is a complete chronicle, obtaining the abilities of each demon, and the main plot from beginning to end. The purpose is not written at all. All actions are to gain power. Some actions even have no purpose. I don't know what you want to do.

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Dissuade him from quitting in the first chapter! The Hulk should have appeared when Tony became Iron Man, which means Betty has been working for several years, but why is the protagonist still in school? What kind of childhood sweethearts are you? Child adopter?