Endless Career Simulator

This book, how should I put it, is good. I want to read it. But I can't stand it. When I started reading it, I thought it was pretty good, even though I skipped some parts of the story. But the story behind it is still attractive to me. Some things are a little taken for granted, thinking everything is too simple. But this is a novel creation, so it's acceptable. But some poisonous spots are too serious. As for this problem, either the setting is not clear, or. The author takes it too much for granted. The biggest problem right now is that little girl. . . It's not that you can't write about daddy. But is this reasonable? After two months together, it will be hard for you to let go. Can that little girl accept you? Don't say it's a memory effect. Then the other characters don't have any family or other feelings? You can be affected by the memory of this ordinary person. That Black Mamba, such a strong man, can't his memory affect you, an ordinary person? So. From the beginning of the setting, the system should be able to protect the protagonist and eliminate the impact after the incident. After all, you will experience more in the future. Are you sure you won't have a split personality? ? ? What the little girl loves and misses in her heart is her father, and you are just a passerby. Even if the protagonist treats her very carefully, he is still treating the little girl well after the task is completed. At least that's how your plot plays out. Think about it with normal thinking. One day, the father you loved very much disappeared. You missed him very much, and suddenly one day. Come back alone in your father's skin. Can you take it well? Are you thinking about anything? And you mentioned before that you don't want an intelligent system. So now I'm sending someone over to you? It's too deliberate. And if I am arranged to be your sister, I won't study the national conditions in the novel. But such a little girl is forced by memory. Are they really living, natural people? You definitely don't feel like one that matches your hobbies and satisfies your imagination. And the tailor-made Loli doll? Instead of giving people a warm feeling, it became a failure. I wrote so much above, not to criticize this book, but because I suddenly saw a good book, and I was happy when I read it, and suddenly... I don't know what the author's outline will be like, maybe there will be a turning point. Or a foreshadowing. If so, I hope the author will show the early settings. After giving it to someone, he was thoughtful. Then the author clicked it. It gives people a feeling of enlightenment. Rather than the setting contradicting the author's plot. Before the author could write it, it had a large number of readers. Finally, I hope the author will write well. After all, in terms of the overall plot, it is a good book.

Generally speaking, the copy is well written, but the real life writing is not good. Xuewu makes me a little embarrassed. Are there any extraordinary elements in your reality? Didn't you please stop writing about Chuanwuxing? Chuan Wu has been proven to be a lie so many times. Until now, no one who has Chuan Wu can stand up and say that I accept the challenge and I can fight. There is also editing into animation. Can you arrange for the protagonist to learn on his own? Do you know how difficult it is to make animation? You can accomplish things by yourself that even a large team of 100 people can't do. Are you sure this can provide you with cover in reality? A little research will tell you that you have a problem. It seems that the details are not carefully copied.

The reality is too poisonous. The Tiger Village and Chuanwu have appeared. It is also said that Chuanwu is a killing skill. So, if you can't kill people with free blows in fighting?

Just export the protagonist's own experience through animation and put it online. Not to mention the many times in the future, extract some unique things and combine them with animation. Wouldn't it be directly exposed? And are top-notch animations, soundtracks, etc. So easy to get? Let's be realistic, it's too much to take for granted. How can it be so embarrassing for a team to make an animated movie for several years?

It's not like the nanny Wen wants a hammer daughter? ,

The subject matter is very good, but why must a daughter be included?

I originally thought it was about time travel, so I browsed through the catalog, and found out that I had written a hundred chapters in one world, and when it came out, I became a boss. I felt like I was going to collapse.

The career simulation is okay, don't make it look like a skill simulator. Every career is like a new journey in life. Live every day well and work hard

What is the modern chapter about, forcibly inserting an emotional scene?

I don't want to see an extra sister

Let me ask you a question. In this volume of Jinyiwei, your divination turned out to be completely useless... After reading several chapters, it turned out that your skills were useless at all.

Come on. Very good concepts and ideas. It is the type I like to read. Did the inspiration come from the book Identity System? I forgot the details. The real world is good, but it is difficult. Be careful to become a poisonous point. Continue to support.

Summary after reading the first copy of this book. Personal opinion (preference, not representative of the public). The most exciting part of this dungeon is actually the first short paragraph where he raises the gun at the end and then returns. From this, it can be seen that the protagonist has a relatively positive outlook on life for more than 20 years, and has a bottom line in life. Although he also experienced an ideological struggle over money in the end, he still maintained it. The second paragraph is okay, but I am speechless about the protagonist giving up his teammates. I wonder if Black Mamba has given up on his teammates in his past mercenary career, and whether he has asked his teammates to die. If so, then why do his teammates still believe in Black Mamba so much, and escort Black Mamba to escape knowing that he is going to die? He is not short of money (mentioned in the article), and he does not have the deep love of his teammates. Why? Doubt. As for the third paragraph, the overall plot is fight, fight, fight, and the details can be said to be a mess. The author should be referring to the setting of the Hulk. However, why can Dahua's agents act so unscrupulously in other countries (with global attention)? Why can the electromagnetic knife be used without being controlled by the mecha? Could it be that this electromagnetic knife is specially equipped with a small nuclear reactor? Why does the mecha that can fly have no long-range weapons? Even using an electromagnetic gun pile can kill the protagonist (repairing the body is It requires energy, syringes cannot break defenses, and kinetic energy guns are ineffective, right?), Why is it that when an entire country's military and secret services are pursuing the protagonist with all their strength, agents from other countries can still frequently contact the protagonist? This is too funny. In a high-tech world like mechas, so many companies, dark forces, national departments, and the military still have such big loopholes? Speechless. Finally, let's talk about the protagonist's character. At the end of the first paragraph, it can be seen that the three views are relatively positive and he can keep the bottom line. The beginning of the second paragraph is okay, but the last paragraph is simply hard to explain. The teammates are willing to die for their own purposes (the teammates here are old comrades when they were mercenaries). I can't understand it. Anyway, it's the protagonist who starts to break through the bottom line. The third paragraph is a typical American movie-style revenge, and it is carried forward in the end. Anyway, no matter whether it has caused harm to the protagonist or not, just one point, if you are in this department, I will kill everyone. If you are in this army, I will kill everyone in the army. If you are in this country, I will kill everyone in this country. It is no different from today's immortality novels. If one person offends the protagonist, he will destroy the whole family and the whole country. If one person on this planet offends the protagonist, he will destroy the entire planet. This three views! Speechless, a common problem after reading too many novels about cultivating immortals. I won't comment on the plot in reality. In the dungeon, there is such a killing spree and the mixed sexual experience of betraying teammates. In reality, you don't know how to relax and cultivate your body and mind, and you still practice, practice, practice every day. Haha, all mental illness is mild.

Why do you want this daughter? Feeling boring

Persistence, there is still too little, many people are unwilling to nibble on seedlings

Alas, the subject matter is very good, but the main plot is not to my liking. Why do you all like to write about martial arts? Isn't it a good idea to write more about technology? Prosthetics, implants, body modification, high-frequency samurai swords, and high-tech tanks are so cool.

Classic martial arts killing skills, actively screening readers

I'm convinced. Is this girl really disgusting or something like that? She asked her parents to forcefully penetrate her? The protagonist is already so capable, wouldn't it be okay to find someone who is capable, good-looking, and has a better personality? This character is really disgusting.

I saw the movie but didn't read it. It's a pity. It's a good book.

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I looked at a few pictures and suddenly remembered that I had seen them. . It seems that a little girl was born, and then I gave up, but depending on whether the comment author will change it again, maybe I can still take a look?

One chapter is too long, over 100 chapters... Emmm I feel like I can't keep up.

Very interesting, I really like this plot description. However, my daughter hopes that the emotional scenes will be more foreshadowed so that the feelings can accumulate.

I want to see young knights, drunken monks, and drunken poets. . The last one should be the poet, after all, the emperor can't get off the ship even if he calls for it.

The author worked hard, but the writing is too messy

Author Jun, the Jingshifang has started to select people, you know~~~